American Comics: It's Over, I'm Surrounded by Father-Worriers!

This book gives me the impression that it is a group portrait novel centered on the protagonist, and it is characterized by the sparks of collision between characters in different works that everyone loves to see. The most important and tandem setting in the article is that the protagonist raises his children as a father. The biggest problem lies here. From the perspective of character growth, only Clark can clearly see the problems encountered from the acceptance needs of a young child to the intimacy needs of pre-adolescence, learn new abilities (growth) after solving them, and the subsequent changes in behavior. Compared with the people from Clark's motherland, he is much thinner. Although the setting is about reincarnation and rebirth with some past memories, and a lot of pen and ink is spent, there is very little growth seen in him. Compared with a child who is gradually growing, he is more like an adult who has temporarily lost his memory. In the context of the text, he seems not vivid enough and stiff. And this problem is more serious and flat with Star-Lord and Loki, and it doesn't even play a big role in promoting the plot. The content of this book so far can be said to be "fun > plot". It can be expected that as the protagonist ages, the number of children increases and the protagonist's strength grows. Major events in the original plot occur, and the quantity and quality of the fun inevitably decline. The focus turns to the protagonist's influence on the world. "Father Worried" exists in name only and becomes a common American comic fan with poor reputation. (Already starting to show signs) Finally, a little suggestion. Since the setting is that "father-worried people" grow up again as babies, why not reduce the influence of their previous lives and treat them as real children? What is the difference between John, who grew up in a harmonious family accompanied by his father, elders and brothers, and the people from the motherland who were blackened in his previous life? What is the difference between children who are cared for by parents and brothers and children who are born and raised in a laboratory? Will John be more of a native, a family man or more of a Superman? Loki in Asgard likes to play pranks because he is not accepted and has no friends. Is the same true for Loki in the small town farm? They have different births and different growth environments. If they are still the same as their previous lives, what's the point?

It's good-looking, and it's rare that it didn't deviate from the main plot by starting a harem 😆

So far, up to chapter 68, Shen Nong thinks it looks good. Appearances include the family hero Azu, the informant Clark, and the poor boy Wayne They all really have special skills, and they even surprise people with their teeth 🙂

It was quite interesting to watch at first, and the characters were very fleshed out. More and more children were adopted later, and their faces began to change, and their presence was not as strong as that of Clark and Azu at the beginning.

In recent years, American comic novels in the book list have all kinds of problems and poisons. They either forcefully describe Chinese thinking and actions, or write American comics with the idea of ​​cultivating immortals. What's more, they force a harem to think about various characters that are completely illogical and self-consistent. Others are idiots, NPCs, and the protagonist himself is smart. All kinds of writing methods... However, the elements written by the author of this book are integrated with the flavor of American comics. The Chinese perspective of the protagonist is combined with the story style of the United States. The latest chapters are quite smooth ~ it is quite comfortable to read. I have three children in my family who are 6, 4, and 2 years old respectively, so I quite appreciate the length of the author's article on how to teach children to have the correct outlook on life. It is difficult to teach naughty children, but how do you have the patience to communicate with your children, explain the principles of the world, and establish correct values? It is a test of the parents' wisdom. What I feel from the author's article is the most powerful magic "love" in the world Whether it is Chinese education or American education, the core values ​​are right Full of love for children, coupled with superheroes who are always topical, or the so-called chivalrous spirit of the Chinese ~ these elements ~ this book is really good and I am really looking forward to the follow-up. The current chapters should give people the feeling that they are getting better. I hope the author can make the plot in the future have these elements that are very good for the book, and have more ups and downs and climaxes. Occasionally foreshadowing makes people want to guess, occasionally highlights are exciting, and sometimes daily life makes us feel The warmth of the world, I believe that the author's literary background will be able to do it (do you expect too much? Haha) The above support the author can this book reach 4 million words~~~haha Come on, author

I have some objections to the original version of Azu. He lacks love, is sensitive, and the environment he grew up in will not allow him to be a good person. Maybe he doesn't know where his future is headed. He longs for recognition and respect. Azu in this novel, his dreams, or the uneasiness caused by Azu's encounter in another world deeply affects him. The author's writing skills are very good, giving the characters a soul. Among all the fanfics I have read, this is undoubtedly the best.

