The Heavens: Since Soldier Boy

There is nothing sinister about this book, but it is too bland. It's like saying that the protagonist is steady, and he will do some risky things for mission rewards. Call the protagonist radical, but he still follows the plot without spoiling it. It just doesn't attract the interest of people who like to watch the steady flow, like the senior brother Tai Jian, who hides behind numerous paper figures and calculates various possibilities of failure. It also won't attract people who like radical streams, like the blocky version of Minecraft. The setting in Minecraft will cause the water level to reach the position of the sword, flooding the world. Or in the Chainsaw Man world, just turn the bad woman into a fertility monster or something, completely destroying the way the plot is written. Or some readers like big scenes and collisions of settings, such as apocalypse predictions, where the chessboard collapses, the utopia falls, the chariot of fate screams, and the furnace of the soul longs for relief. I just feel a little unsure of what kind of readers you want to attract. The advantage I can see so far is that you update a lot, 6,000 words.

Soldier boys really have a strong taste for older women over 60.

Is the protagonist too obsessed with his original body? For example, if you die and you are reincarnated into Lao Wang's house next door, and then you grow up and fall in love with your wife from your previous life, then is it the child of Lao Wang next door who has an affair with you or you yourself?

He is the protagonist of a puppet again. There is no punishment for the mission, so he must follow the mission. He also engages in imbecile plots all day long. He insists on joining the seven-person group and overpowering the protagonist👍👍👍

I want to cure mental illness, but also want to maintain Chinese values ​​​​and my personality is very annoying.

😥No, brother, you have traveled through time, why don't you choose the third option? ? ? You can protect yourself even if you travel to a powerful world. You said you won't kill innocent people indiscriminately, but it doesn't matter if they are strangers. Your life is more important than others. This is mental illness, and she's still working as a nanny in Resident Evil

I still can't write without the original plot, so I have to join in the fun.

I really couldn't understand the name of the main character when I was listening to the book. Li Ben kept shouting, as if little Japan was the protagonist, and he couldn't get used to it! !

The dialogue is too dramatic. Obviously you are traveling through the Western film and television world, but in the end, the dialogues of the people inside are all in Chinese style.

I feel like I want to drive but don't dare to drive for fear of not being able to hold it.

The improvement in combat power has been a bit slow recently, and I have basically been in a state of frustration. Either I can't upgrade, or I can't get a treasure chest, or after getting new abilities, my strength has not improved substantially. Anyway, I have been beaten by accident, bullying the old, weak, sick, and disabled, and I have been beaten when I met someone with some ability.

I feel that the protagonist is often frustrated. He can travel through the world. Don't just focus on the plot. Besides, I feel that there are many things that the protagonist cannot do. The protagonist grows up so slowly.

There is nothing sinister except that the protagonist is a eunuch 😐😐😐

Is it true? It's awesome, and it's like playing a single-player game. I subscribed to the last 14 chapters at once. After reading it, it's like I haven't read it. Why write about Silent Hill when the subject matter is good? It's all wrong.

Why don't you clean the protagonist's strength in the base? At the very least, it's not fun to kill the second or fifth Eternals, or to wait for Cersei's skills to evolve before using treasure chests to unlock skills 🙂

Destiny, fate, what kind of destiny can be modified? This thing only works on living people. Why don't you see those who don't deserve to die but were killed by the protagonist being resurrected? In short, it's bullshit.

Plagiarism, absolute plagiarism! Don't refute it yet, don't accept refutation, the book I read elsewhere has more words than yours, but the content is the same. Now you update dozens or hundreds of chapters to prove yourself and see who plagiarized whom. In fact, everyone still believes in you, but your words are unfounded. Why don't you update dozens or hundreds of chapters first and then write three thousand chapters? It's easy to say anything if you have evidence, but we still believe you.

If the author could be more imaginative and a little more adventurous, it might be a masterpiece, but it's a pity.

You say that you know the plot of the dungeon, but you often show that you don't understand anything, and you are also afraid that the Lord of the Rings will be destroyed in advance. You are afraid that you don't know that Middle-earth was created by Eru, and the big movement is destiny. If the Lord of the Rings is so easy to be destroyed, what is the meaning of the big movement?

Although it is a basic rule of the novel that you must vomit for the first time you kill someone, it can actually be resolved by stacking buffs. I have also seen the protagonist feel like vomiting even though he was thousands of miles away when borrowing a knife to kill someone. People in the world call it the first killing method. The object that the protagonist kills directly or indirectly for the first time will have a telepathic connection with the protagonist at the same time of death, causing the protagonist to want to vomit.

Why do I feel so holy when reading the novel? There is no villain at all.

I don't know when the so-called soul-traveling paradox will be solved. I keep mentioning it again and again. It's really annoying.

The author's quality has dropped a bit since it was put on the shelves. There are a lot of typos.

I can watch it, but it's a bit boring. To me, Zhutianliu is a collision of different systems.

The beginning of the game really felt like it was a bit overwhelming. Soldier Boy's laser nuclear blast lost most of his strength, and his performance was really rubbish.

When the Motherland was around, they could basically achieve full control. Why did the male protagonist, a soldier boy, jump out of various cow ghost shrines? The clones that came out later were basically cloned 1:1 according to the Motherland. Then why didn't they send out these clones when the Motherland lost control?

More than 900,000 words and more than 400 chapters

Is there any drama with the old lady? (Forcing the Truth)

Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?

What can I say? I didn't fully order it, but I just saw it and thought it was okay.