Dragon Ball: Saiyan's Food Journey to the Heavens

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After reading it, the first five chapters are really hard to quit. I suggest you start reading from chapter five onwards. The first five chapters are all system errors. The persecution of King Vegeta, the protagonist's incompatibility, the harsh environment and the difficulties encountered by the protagonist can all have a negative impact on the perception. The author also said not to be a substitute for Otaku, who is obviously the first one to appear. He suggested that the first five chapters be rewritten, and that Otaku's role and the part where Broly began to endure the persecution of King Vegeta when he was born without consciousness were all omitted. Revealing them will only discourage readers.

There are so many harem comics, but you haven't written any of them. The Adventures of Jackie Chan have come out. You are completely immersed in your own artistic world, without any desire for money in your eyes.

I finally figured it out. This is a novel without a heroine under the guise of a harem. Forget it if you can't write an invincible novel if you don't stress your fighting ability. You can't write it if you don't stress your age, right? I guess you still want to insist on saying "how long has it been?", So you smile.

Except for a bit of a poisonous start, the rest of the photos are pretty good and can be regarded as seedlings among the grass jelly. The comment section said that the protagonist's loss of memory is a poisonous point, but I think this is the author's brilliance and one of the highlights of the book (think about how greasy and boring it would be for an adult to pursue the young Sakura). It's good that the author handled it this way. Anyway, I can accept it.

Regardless of whether it is the new version or the old version, Broly should be about the same age as Kakarot, and Vegeta is several years older than them. When the planet exploded, Vegeta took Raditz and others on a mission to the alien planet. The green form of Broly is the power of the "Humanoid Giant Ape", which belongs to the power of the real "Legendary Super Saiyan". Also, I have to say that the soul of that otaku is really poisonous. This complaint is not as good as the old version of Broly's full of dirty talk.

I don't quite understand why Zhanchi's harem has to include a Lily girl. The protagonist never eats meat. I have written about Lily girl taking advantage of the harem several times. Is this the author's bad taste? Fortunately, there is less space behind Zhan Chi, otherwise it would be really unbearable.

The plot is completely wrong. I have to re-train the ability seals and then go to the low-level area to level up. It is a very stupid way of writing. Although it is still a good article, it is hard to reduce the fun point. I guess I didn't think of any good plot and can only write it like this. After all, most of the fans of the land are mainly about upgrading quick skills. It feels better to be stronger, but I think the writing method of crushing everything without upgrading is quite novel. Other fan fictions are written like this because others have an upgrade process from weak to strong, but this protagonist is invincible from the beginning, so why bother playing house? Anyway, the whole world looks boring...

This is an operation that makes people abandon the book. In the previous reincarnation, I did this kind of suffocation operation of beating myself. I didn't watch it after that. I was so surprised that I did it again in the new world. I'll see if I can read it in the next world. If I can't read it, I just abandoned it.

After finally surviving Jobless Reincarnation and Jackie Chan's Adventures, I was looking forward to a new world. Not to mention popular ones like Naruto and One Piece, at least there was one that everyone knew, but it turned out to be an unpopular veteran like Shi Ling who had never heard of Baidu.

It's neither a Saiyan nor a gourmet, but it's a light novel that uses Broly's skin. There's no difference if you replace Broly with a dog brother from the Knights.

So far, even though the current world is crushing in all aspects, he has never actively rejected the other party or excluded the other party from the target because of his likes and dislikes. Instead, he has always asked the other party's attitude first In short, Laobu has the power to crush the world, but he has always been the chosen party rather than the one making the choice.

Latest Chapter What's going on? Can the ability value panel in the wrong place seal all the protagonist's abilities? And the protagonist still can't figure it out? You also sealed the protagonist's golden finger? ? ? Seriously?

No wonder this book is lukewarm. The author's writing is good, and the plot creativity and daily descriptions are excellent, but there are always some surprises, such as Sakura and insects, Darkness's delusions, Kurogiri Miki's coveted two rituals... I believe that a large number of readers abandoned the book because of these details. I hope the author can distinguish the scale of thunder.

