Who Designed This Underworld Dungeon!

Advantages: Relatively stable updates, one update per day unless there are special circumstances. Most of the time, the plot arrangement is good, and there is no deliberately disgusting plot. The main plot is mainly to build a dungeon based on soul-based works, and add some branch plots from other works to see how the adventurers suffer in the dungeon. The author is very smart and does not touch the content of the game that is controversial and prone to quarrels. The author is willing to listen to readers' comments and questions. A typical example is that in the early stage of the plot, a clone was created to leave the dungeon. At that time, readers raised the opinion that those who came to see this subject came to see the dungeon, and running out would put the cart before the horse. The author did listen, and the clone was later used to observe the outside world and guide the behavior of adventurers. In April, some readers felt that the Theocracy chapter was too long, and now they are speeding up preparations to end this chapter. Disadvantages: The pacing is slightly poor. This is actually about listening to advice. If the pacing of the Teaching Kingdom chapter is well controlled, no readers will feel that the plot is too slow. There is a lack of sensitivity in some parts that may cause controversy. For example, there is a plot in the middle that requires fighting against demons. Everyone guessed that the Black Knight was going to be involved. However, the author felt that everyone guessed it was too vulgar, so he had an idea and changed it to a "fantasy version of Ultramarines".

This is a light novel. I found it very relaxing and interesting to read, but it is just a light novel. The following are several characteristics of this book. Some people think it is an advantage, and some people think it is a disadvantage ① This book is a novel that can be read easily ② This book does not discuss serious themes and topics ③ The protagonist summoned by the protagonist of this book is an ACG monster/character. ④The background and details of this book are not realistic and hard-core enough. The above are some of the characteristics I have summarized. If it comes to me personally, I think this book is very comfortable to read. I probably read the content posted by other book friends. The core point of view that they think this book is not good-looking is that they think the world it depicts is "not realistic enough". However, after one point of view, this is actually just right for me. The pressure in life has been really high recently, and I just wanted to read some lighter novels to relax myself. Similar works to "Building Dungeons", there is recently the latest masterpiece "The Demon King is Unfathomable" by the author who wrote "This game is too real, right?". I couldn't read that book after more than ten chapters, because I could feel that there must be a heavy background behind it, and it was too uh... In short, so far, I am still quite optimistic about this book.

If you want to develop your power, add the Skaven from the medieval Warhammer, who can organize armies and advance technology. In addition, the Skaven power dungeon cannot be the private property of the nobles, but you need to beware of foreign forces. If you add medieval green skins, the above-ground kingdom needs to place a standing army at the entrance of the dungeon. It is necessary to prevent the green skins from being overwhelmed at any time, and it is necessary to go down to the dungeon to deal with the green skin warriors.

The story line of the dungeon is quite interesting. It would be better if adventurers could be integrated into it to lead to new plots, such as Wilder.

It's actually very simple. Author, I read the first dozens of chapters, and I feel that there is a book that is very similar to God Simulator. Not only the content is similar, but the connotation in it is very consistent, such as construction, behind the scenes, group portraits, growth, and development. As for the early group portrait feeling, I feel that it is really necessary to read that book (the growth of villains, inventions and creations, etc.), And it feels really right. But I heard that it will become a small team later, and I can't grasp the group portrait, but I haven't seen it yet. I'll take a look when the time comes.

Don't forget, the traditional disabled wife in the Soul series, and the brother-in-law who pretends to be a man and woman.

In fact, the author should first make a pure resource map, put some chocolate-like rocks in it, fruit with jelly pulp, mushrooms that taste and look like steaks, which have no special effects, but have strange appearance and good taste. The main thing is a resource that is not available outside. This can attract a large number of ordinary people and adventurers to enter, and then arrange a boss that is difficult but has zero profit after killing to prevent losses caused by over-exploitation of resources. In this way, your reputation will spread better than if you can produce weapons with skills.

Author, let me give you a suggestion. If you really want to sew various elements, you have to make sure that your core painting style cannot be distorted. If you use Soul Traveling's painting style as the core, you must either use your core to be compatible with those elements, or use these elements to set off your core. To be honest, Soul Traveling and Warhammer really don't match...

The first part is okay, I haven't played Soul yet and I enjoyed watching it. The later part becomes more and more integrated, and the introduction becomes less and less. By default, readers have played everything. Some people who have played it will smile knowingly when they see it, but some people can't understand it at all.

