Xiangjiang Fengyun: Zhizhi Is King

I have read dozens of chapters, and the writing is okay. The writing is smooth but there are some flaws in the wording. The Hong Kong comprehensive text's local dialect is not good enough (the author is not from Guangdong and Guangxi). Also, the description of the promotion ceremony in the middle is too long, and it is obviously too numeral.

It has characters, a plot, and is of a very high standard. It's worth watching.

The author's writing is really good, short and easy to understand. I recommend a novel of the same type. Please save it and take a look. It's really too busy now

I understand you being an undercover police officer, I understand you spending money to grab the top spot, I understand you focusing on business, and I understand you supporting your brothers by pocketing money. I don't understand the idea of ​​setting up a boxer bar with a lot of space, huge investment, and intrigues to attract investment. If it succeeds, I might as well quit doing it when I see the profits. Where's the money? That's not what a kid doing money-spreading does, then who are you doing serious business for?

There are no other big problems except that the protagonist's name is too inconsistent.

The time traveled at the beginning of the novel was 1978. Now I have written more than a thousand chapters and it is only May 1979. Every mountain is as high as the next. You are the peak at the end of the waterway.

Compress the content, don't go over everything in detail, it really affects your mood when you read it.

There are some places that should be written in detail, but they are briefly touched upon. For example, Xiu Xiren and Ah Cong, your confidant, can't you learn more about my little brother's past in detail? No need to pass the test? Then the two villains Jiu Niuniang and Hei Ah Hu are too procrastinating and unhappy. As the boss, shouldn't you be simple and neat in dealing with the 25 boys? If you delay for too long, your reputation will no longer be heard. The young and Dangerous boys rely on their reputation to make a living. If you are no longer famous, who will obey you?

Anyone can come and step on someone, let out a little anger and be done with it. Everyone has a great background and is very capable. The reason why he is an undercover agent cannot be particularly explosive. He has always been on the receiving end of anger, and now his life is at risk. . . Slowly I subscribe, and it feels weirder and weirder. .

The protagonist's younger brother is the real protagonist. The protagonist keeps wiping his butt, which really affects the perception.

The succinctness is to the extreme, and is Spinach East the protagonist?

It's only been a month since you did so many things. It's ridiculous. A few million dollars a month is better than a system without a system. The flow rate at this time is

① At present, AI writing is generally about this length for a chapter of about 2,000 yuan ② A lot of professional-related interpretations will be filled in the article, which AI writing is very good at. ③The plot is incoherent and the character relationship is constantly changed and the logic is somewhat confusing ④The author's current mentality should be purely to make money. I think it's not worth spending money now.

The content could really be compressed a bit. If I write it this way, I think I can write it until the end of the Year of the Monkey and the Horse.

After Ruan Wen appeared, he wrote nothing but

Hong Kong TV series, I am back again!

Brother, what you write is an online novel, not a masterpiece 😅😅😅

It's almost three million words. Has the protagonist become a double bonus?

The book is a good book, but there are too many things to do in one year

Such a good book has so few reviews. No wonder the starting point is for readers under the age of 8.

First, this book is the most Hong Kong-style and local novel I have ever read. The descriptions of Hongmen and Young and Dangerous are so interesting that I can hardly read other similar novels after reading it. The intrigues and battles of wits in business wars are so interesting, and the descriptions of Young and Dangerous and Chao Lao are very real; The second is to mention some shortcomings, which are sometimes too obvious: the length is too long, the author's notes are not enough, and occasionally there are inconsistencies (for example, Sister Do, it is clear that she is dead in the previous article, and the policeman has been identified, but later it is written as missing; such as Professor, in the previous article It is clearly written that he is the leader of the number gang and cheated the number gang leader's rebellious son-in-law, and later changed it to Song Sheng's cheap son-in-law; third, Bai Fengxian of the intelligence department has discovered that A is a rebellious guy, and later selectively forgets to get together with A to take the blame), all of the above, But in general, the flaws outweigh the flaws; The third is that some plots are abrupt and lack foreshadowing (such as Brother Sheng's ability as a top mercenary and the inexplicable addition of Xi Ren) The fourth is that some overly cumbersome detailed descriptions are suspected of hydrology. The above, personal feelings, and overall evaluation are all rare Hong Kong comprehensive articles. The author has been included in my list of good authors, and I will definitely follow my future articles.

Even if Young and Dangerous works at a fast pace, it's impossible to calculate it by the hour.

The writing is very good. Why is it limited and free? I'm giving you some monthly votes. Write well and don't finish it badly.

The update speed is too slow. Now it's either a typhoon or a high temperature baking the earth. Don't go out for a walk if you have nothing to do. It's too dangerous. You have to protect your health for the readers. It's so safe to code at home. I'm blowing on the air conditioner and drinking some wine. I'm thinking about everything. I'm turning my thoughts into articles. I will make money just sitting down and gain both fame and fortune. Do you see this author burning up? I'm sorry if I don't code more than two chapters. Come on, author.

It's actually exempt 😅, write it well. Vote for you By the way, ask the male protagonist what he did in his previous life.

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You are doing something crazy now, you update once a day, didn't you just talk about updating a lot?

{"NickName":"chaizixian04","UserId":175208388}Okay, here comes it.