Jobless's previous writing was okay, with some problems but acceptable. Jobless just pulled the big one. You said you wanted to write your own Broly, but in Jobless, Broly was directly written as a time traveler (Rudy complained about where he traveled), and he had to be in Jobless. They have been in there for hundreds and thousands of years. Broly and the women in Jobless are as brainless as TM. Although we have lived together for so long, regardless of the fact, time has ceased to exist after such a long time. If Rudy is not strong enough, nothing will be enough. It only takes one rebirth to destroy the human god. It has the Dragon God restarter and invincible power. It's like TM has no brain. Putting aside the facts, I came up with a plot that requires suicide to remind the past self. Let's not talk about why so many people (most of the capable and intelligent people in the world) can't think of such a simple solution. The last Broly from the future can just kill himself while the Dragon God restarts. Why is there such a small thing to commit suicide (still with people from the same world)? There is also an open wife, so what kind of wife are you looking for? If you fall in love with all the men (either soft or hard, there are many ways), won't the points explode? First of all, Rudy knows about Dragon Ball, but he knows about the ridiculous Xinbu. Don't tell me that you are basing it on animation. Are you writing a novel or a comic plot? Then there is another one. Although Rudy knows the plot, and although Rudy also told the protagonist, the protagonist still doesn't even know the basics. He can even go directly to get the Dragon Ball comic, but just don't get it. Although the protagonist is very anxious to find the Dragon Ball, but don't worry yet?

I would like to call you the author who is best at writing fool-type protagonists in Qidian.

Elementary school: "Magic Girl Nanoha"... Middle school: "Harry Potter", "Cardcaptor Sakura", "Puella Magi Madoka Magica", "Yuki Yuna is the Brave"... High school: "Saiki Kusuo's Disaster", "Prince of Tennis", "Magic Index", "Yu-Gi-Oh!"... College:... The protagonist is a child now and still needs to go to school to study!

Nowadays, it is still a way of thinking where the protagonist is deceiving a fool. It is completely unreasonable. Women are all brainless. I don't know what your story is about since the end of Jobless.

1. The torment of missing Broly after not seeing each other for 300 years was revealed in two chapters. There is no obvious transition or description in the middle, and a new time travel begins directly. Wouldn't it be better to let Broly tour one or two more worlds for a bit? Not to mention other worlds, in the Black Bullet world, no wife showed up to speak, and there was no description of the changes in the Black Bullet world. 2. Both the jobless reincarnation and the new world have a problem. They cannot meet their wives at the beginning. In Wuwu Reincarnation, there were 20 episodes without finding a wife, and in the world of Jackie Chan's Adventures, I was trapped in hell at the beginning and couldn't get out. Is this because both worlds have their own peculiarities? Is it still a new way of writing? Personally, I am a little impatient. 3. The two stages of separation of the jobless reincarnation world. The first stage of the jobless reincarnation world (the first 20 weeks) is to find a wife all over the world, learn swordsmanship, and fight the dragon god in various ways. The second stage (the last 30 weeks) mainly focuses on conquering wives, restoring the memory of the original wives, and adding several new wives. The scope of activities is mainly in the village of Buena. The characters that appeared in the first stage, except for the Dragon God, basically did not appear in the second stage. Maybe because of her age (is this really a problem? Alice in the original time and space was thrown into the Demonic Continent when she was 12 years old), the scope of my wife's activities is very small. Except for exploring the maze together in the last two weeks, I basically didn't see them doing anything. Broly has always used Alice's age as a reason to refuse her to take risks before she turned 15. There are too few descriptions of daily activities and they are too dry. 4. A world with no limits and no limit on the number of people. Broly looking for a wife now is like a bear breaking off sticks, one by one and throwing away the other. After the number of people increases, some wives become purely numbers people. I was worried that some of the wives might not appear again until the end of the book. This may also be a hidden danger of this book. This book is basically a one-line writing, Broly will not describe it if he is not in the place. There are too few opportunities for those wives to show up, too few scenes of interaction...