I read this novel for no other reason than to read Hidetaka Miyazaki's little story, and how people from another world are made furious by Hidetaka Miyazaki's little ingenuity🤣

On the one hand, it is the development of the dungeon. 1. The flow of people increased too fast. In the second chapter, there was only a group of people in the dungeon. At the end of the third chapter, it grew to 400 people. There is no introduction to why the number of people increased in the middle. Anyway, it just increased. The impression is that it has developed but there is no real sense. 2. The strength of the dungeon develops too fast. The first wave of adventurers received a bunch of monsters such as Goblins and Minotaurs. Although it is written at the end of Chapter 3 that more monster types can be unlocked, from Peashooters to Furnace Knights, to be honest, there are Minotaurs at the beginning, which are the backbone of the dungeon power no matter what fantasy works. In the first three chapters of the game, all the memes like the poisonous pool, the invisible bridge, the big iron ball, etc., How long can the remaining Hidetaka Miyazaki memes last? It's not clear whether the author's positioning of this book is to practice pen writing. If not, I suggest the author rewrite the previous chapters before the passion for writing is exhausted. At least, don't consume so much inspiration and memes at the beginning. If you continue, I feel that the Miyazaki memes will be exhausted in about 100,000 words.

If there are any problems, I will work hard to correct them, and everyone can point them out!

I saw it online, the natural sun

Please note that this is not an official setting. I just summarized the opinions that are more recognized by the public to make it easier for people who are not familiar with the Souls series to understand the story. Sunshine Soul Corresponding race: Protoss Owner: Gwen => Share: White Dragon Hiss, Little Londe Four Kings Features: Can control thunder and lightning, and the core is light, and the power of light represents time in the world view. Some people believe that lightning can break dragon scales because it contains the power of time, breaking the immortal shell of ancient dragons that have no concept of time. What's more interesting is that Gwen himself cannot directly control light. Instead, it is his daughter Felenor who has the most intuitive control of time, and therefore becomes the real core of the time seal in Ring Seal City. Some conspiracy theories believe that Gwen uses his daughter as a human pillar and never thought of actually bringing her back. Soul of Death Corresponding race: Dead Owner: Nite Features: It brings the concept of death, brings an end to all life, and defines what life is like in the Age of Fire. Nite himself was most likely a giant before he became the first deceased, so he later built a giant cemetery to serve as his own kingdom of death. Therefore, as long as death exists among all living beings in the world, his power and faith will continue to flow. Some people believe that the most powerful of the king souls obtained initially is the soul of death, because the king soul in Nite's hand in the opening CG of the first generation is also the largest. Unfortunately, due to the emergence of the curse of the undead, the world suddenly lacked death, which in turn weakened Nite's power, and some people even began to want to steal the power of death. The spiritual tomb of the second generation Fanite and the underground cemetery of the third generation Casas are both considered to be an attempt to reorganize and recreate the death process represented by Nite. Soul of Chaos Corresponding race: Witch Clan, Chaos Demon Owner: Witch of Izaris Features: The Chaos Fire produced is actually lava, and melting stone into flowing magma represents change. At the same time, Chaos also has the potential concept of evolving life, giving birth to new races, evolution, etc. The witch family tried to make their own version of the Initial Fire, but as a result, the Chaos Fire exploded out of control and their children became Chaos Demons and Alien Monsters. The Witch herself and her two daughters directly became a hotbed of Chaos, leaving only two normal people. The demon clan that lost its hotbed of Chaos after the Soul of Chaos was removed in the first generation was destined to perish. According to the background of the story, it has been continuously hunted by various forces. Until the third generation, almost only the smoke lake group at the bottom of the underground cemetery remained, as well as the demon princes and injured demons who ran to the gathering place for unknown reasons. Dark Soul Corresponding Race: Humanity Owner: Manus => All Humans Characteristics: Considered to correspond to the Sunshine Soul, it is the weakest among the many king souls at the beginning. The human nature flowing out of the undead actually flows out the dark soul, and the fact that human nature is equal to the dark soul was admitted by Hidetaka Miyazaki in an interview. Most people believe that if Dark Souls grows stronger, the Abyss will eventually descend and the Dark Ages will be born, including the forces led by Rondall in the game who follow the thoughts of the dark serpent Kass. On the surface, dark souls reside in human blood. Therefore, one of the methods used by the three generations to deal with the undead and prevent them from resurrecting is bloodletting. The relevant prop evidence can be inferred from the double swords of the tombkeepers in the Netherworld Church. A large amount of blood containing dark souls accumulated in the three generations of the Nether Cathedral eventually formed the Nether, and new humanoid creatures began to be born in the gathering place in the distant future. All their moves are directly based on darkness and show the quality of having weight. Therefore, a few people think that the hidden concepts are terminal concepts such as gravity/black holes. In addition, there is currently no direct evidence that the dark soul is the direct cause of the emergence of the undead. Instead, this incident may be the final result of the gods trying to deal with the dark souls possessed by humans. When the first human king exploded the Dark Soul and shared it with all mankind, it was likely that the first group of people to come into contact with it were the kings of Ring Seal City. Therefore, the enfeoffment of Ring Seal City seemed to be a reward on the surface, but in fact it was a large-scale house arrest. A more conspiratorial view is that Gwen used the time power of Felianor to try to "refine" the Dark Soul, so as to eradicate the advent of the Dark Age. The core of the evidence lies in the egg held in Felenor's hand. Although it is basically impossible to tell what it is in the game, if you look at the illustrations in the set set, you can see through comparison that the inside of the egg is actually the same smelting furnace as Ludos who refined souls for us in the third generation. Then it is very likely that Ring Seal City is essentially a very long and large-scale soul refining ceremony carried out by the power of Felenor's time. In fact, when Grandpa Gale came to Huanyin City, the blood in the bodies of the dwarf kings had indeed dried up. Contacting the fact that the Dark Soul is lodged in human blood on the surface, it can be seen that Gwen's plan is almost successful. Ludos was dragged to pass the fire. In addition to strengthening his soul through soul refining to reach a certain level, there may also be a layer of reason why he discovered some taboos that cannot be unearthed and was silenced. In other words, the soul refining technology using the smelting furnace will be considered taboo, because the truth about Ring Seal City needs to be covered up.