The protagonist goes and gets Diana, the Wonder Woman, and you don't have to worry about the child's subsequent upbringing. They are all immortals, and they are also mysterious rich women.

Looking at it so far I want to ask the author if you are sober? ? ? What has been written since the appearance of Darkseid's daughter? ? Especially Watchmen was really unbearable at first. The strength of the protagonist did not increase at all, and then the strength of the protagonist and his children was increased. Then the protagonist was there to watch, just watch it! ! Am I here to see the main character being deflated? ? ? Dr. Manhattan, I think your writing is awesome, but look at what you wrote? The protagonist is just talking nonsense, which gives me the feeling that the protagonist is fighting against someone weaker than him, and the person stronger than him is just pretending to be cool but not taking action. Why is he stronger than the protagonist? Because how long has it been since his strength increased? ! Can't we just say it? ! ! What I wanted to see was a river of blood, and then watch Dachao go to Mao Zi to persuade the protagonist to say that. I was really convinced! ! Is the protagonist a sissy? ! So cowardly? How many chapters have you been frustrated with? Are you still talking about national sovereignty and all that? Are you really treating your family as ordinary people? ? Why didn't I see you being so respectful before? ? ? In comics, no hero respects superheroes so much! ! I've also read a lot of Marvel and DC fanfics, but this is the first time I've seen such a frustrated protagonist. Dr. Manhattan doesn't dare to take action, and Darkseid's daughter needs to be persuaded to win. Author, you can continue to enjoy yourself like this.

I feel it's okay. Finally, there is a book about a son. I see that many of the protagonists are daughters, and it doesn't matter if they write about daughters. Moreover, many of them have such thoughts about daughters, and say that it is daughters who have thoughts about the protagonist. It's really disgusting. It feels like it taints the word father and taints the family relationship.

The reader's voice was too sharp, right? I read the beginning in the early hours of the morning and complained about the author treating Superman's adoptive parents as tools, and the protagonist completely excluded Martha Kent and his wife from Superman's growth process. I deleted it before the 10th hour was up? It's okay to control comments in the comment section.

It feels like a female-channeled child-rearing story that leans towards the daily light novel plot, with some male-channeled elements added in. If you are looking for a battle plot, you can leave it.

I feel sick when I see Hermione, why do I have to join the protagonist group. Can't it just be a small transparent supporting role? The author must have lusted after Hermione back then.

Although the title of the book is very abstract, it has an unexpectedly pure American comic flavor. The changes in Azu are also very comfortable to watch. Although he is still grumpy and arrogant, the protagonist's teachings have made him more like the growing superhero in American TV series. Especially at the end of today, I didn't defeat my fear, but my courage exceeded my fear, and I suddenly emerged as a gradually mature superhero.

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Horus is enough of a father 🤓🤞

The author should not believe those who say that the protagonist will be given a heroine or a few women to adjust the situation. Most people who read this book want to read the story between the protagonist and his adopted child. At this time, if you suddenly give a so-called mother, you can see whether the child recognizes it or not, and whether the reader recognizes it. The majority are always silent, and they have been writing until now. If you follow the latest chapter, your fan level will be at least "Deacon", but you did not write a female protagonist. Among the paying readers, there are not many "Deacon" and above levels who want women. Everyone wants to see you advance the plot. If you really create a female protagonist or play with several women, maybe those who read the book silently without commenting will run away without saying a word.

The author's mastery of dialogue is superb, and the characters are vividly created through these dialogues, and the characters' personalities are very similar to those in the original work. What's even more difficult is that these characters are not static. The characters have grown more or less with the help of time, and this growth trajectory is also reasonable. My conclusion is that this is a very good online novel, and it is very attractive to me so far.

