I Became the Heart Demon of the Female Demon Lord

I don't have any thoughts. The book is a good book, but if you want to quit sex, just read a few chapters🦅just read a few chapters🦅, I think you're a big deal

You are too inactive and your title is far away. I will set up a Jielu Tower.

Starting from the explanation of the fairy, I have read eight out of ten books on this subject. They have either been banned for being too H, or the authors are eunuchs (most of them), or the writing is too bad and have been discarded. Apart from fairies, there is nothing of the same kind to watch. I hope this book will come true.

After the appraisal is completed, San Gong is repaired and Laodeng is the only one

The early writing was very good and very attractive, just like when I first watched The Watcher, but later on I couldn't control the rhythm more and more. It is recommended to reduce the number of heroines and focus on making each female character plumper and more attractive, and to have a more exciting story with the protagonist, instead of blindly pursuing the number of heroines and putting an attractive label on each heroine, but without sufficient story core support, which ultimately results in a weak sense of existence for the heroine. For example, just like the protagonist's fiancée Shen Zhixia, I had great expectations at the beginning. From the misunderstanding of breaking off the engagement at the beginning, to the resolution of the misunderstanding later, and with the blessing of Qingmei buff, I can write many wonderful stories. A girl who can eat pig's trotters is also a green plum with the protagonist. She is talented in martial arts and can fight thieves. She is divorced by the protagonist. Later, she resolves the misunderstanding, experiences and grows together, and interacts with her family. What a lovable character. I have watched 50% of the story, but the fiancée has not had many scenes. It is a pity. I could have written more exciting stories, but I missed the best time to develop the character. Too many female protagonists also caused a problem, with repeated attributes. For example, Lin Jingzhu and Li Yuan had repeated attributes. It would be better to combine them into a carefree female headhunter with strong investigative abilities, similar to the character of Zhang Jinjiu, who is the best in the world. The two investigate cases together, become colleagues, and experience dangers and hardships together. They must highlight the female protagonist's ability instead of being a vase. In the end, they are impressed by the male protagonist, and the two develop a friendship and love. After reading 500,000 words, there are already 7 heroines: Concubine Yu, Queen, Shen Zhixia, Lin Jingzhu, Li Yuan, Gu Manzhi, and Yu'er. There are only so many words, and so many heroines spread out to each person cannot shape much of the plot, resulting in some heroines not having a strong sense of presence. A harem novel is a harem novel, and it is not allowed to be written as a stallion. Moreover, I guess that the eldest princess and the demon heroine will be added later. Based on the author's writing style, it is recommended to control the number of heroines to about 5 people, plus one or two lovable maids, and focus on creating a wonderful and plump storyline.

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This article, well, is for small heads, so don't read it for big heads.

It's so funny. It's rare to see someone who likes to write about the harem touching each other so much. . . Why not just let the male protagonist touch it? It was written that the male protagonist touched the fairy, saying that he was the first man, but besides her master, her master was the first. . It's really hard to hold on. Would anyone really enjoy reading this kind of plot description? I feel that similar plots like this are a bit pointless and depressing.

Xiao Gu

The feature of this book is its features, nothing else 😊