When will the old characters return? There are too many new characters and it's a bit fragmented And I feel that the pace of the Soul 1 copy now is a bit slow 😐

Finally, I have written about such a big scene. Before, I wrote about the inherent game plot. It is equivalent to watching the text version of the game again. It is easy to get bored. This Ta La Tarn is something I wrote myself, so the viewing effect is much better.

I just saw Stonewell. Why are there no descriptions from the public? There is no guide group to post some guides. The public's perspective is amazed and commented, and there is suffering. There is only the perspective of Yuffie. The dungeon without the public feels like a fantasy novel from more than ten years ago. The protagonist is a copy, and there is no sense of satisfaction. I said before It feels very interesting to read because it has the perspective of the people. Everyone participates and suffers. Everyone is exploring, sharing information with each other, showing off in the tavern when they get some good things, and the union integrates information release. These daily life are what I think this book is really interesting. If it is a guide from the perspective of the protagonist, then why not just play the game? There has been no public participation, it has always been the same few people, and I feel that I have lost a lot of excitement and the sense of public participation. Starting from the previous Sullivan and Arno City, I felt that there was no sense of the daily life of the people. The description began to focus on the first perspective of a certain character, and then the public was no longer written, and there was no tavern bragging. In the first few pictures, everyone went off to explore, and the daily life of the people was gone. I don't know whether the plot needs to be written this way, or because the revision does not write it this way. Personally, I feel it is a lot worse.

