True Immortal of Longevity: Reborn from a Fake Golden Core

The last pseudo-Dan master was Chen Ping of Haoyuhai 😭

As a newbie, I'm determined to write traditional fantasy novels. I hope all readers will offer their criticism and suggestions. With everyone's help, I hope to improve and persevere. I also hope all readers are well. Everyone needs to have dreams in life, so let's start with this fantasy novel!

I don't really like the protagonist using Gu worms or anything like that. Not only is it disgusting to watch, but it also gives off a rather sinister vibe. As the leader of a sect, I feel I should be dignified and upright, and less sinister.

Here are some suggestions. 1. Regarding the Baocheng Sect, the author states that it comprises several families and sects, among other forces. However, the author doesn't explicitly state whether these forces are considered internal factions or subordinate forces. Currently, it's unclear what the author's intention is.

If a fake elixir makes someone a powerful being, then wouldn't a true golden elixir be hailed as the Dao Ancestor?

It's well-written. I hope the author doesn't abandon the story. It's rare to see a protagonist who isn't a saint, has intelligence, and doesn't just collect women he sees.

Does the protagonist have such a handsome face that he doesn't know how to live off a woman?

Hello author, I personally don't quite understand your setting. Are you going to remain the sect leader forever? How will you obtain high-level resources? Rather than that, I'd like to see someone use this sect to cultivate when they're weak, and then abandon it to join a larger sect when resources become scarce, similar to the Haoyu True Immortal setting.

Author, you can spend days brainstorming, just don't disappear!

Having read through the entire book so far, the plot and character development are excellent, with no major flaws overall. However, there is one point worth noting: the protagonist enters the city seeking guidance from a mortal woman. Her daily reward is one spirit stone, theoretically amounting to 365 spirit stones per year, and 10,000 spirit stones over 30 years.