Old Things in Hong Kong

If you write about indigenous people, the readership is inherently smaller than that of a traveler.

It's well written but I almost feel tired when I read it.

I saw the latest one, namely Chapter 79. Apart from the fact that the idea of ​​holding an Asian film festival in this era is a bit unrealistic, everything else is fine. Currently, the biggest puzzle is that the author cannot explain why the protagonist can gamble on boxing matches. It's okay to start a boxing match, but it's really not okay to start gambling for the protagonist at this stage! To be honest, as far as the protagonist is concerned, he is his younger brother in front of the Jockey Club. A place as big as a palm. The money used by the people at the bottom for entertainment and gambling is fixed. If you make more, the Jockey Club will make less. Can people allow you to gamble? In addition, the same is true for Macau. There is no such thing as a boxing match that brings about a tourism boom at this time. There is also the problem of the TV station. It is enough for the protagonist to have 40+ shares in the end, and more is a waste. The backer will get 20, and the in-laws will get 10. It is best to give the rest to two companies, one to give 5 to Lijia or Hang Seng He, and the other to HSBC 15+. Generally speaking, it is best to divide it like this.

Cut it again and hit the street

There is no shortage of things to watch. A slave carrying his master's back is jumping around. Is it interesting? If you don't hurry up, you will die. I think there are many book friends who feel the same as me. Please hurry up and kill me. Otherwise, I don't know how many people will run away.

The writing is relaxed and graceful, which is more beautiful than Huashe

This kind of writing usually lasts about two hundred chapters. The stall is very big, and the back is full of journals. There is a hammer on the left and a hammer on the right. I do all kinds of business and take care of everything at once.

Is the author planning to write a dual protagonist? Multiple fields of view? If not, what does the protagonist's brother do? Don't have so many dramatic conflicts, it will be annoying to watch too much.

The writing is very good, but the advancement speed is too slow, and the cool points haven't come out yet.

There are so few. When will you write more?

The introduction is pretty good, but the content is written like shit.

A bit like Portland Street Fat Dragon😍

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The author actually secretly published a new book. The writing is good and the writing is really good. It's just that the protagonist is not a time traveler, there is a lack of sense of immersion, and the results are not very good. Can the author persist until the book is completed with 1 million words?

At this time, the protagonist's starting point is a bit high! I hope the timeline will be longer. Don't make money so fast.

It's really well written! This is how the world of martial arts is, with ups and downs.

The author's knowledge and level are very high, and the content is very detailed, but the writing is not interesting enough, the conflicts are not intense enough, and the protagonist is not interesting enough, so there may not be many readers who are interested in reading. Generally speaking, if you write about business articles that emerged after 1982, more people may read them. Few people understand earlier history, and the audience will be much smaller.

What a shame, it's a very good book.

To be honest, I don't really want to read this book, or I'm not interested in reading it. The reason why I have fully subscribed so far is to replenish my subscription for your last book, but that's the end of it. Looking forward to the author's next book.

It's getting more and more boring. So far, I feel that the new book is not as good as the previous Le Ge book. That book was actually quite good, but it ended too hastily.

This book is good, but unfortunately it is too obscure, and the comparison with that period of history is only marginal.

The plot at the end is pretty good, but the beginning of the book isn't very good, and it's very abrupt to jump right into the plot without explaining anything, so it's not attractive and won't retain people. If I were writing the beginning of a book, I would directly write about the defeat, the death of parents, the retreat (eggs are not put in one basket), and the betrayal of his subordinates. In this way, I will directly abuse the protagonist at the beginning, introduce the foreshadowing, and then meet the heroine, and give a small cheat (it doesn't take much to know the future changes of Xiangjiang), so that at least it can have a good start.