I spent more than a week re-reading the latest chapter from the first chapter, and I would like to talk about how I think the plot can be continued later. The Dragon of Fury can now suppress hunger through the creatures in the Gourmet Paradise area to avoid the curse from happening again. In other words, the creatures headed by the prisoners of Gourmet can further introduce stronger and higher-level creatures. As a side line to adjust the high-quality ingredients in this area, they basically rely on random rewards, and few people actually succeed in getting them. The Sky𡷊 family has successfully made up for the lack of combat effectiveness of the middle and high-level food hunters, and can expand the area. There is no need to go to the world of gourmet food, there are already many things to write about in the human world. The two-legged dragon and the four-legged dragon can continue to be used to promote the ancient dragon of the monster hunter, or a group of relatively powerful monster hunter creatures at the taboo and taboo levels. As for the hunters themselves, there is the second prince Lanle to advance the plot. They can gradually add some past notes or even afterimages to write about the memories of past hunts they found. You can also introduce the game's badge achievements, whether it is to add some enhancements or simply symbolize glory, it is also very useful, and some of the official plots are also very legendary. I recommend mentioning the first-generation hunter's single-player hunting of a horned dragon at the beginning. Although the later expansion of combat power caused this matter to have a low gold content, this scene itself was proof of the hero. The Starry Sky Evil God is relatively close to the genocide in nature, which results in the advancement of the plot being deeply tied to the Blood Curse. On the other hand, it is difficult to advance the plot accordingly. You can consider what areas can be further connected to the description. For example, many fans believe that the Deep Sea Age is the age of the Blood Curse, although this does not actually exist. The main body of Dark Souls is best dealt with, as long as new maps are added regularly to advance. However, it is important to note that there are many places where one must revisit the first and second parts to stimulate emotions, otherwise it will be difficult to move with many sad plots. Old Touhou, I think it is enough to mention the DLC area as an introduction. It is not officially open for the time being. At least you must defeat the president before talking about it. Moreover, when you officially fight Baylor later, you must first watch Dragon God before you can feel it. Otherwise, it will be very strange to skip and fight Baylor directly. As for the current batch of adventurers, the lines mentioned by the main adventurers have basically been filled in. However, the fact that Luluwo mentioned that all his family members were captured by a certain king has not yet been explained. Therefore, when new maps or new work-themed dungeons are released in the future, this matter can be explained. In addition, the plot of Birth House has not mentioned where to run to, so it can be mentioned as an expansion map. Finally, there is the demon clan, which is now divided into the high priest seeking the abyss and the other one who is infected by the epileptic fire. Speaking of these two money, I think we can first advance what the fire of chaos of the Izalis Witch and theirs is, and then extend it to what is the difference between their demon clan and the current demon clan. On this basis, let's see if we can develop a new map to advance to the Western Continent, because it has nothing to do with the current plot. If we get the dungeons there, we can even directly launch the theme of a new work. That's all I can think of for now.

You know the author, I came to the comment section just to watch the story about Xiao Gao who attacked his vaginal testicles.

Brother, do you think that the more you sew, the wider the audience will be? You think it's a union, but it's actually an intersection.

I originally thought that the prototype of the Elf Tribe was based on the Crimson Demon Tribe, but that sense of instantaneity came to my mind. Unexpectedly, it was still too abstract. Could it be that the Axis Cult was also mixed in? Yes, this kind of world view full of game design just needs more Suqing-style adventurers to be interesting 😏

Recently, more maps have been opened than before, but the pace of the plot has actually slowed down, and there are no explosive points. Specifically, the number of characters appearing has increased, but there are no memorable points. Some old characters have simply disappeared. (It can be said that if the number of characters had not increased, the plot of the last hundred chapters could be condensed into one paragraph) In short, I feel that there is nothing substantial to watch recently except for complaints and various jokes. I personally hope that the main plot can be promoted more, or the protagonist can be more holy. For someone like me who just keeps reading, I feel that there are dozens of chapters without saying anything, and for those who follow it daily, I just watch it for fun. Although this does not mean that Lezi's complaining about joyful writing style is not good, but I personally feel that it is really deviating from the original direction.

The protagonist picked up a dangerous straight sword while shopping "Hey, what is this"🤔 I waved it unfamiliarly twice, and accidentally discovered that I can cancel the back swing😊 I haven't practiced it a few times, so I canceled it. But it's getting faster😨 Suddenly it dawned on me😲 It turns out you are always with me😭 I once canceled the memory, now I canceled the memory cancellation, in the backyard, your king is back, my ring will never lose😡

Personally, I feel that the biggest problem with this book is that the author opens too many threads and is too complicated. Too much stitching is not necessarily a good thing. The author must learn to make trade-offs, such as Pokémon, the humiliation of food, plots outside the dungeon, and dark souls. Only write a little of each line before opening the next one. As a result, the current perception is very subtle.

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I have read more than two hundred chapters and am ready to start reading 🙂

The emotional drama in the early stage made me burst into tears. Will there be more later?

It's so good bro 😭 I've been reading it for five days in a row. I only read this book when I'm eating and sleeping. Please update it soon bro.

Are the souls behind all the black soul magic rings? Have you added a new copy of the game?

Will there be a separate venue for the ancient dragon species in "Monster Hunter" in the future? Is it a plot like Gu Long Challenge?