In the latest chapter, the author does not use Azu's trident, and lets Azu fight like a reckless man, which is purely weakening. The protagonist, the Dream God, is trapped in a dream that goes against the will of heaven and is just a fish out of luck. The Indian girl is bewildered and trapped in a dream again. In a final twist, the latest chapter returns to the original plot. In this copy of yours, delete the plot of the protagonist group, and the rest is exactly the same as the anime. It has not changed at all, and it is getting lazier. This book was still read by many people before, but now the comment section has not increased at all.

This book is quite interesting, but there are too many jokes, and the depth of the interaction between the protagonist and the children is too shallow. Too many popular memes can easily lead to fatigue after reading them. Parent-child interaction seems innocuous. I recommend the author to watch these movies for inspiration. I also summarized it. A Bronx Story: Father helps people not to lose themselves, father makes people see their true nature clearly. Like father, like son: Blood relationship is not the strongest bond, long-term companionship is. Butterfly: When looking for what you need most, look around you. Heidi and Grandpa: Don't be afraid that you are different from others, have the courage to be yourself Fly high with you: Let your children find what they want to do, do it bravely, and let your children fly high. When happiness knocks on the door: support each other and realize dreams That person, that mountain, that dog: inheritance and understanding Perfect world: an imperfect perfect world, giving perfect love to the person you love. Children are probably growing up and mature. They can no longer write like children. It's time to write something in-depth

But don't imitate the magic controllers in the heavens next door and take advantage of Nezha's popularity! It looks disgusting to add Eastern mythology to the world view of a Japanese manga.

Obviously, only Azu was well written in the early stage. Although he was a bit bad, but his only wish was to inherit the farm, he was clearly written very well. As a result, there were more and more children, and the characters became more and more flat, all heading towards the direction of a father-in-law. And then he had inexplicable affairs with so many female characters, even Lana who was less than ten years old. It was as if everyone had to revolve around the protagonist, and the world would not revolve without the protagonist.

More than 600 chapters later, the protagonist forcibly loses his intelligence (he has already obtained some of the essence of American comics, for example, he pushed the planet away from others before he was ahead, but now he is knocked down by a car). Occasionally there are some plots that don't match up (minor problem). When you open a harem, open it boldly. Don't be timid, like a eunuch. If you want to take in a daughter, take in a daughter. Don't be ambiguous between your lover and your daughter. It's a bit disgusting. Have super vision but no clairvoyance, have super hearing but can only hear the size of a town..., Alas!

Personally, I feel that this is the best American comic I have read in the past year. Azu, Clark, and the new Bruce are all growing up. The protagonist's logic is clear, his passion is stable, and there is no brainless plot at present. Overall, it is worth watching.

Invincible at first, hot chicken now. I can only say 6

Book friends in the comment area said that the later stage was very watery and the plot was repetitive, so they did not dare to subscribe 😥

Machima disappeared inexplicably, and the previous Supergirl King Arthur also disappeared later. The author suffered from amnesia.

It's very well written, all the characters' IQs are online, and there's no mess.

The Black Robe Pickets are over, Ah Zu is dead

This book is a bit boring at this point. The protagonist's sense of existence is low, and he just keeps going back and forth with a few sets of modes, constantly adding new characters and new plots, and then filling the story with chicken soup. In addition to the conceptual enhancement of the character's own strength, there is nothing in terms of the structure of the main concept or the description of future goals. In addition to the conflicts in the original plot, there are fewer and fewer highlights in the plot. Is this also the case later in this book? Are you just collecting characters to be your children?

It's so ugly that I was forced to quit it after the first dozen chapters. I bought one chapter just for review. The protagonist may be a stereotype of the author himself. He draws a stick first and then shoots an arrow. That's how it started. I no longer have any desire to read it.