The Godfather of American Comics? Please Call Me Police Officer!

Change America? Are you kidding... You are not capital, you are just a small policeman. I just read the following character profile. To change the United States or change a region, you need connections, abilities, capital, and being a mayor. Only then can you change. Without a job, what will they change? Prices are high, and they need to have a house to find a job, and they need someone to recommend them to work, and they have to pay various taxes and insurances to find a job. In Marvel, they have to deal with all kinds of superpowers and all kinds of destruction caused by superpowers, and the government still doesn't pay. , I want to be in that kind of place, I don't commit crimes, I feel like I'm crazy, if you go out and come home, your home will be gone, the government won't pay, the insurance company will file a lawsuit with you, your home is gone, your job will be gone, if you get injured casually, the place where you work will not dare to hire you, and it will cost a huge amount of money to treat your illness.

Let me put it bluntly, it's best to keep your writing style in one direction. Don't change it like it's endlessly depressing when it comes to women.

It feels a bit dangerous. Marvel is no longer very popular.

Did the Battle of New York have to be fought? Is it difficult to develop alien technology? Luodan himself can communicate with Aunt Marvel, and you can get it from Thor if you want. You don't think that Thor is a magician and they don't have alien technology, right?

I find that the most popular ones are all neurotic protagonists who are abstract and fun-loving.

The front is quite nice. When I fight, it doesn't take a second to strike with a knife. There is a process of getting stronger. When I fight, I don't use my super strength. Moreover, the strength combined with the super mechanism is quite interesting. But I don't know if I was anxious, but suddenly I went to Devil May Cry later. When I came back, the writing style changed, cutting from here to there, regardless of the reasonable plot, and it became a bit boring.

In addition to the male protagonist's emotional justice at the beginning, which is relatively average but very humane, it becomes interesting after the bloodbath of gangsters. Unlike many current Marvel movies that focus on heroes like Iron Man and Spider-Man from the beginning, they instead focus on the protagonist and slowly expand the world view. I prefer this kind of writing that develops the protagonist. Those who have been dealing with heroes since the beginning have seen too many types of routines, and have become bored and run out of ideas. It makes people feel comfortable to develop the protagonists in their own books and write out their souls.

The AI ​​smell is too strong, can you polish it up a bit?

The taste is right, especially the action after the latest second copy is released. It is accurate and fast, and it is very comfortable to read. It does not stress the combat power. Hell's Kitchen is not considered a super high-end game. It is very sophisticated. The previous book "Death" is also very good, you can follow it 🙂

The pace is really too fast, and it won't take long to write. The dragon's blood potion is simply a cheat. You can copy other people's abilities with just one tube of blood, and the energy level improvement is simply exaggerated.

Brother, you've just written a book and you're in a hurry to change the track? The previous audience was all about the God of Death. If you don't write a few anime books first to stabilize your base, not to mention you don't have a book club...

Why is the quality at the back not as good as the front? I can't write anymore.

Things like Death Are Coming are no different from ghosts. Those that can be killed have lost the most essential core of the subject and are no different from zombies. But if the core of ghosts and humans being unable to fight is maintained, then the protagonist will die. This is why I object to ghost content appearing in fan fiction. After all, those who can be beaten to death lose the fundamental core of ghost films, and those who cannot be beaten to death must die. This kind of subject matter is not suitable for appearing in secondary creations.

You know what to do😋😋😋

It feels like a strong AI flavor

I hope the author of this book can control his emotions and not suddenly go crazy like the previous book after writing it.

This Li En, he doesn't know Arkham Knight and has Platinum speedrun, right? Batman in the Marvel world is just a comic book character! [Emphasis] Batman is even less likely to appear in the police station! [Emphasis again]

When I wrote the first copy, I thought it would be a slow simmer and a slow growth. As a result, once the potion came out, it was completely released, and anyone who injected the potion would have Thor's strength. Later, it was all about using blood development potions in exchange for maps, and there was no plot at all.

The author's writing is quite good, but the setting is a bit inconsistent. . Using the writing method of Solo+Light Novel to write a comprehensive copy of the American comic world, the beginning still has no background and cannon fodder for the bottom of society. . The difficulty of this main world is too unbelievable. After clearing the dungeon, the small skills gradually increase by 1. When I return to the main world, I can't get out of the novice village. It's full of monsters. Now it took me 40 chapters to defeat Yuri, a purple soldier. . The writing and perspective are very good, very catchy and immersive, but there are too many people in Hell's Kitchen and it is no longer fresh. If the writing becomes too long, people will run away. . Like the newbies in American comics in the past, one or two dungeons such as Druid, Doctor, and Homelander can at least start with a small invincibility, so that the protagonist can stand up and have some own power, otherwise it will be written as an American comic and run away. . 😅

This copy of the new chapter is a bit unpopular. After all, Devil May Cry 5 is an unpopular game now, and Devil May Cry 3 is naturally the least popular. I guess the results of the recent chapters are not very good, so I have enabled automatic subscription. I hope you can think carefully about how to write the next copy so that you can feel more comfortable.

Stark has stopped selling arms a long time ago, not to mention that he was deceived when he sold arms before.

I changed the name book and couldn't find it 🥵

The previous Bleach fanfic was very good to read, although there were some issues with letting yourself go after it was released and the description in the middle and later stages was a bit obscure. But it is still an undoubted masterpiece. It would be better to say that Bleach fandom has not seen this kind of masterpiece for a long time. I wish the new book a great sale. The monthly tickets are ready. Can it be put on the shelves quickly enough?

After watching the first copy, I got the minimum living standard, so I was too lazy to wait too much and skipped directly to the second perfect pass. The rewards were great and it was very satisfying. It's a pity that I skipped it in the middle and felt fragmented. Then the question is, for the first dungeon, the original owner has just died and the threat is right around the corner, so why not try your best to get a high rating and improve your self-protection ability, but instead try speedrunning, only to end up with a low-income and disappointing result? Are you a little confused about priorities?

It has collapsed since we broke away from Thanos. There is no need to watch it.

Why do I feel like the writing pace is getting more and more urgent?

Are there many words describing things without pictures? A picture of something like a dragon's blood mark is much better than a long text description.

The copy you wrote is too unpopular.

Can this one surpass the previous one? 😃

With this update speed, who else would you rather recommend the monthly pass?