To be honest, I will feel tired after holding on to two worlds at most. After all, the plot is too bland 😒🥱

Author? ? Is this seal serious? 1. Can I undo it myself? 2. If you can't make the world wrong, is it too strong? 3. Crystal Palace was forced offline again? Is this plug-in that takes you through the heavens so shameless? And shouldn't this be considered a prop?

The Broly written by the author is so good. Let's take a look at the Broly in other works. After being pushed to the hell after death by Goku and his son, this Broly became a Super Super Three and fought with Frieza, Cell, Spare Rib Rice, and Super Three Kaio Fist Goku. In the end, Goku used the energy bomb. Toriyama Akiya also helped, but Broly was taken away by the villains of Dragon Ball Heroes. Dragon Ball If 9 This Broly was pushed to the sun by the father and son turtle qigong but deviated from the position. More than ten years later, in the gt timeline, Black Goku came to this universe and unexpectedly awakened to fight Black Goku and Baby Vegeta. This Broly became the Super Four and forced Black Goku and Baby Earrings to fuse and become Black Vegeta. Metal Gula Timeline This Broly is from the Dragon Ball Super period. Metal Gula teamed up to destroy the Z warriors but was capsized by the parasitic Baby. Metal Babe imprisoned Broly as a battery and killed 80% of life in the universe. Finally, he faced the angel Mels. He created 10 billion metal warriors with Broly's super energy and died together with Mels. Already possessing power stronger than Beerus. Dragon Ball Super Dimension Chaos Super Three Gogeta vs. Old Broly finally led to the destruction of the universe due to time issues. This book Broly is still very weak compared to these Broly

It feels a bit boring. The Earth Wrong Chapter can see some growth of the protagonist, but I personally prefer Broly who plays straight. Although I haven't finished reading it yet, I guess it's this kind of routine of accepting it first and then confessing at the last moment. It's so disappointing to me. Can anyone who has seen the later part tell me about the subsequent development? Or open a new world and kick me 🙏

First, Bulma and No. 18 Should be taken in. To be honest, I feel that Vegeta is not suitable for Bulma.

Author, the Saitama you wrote is a bit of a clown. In One Punch Man, no matter what kind of hero he is, as long as the people are in trouble, he will rush forward without hesitation. Saitama is the same.

In fact, I can write a few chapters to talk about it later. After the protagonist's children have grown up, the protagonist is in his 30s (after the dragon made a wish for eternal life) and enters a state of retirement. When everything is nice and relaxing, the protagonist suddenly feels a creepy feeling, especially the surrounding decorations, which give him a feeling of memories from a long, long time ago. When I became familiar with the feeling, this creepy feeling became even more obvious... As expected, the next second, my past self captured the future protagonist who was in a state of retirement and took care of the baby... My wife can also do this, leaving the child to her future self, and the current self is responsible for enjoying it😎...

At present, it seems that the author only goes to the anime world. I recommend two special ones: Final Fantasy 7 and Street Fighter. Someone must say that these two are not games, they are not anime at all! Wrong, thanks to the super success of the game, both of these works have been released in anime. FF7 has the Advent of the Son, and Street Fighter has both TV and theater versions, but they are both very old and only a few years old. But! If you go there, you can collect Tifa and Chunli, the highest mountain and the longest river in the 3D area! If you don't accept it, will you still be a man? By analogy, there are some anime that are not well-known, but the games that are famous are all produced in anime, such as The King of Fighters, LOL's Battle of Two Cities, Ryza's Atelier, DNF, Blade & Soul, Persona series, etc. It all depends on whether the author likes it or not.

Will those two idiots who suppress intelligence really not discover that Broly's bloodline will cause some unscrupulous things? For example, should he arrange a bunch of Heracles experiences and a bunch of Greek fates for his children? For example, kill your father... And those two donkeys are probably laughing crazy because they got the relatively controllable UO (son of Broly)...

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