True Immortal of Longevity: Reborn from a Fake Golden Core

The last fake elixir master was Hao Yuhai and Chen Ping😭

Xiaomeng is a newbie writing about traditional fairy tales. I hope all readers will criticize and correct me. I hope that with your help, I can improve and persevere. I also hope that all the readers are well. There is always a dream in life, so let's start with this fairy tale novel!

I don't really like what the protagonist is doing, not only does it look disgusting, but it also gives people a rather sinister feel. As the leader of a sect, I feel that I should be more dignified, more upright, and less sinister.

Make some suggestions. 1. Regarding the Baocheng Sect, the author said that the sect consists of several sects and many other forces. However, the author did not clearly express whether these forces are considered internal sects or affiliated forces. At present, it is not clear what the author thinks. Just judging from the author's text, I think it is biased towards affiliated forces, because if it is counted as a faction within the sect, there are too many factions and does not conform to the internal force composition of a sect. However, if it is counted as an affiliated force, then if the protagonist has obtained the Li family relics, the relics or treasures found by following the clues cannot be counted. As a treasure of the Baocheng Sect, because there is a difference between the affiliated forces and the Shangzong, just like the Qingyun Sect and its affiliated forces, the inheritance of the techniques is different, so the author needs to have a clear explanation. I have an idea, that is, if it is counted as an affiliated force, it can be said that the Shangzong has declined. The affiliated forces gathered together to attack, and the Baocheng Sect dissipated in internal strife, and each family and each sect obtained the treasures left behind. However, the previous description of the several branches of the Baocheng Sect's forces needs to be revised, and the Baocheng Sect itself is added to show the distinction between the upper sect and the affiliated sect. Of course, this is only a suggestion. 2. As for the background of the protagonist's fake elixir, in fact, in the early stage, the protagonist can indeed rely on his accumulation of skills, secrets, calmness and extensive knowledge as a fake elixir monk in his previous life. However, it should be noted that the fake elixir is not omnipotent. In the final analysis, the fake elixir is only higher than the peak of foundation building but weak. Due to the existence of golden elixirs, for real golden elixir monks, the realm of fake elixirs is not something to be afraid of, so fake elixirs cannot be counted as people who have stepped into the circle of golden elixirs. The higher the protagonist's realm, the more limited the help that the accumulation of fake elixirs in the previous life can provide. The protagonist still has to rely on his own efforts in the future. 3. The Demon Mausoleum is the tomb of a known fourth-order demon. No matter whether it was before or now, there has never been a monk in the realm of Yuanying. It is strange that the legacy of the fourth-order demon king is also attractive to Yuanying monks, unless the protagonist is in a remote place and there are no monks with such a high level of cultivation. 4. As for the map of the entire world of cultivating immortals, there are only a few counties in the book so far, and the highest realm is no more than Golden Core. So where is the protagonist? The continent here is limited and cannot cultivate Nascent Soul monks. There is still some dangerous place that separates this place from other places. The author cannot explain it. It is limited to a few counties, and you must have a good grasp of the geography of the entire world of immortality. You can then expand the map that has been constructed appropriately, and gradually inform readers through various methods of the position of this place relative to the entire world of immortality, and what the forces are elsewhere. However, it should not be too abrupt or a general science popularization.

Is the fake elixir powerful? Then Jin Dan still doesn't respect Taoist ancestors?

The writing is good. I hope the author doesn't want eunuchs. It's rare to see a book with a protagonist who is not a virgin, has an IQ, and won't accept a woman at the sight of a woman.

Doesn't the protagonist know how to eat soft food even if he has a good face?

Hello, author, I personally don't quite understand your setting. Are you going to be the leader all the time? How do you get high-level resources? Compared with this, I want to see you use this sect to practice when you are young. When the resources are not enough, abandon this sect and join a big sect. It is similar to the setting of Haoyu True Immortal. I agree with the setting of the protagonist. Since rebirth, you must kill decisively and guard a sect, and it is a small sect. There are not many benefits. High-level resources can only be obtained from large sects.

Author, it's okay for you to conceive for a few days. Don't lose contact.

Looking at the entire book so far, the storyline and character descriptions in our store are all top-notch, and there are no major flaws overall. But there is still something to note. The protagonist goes to the city to find a mortal woman to lead the way. One day's reward is one spirit stone. According to theory, one year's income is 365 spirit stones, and 30 years' income is 10,000 spirit stones. The protagonist's sect owns 10% of the shares in Fangshi, and the income in 30 years is sold for 120,000 spirit stones. You must know that the income from this place is the main income of the sect. To support hundreds of immortal cultivators in the whole sect, your income as a mortal woman is more than one-twelfth of the entire sect's income. This is completely unjustifiable. In fact, many authors make this little poison. I hope the author of this book will try to avoid this little poison in the future.