Warhammer: the Game Starts with a Broken Half-Immortal

You can set up a pocket universe and set up a casting planet to sell some small goods. You have already thought of the name of the planet, so let's call it Yiwu. If you ask people from the empire to transport resources for you to make something for a fee, let's call the factory Foxconn.

If you have any opinions about the plot or the crocodile, you can feel free to speak here. The crocodile will not talk back, the crocodile will only shed tears.

I saw a bunch of people saying that Warhammer novels can't have female protagonists. Kai Xiaobao doesn't have a female protagonist. Is it good to have a harem? Don't listen to their nonsense

Judging from the latest chapter so far, it is possible that the protagonist dreamed of it in the ICU, but it's not bad.

I don't know why the author kept seducing me, even though he knew I was a free control, he changed his avatar to that damn crocodile! ! ! The author must have wanted his father's big monthly ticket to be stuffed into the little saucy book.

Most of the Warhammer texts are written around the Primarch, or they are directly about the Primarch. Eternal suffering, deep hatred, the same thing thousands of times. That is to say, Notepad is a little better than this one, but Notepad is for enthusiasts, and this one starts from the bottom. It has a feeling of the interstellar era, and there are also farming factors.

As the title says, the writing is okay, the writing and plot rhythm are okay, there are no major flaws, just a few minor issues, if I look at it personally. The following are the advantages that I personally feel. 1. In terms of style, it is a mainstream narrative style with Warhammer elements, not the original Warhammer style. This is a good point, because Warhammer style is too tiring to read. One of the books in my collection is Warhammer style. It is really well written, but because I am too tired to read it, it has been on the bookshelf untouched. It seems that it has been lying there for two or three years, and I have not turned a page. 2. The non-Long Aotian, funny, inconsistent, and conflicting character settings are also praised. I don't understand the thoughts of some authors. They have already worn Warhammer and are still thinking about those two or two things. All kinds of frivolous things come up casually, which are not consistent and are disgusting. Some good settings are wasted. 3. Plot design. The plot design that I have seen so far is smooth and there is no problem. It just feels a little delayed, but it does not affect me. Warhammer, I am used to the delayed writing. The following are the uncomfortable points, not poisonous points, just uncomfortable to watch personally: 1. There is no city, and the protagonist's performance is a bit too plain. However, considering that the veteran Gate and another character have had a life with the protagonist, it is not a big problem. 2. The power of self-revelation. Let's not talk about whether the self-revelation that I stole ¼ of a god's power will be believed. Let's just talk about the sense of substitution that was completely destroyed by this self-revelation. I always take the role of the protagonist when reading books. This sudden self-revelation gave me an inexplicable feeling. First of all, this power is for grabs. Not only is Wa Banxian looking for the protagonist, but other gods and subspace beings may also be looking for the protagonist. Tell the other two people so straightforwardly that if something unexpected happens, the protagonist will explode. Of course, these two characters can also be designed to follow the protagonist all the time without any accidents. But in total, they only have three golden fingers, Ouroboros, White Light Subspace Essence, and Wa Banxian's ¼ power. Isn't it a bit too hasty to expose it so easily? And among them, Ouroboros is somewhat useful at the beginning. The white light subspace is currently only an illumination technique, mainly relying on the power of Wa Banxian. But it seems that the protagonist has not studied it until now, but it has just begun. I will wait and see about this later. If there are changes, I will add it. 3. The author seems to like the writing technique of narration. Just for the plot of the first dozen chapters, narration has been inserted several times, and there is also a paragraph from time to time in the back. It is not impossible, but the words that often appear are very strange, and the reading speed is too fast and the reading speed will be interrupted. Overall, it is a promising book. If the current level does not drop, it should be a high-quality book after it is written (it depends entirely on the support of other colleagues) I hope the author will write better and better, not to be a eunuch, not to collapse. 2026.3.24 (The latest chapter so far, Chapter 48: Constrictor Type I Plasma Gun) In addition, the author's crocodile looks quite pleasing to the eye and quite cute.

Why does the author like crocodiles so much

Have you ever been to the Warhammer universe? I just scribbled some things, taking it for granted Come to Terra, I will give you the Golden Throne, and I will write as the Emperor for a few days

I just want to say that I found this in reality! Again, this is the real world!

Post a high-definition photo of this crocodile

Crocodile, when will Crocodile resume double updates? Alas, I miss the diligent crocodile

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What type of existence is the protagonist? Greaser or Astartes? Let Shen Nong interpret it and decide whether to read it or not.

You don't even type a leave request, do you? Little crocodile, I see your butt is itchy.

Although it was not so good at the beginning, but after watching the follow-up, the feeling started... I like the mental state of the protagonist very much in the latest progress. He maintains passion and has a certain truly crazy attitude, but he does not fall into his own world view like Don Quixote, and he is also aware of something wrong with himself.

🐊District again. Short, alligator, update quickly, otherwise we will capture it👞

I just saw it on the shelves, but I have to throw some cold water first. In the name of the Emperor, if this is such a good-looking book, the author's Jiji will be tied into two knots that cannot be untied for the rest of his life.

Today's update is Crocodile. It's already past nine o'clock.

😭😭😭I cried, what about you?

It turns out that the ultimate power of the subspace dump truck is the subspace dung suction machine. It turns out that it sucked out the white light too fast🤔 I realized that as long as the protagonist absorbs the power of chaos, the subspace will return to peace. The key protagonist is not able to ascend to the gods. The 40k natives have won a big win. I just don't know if the protagonist's capacity is enough 😃

Alligator, if the communication device developed by Lao Qin in the future can be called "big dog barking", or if the material annihilation weapon developed based on greed to dissolve divinity can be called "big dog chewing"

By the way, do you want to give all your hundred Thunder Warriors a second transformation surgery? For example, similar to the twice-reinforced Shattered Hound Ender Redhal, my brother has performed another Astartes surgery on the basis of the Thunder Warrior. The latter's combat power can be used without armor-piercing hands to fully equip the Custodes Warden Veteran, and he can even chase dozens of rebel Astartes in reverse. Now the Astartes even have Primaris technology. If it can be modified, I don't know how powerful the effect will be.

People, people, people, people, people, people, people, people, people

You are already on the list, can you stand up?

🐊, What are you doing, sleeping? Catch him and code him hard. Drill 🐊, fight 🐊.

Bro, it's rare for the protagonist to enter the farming stage now. Can he give his troops some body enhancement and transformation projects?😁

6K updates a day is still too few and not enough to watch.

A crocodile that doesn't actively update is a gecko