I Became the Devil's Inner Demon

Unlike those well-written harem novels, the words in this one are too plain and the techniques are too old-fashioned. So it is not suitable for elaborate writing. You should make good use of your own advantages, be interesting, astringent enough, have enough female protagonists, and be decisive enough to recommend people. Fortunately, the mild poison is not fatal, the speed is fast enough to attract people, and the emotional line is acceptable, not a stallion. For me, it is a very suitable choice for me to take a break from my busy schedule. When I am tired and don't want to use my brain, I just happened to look at this high-quality industrial saccharin.

I have read Chapter 76 so far. It is not toxic and makes people interested in continuing to follow it. Really, now that tastes have improved, it's so hard to find books that I can read. Not long ago, I almost got poisoned to death by reading the book "The Holy Mother on the Edge of Doom". Then I read "Shushan Mountain" again, which was also hard to describe. I hope the author will work hard and give you six monthly tickets and five recommendation votes~

I have never written a book review, but as my title says, this Little Emperor's Uncle is indeed a masterpiece, so I recommend it. Please listen to me bragging to you (bushi 1. Although there are some flaws in the plot, the heroines are all love-minded, and they will lose their brains when they meet the protagonist. But this is the little emperor's uncle, so you can ignore it😍. 2. The author's jokes are reasonably integrated, There are frequent golden sentences. In addition, the writing is good, and it is very comfortable to read. Summary: This book is like a chef turning low-quality ingredients into a delicious dish. (This is my first time to write a book review, please add any shortcomings)

Concubine, concubine, queen, queen!

I don't have any thoughts. The book is a good book, but if you want to quit sex, just read a few chapters🦅just read a few chapters🦅, I think you're a big deal

You are too inactive and your title is far away. I will set up a Jielu Tower.

Starting from the explanation of the fairy, I have read eight out of ten books on this subject. They have either been banned for being too H, or the authors are eunuchs (most of them), or the writing is too bad and have been discarded. Apart from fairies, there is nothing of the same kind to watch. I hope this book will come true.

After the appraisal is completed, San Gong is repaired and Laodeng is the only one

The early writing was very good and very attractive, just like when I first watched The Watcher, but later on I couldn't control the rhythm more and more. It is recommended to reduce the number of heroines and focus on making each female character plumper and more attractive, and to have a more exciting story with the protagonist, instead of blindly pursuing the number of heroines and putting an attractive label on each heroine, but without sufficient story core support, which ultimately results in a weak sense of existence for the heroine. For example, just like the protagonist's fiancée Shen Zhixia, I had great expectations at the beginning. From the misunderstanding of breaking off the engagement at the beginning, to the resolution of the misunderstanding later, and with the blessing of Qingmei buff, I can write many wonderful stories. A girl who can eat pig's trotters is also a green plum with the protagonist. She is talented in martial arts and can fight thieves. She is divorced by the protagonist. Later, she resolves the misunderstanding, experiences and grows together, and interacts with her family. What a lovable character. I have watched 50% of the story, but the fiancée has not had many scenes. It is a pity. I could have written more exciting stories, but I missed the best time to develop the character. Too many female protagonists also caused a problem, with repeated attributes. For example, Lin Jingzhu and Li Yuan had repeated attributes. It would be better to combine them into a carefree female headhunter with strong investigative abilities, similar to the character of Zhang Jinjiu, who is the best in the world. The two investigate cases together, become colleagues, and experience dangers and hardships together. They must highlight the female protagonist's ability instead of being a vase. In the end, they are impressed by the male protagonist, and the two develop a friendship and love. After reading 500,000 words, there are already 7 heroines: Concubine Yu, Queen, Shen Zhixia, Lin Jingzhu, Li Yuan, Gu Manzhi, and Yu'er. There are only so many words, and so many heroines spread out to each person cannot shape much of the plot, resulting in some heroines not having a strong sense of presence. A harem novel is a harem novel, and it is not allowed to be written as a stallion. Moreover, I guess that the eldest princess and the demon heroine will be added later. Based on the author's writing style, it is recommended to control the number of heroines to about 5 people, plus one or two lovable maids, and focus on creating a wonderful and plump storyline.

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This article, well, is for small heads, so don't read it for big heads.

It's so funny. It's rare to see someone who likes to write about the harem touching each other so much. . . Why not just let the male protagonist touch it? It was written that the male protagonist touched the fairy, saying that he was the first man, but besides her master, her master was the first. . It's really hard to hold on. Would anyone really enjoy reading this kind of plot description? I feel that similar plots like this are a bit pointless and depressing.

Xiao Gu

The feature of this book is its features, nothing else 😊

To sum up this book, my evaluation is that the more you write, the better The plot gradually unfolds and the feelings gradually heat up Through the author's writing, you can feel the gracefulness, elegance, eccentricity, and pure desire of the female protagonist, and the wanton romance of the male protagonist A small sentiment that helps the world at the same time To be honest, I think some people require the protagonist to be single-minded or even "sexually frigid", and they also require the protagonist to be 180-minded in everything/or to be tortured 180 times to upgrade honestly. . That just feels unreasonable I think the author has successfully integrated the "system" into the world he wrote and the plot of the male and female protagonists. In this story, the male protagonist has a mind and desires, and each character also has his or her own love and hate; The twists and turns of the plot are covered by a "system", so readers have basic trust in the author's plot arrangement, and will not abandon the book immediately just because of the ups and downs At the same time, the author's writing is also online, so readers have expectations for the subsequent story, and will want to see how the protagonist will fare in the future. The All-powerful in Another World Some people insist on saying "it's just a brainless and refreshing novel" because the plot is refreshing (that is, not sadistic, not so deep?) It can only be said that they have not seen the effort that the author expended in each chapter Maybe for him, he must drink bitter melon juice to drink drinks, eat steaks must be rare, eat desserts by grabbing a handful of white sugar, and eat dry flour as a staple food every day. The requirements are quite low Everyone has their own preferences for radish and cabbage. There are so many books to start from. Find the one you like.

I didn't spend money to be upset. Just ask, if you deleted my comment, that's your fault.

Not to mention the most ridiculous setting of the coexistence of Zhongshu's subordinates and the cabinet, how did you come up with the setting of the cabinet and the governor competing for power? In addition, the character of the queen has also been completely separated. She is a woman who steals foreign ministers behind the emperor's back (she has never even slept with the emperor). Logically speaking, this is the template of Jia Nanfeng. How can she have the face to repeat the decrees of the East Palace and the majesty of the royal family? Don't you think it is a hypocritical double standard? Don't the author realize that powerful families are not necessarily enemies of imperial power? On the contrary, it is a useful tool to maintain rule.

Why are there so few chapters where the protagonist eats meat?

Zhen Ji Bar Huang🙂

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I still have to remind authors not to take a long break before publishing a new book. You are not as good as those great authors. Those great authors will still be famous after being offline for a year and a half before publishing a new book. If you take a break for a year and a half before publishing a new book, it will be a question whether the readers who have accumulated this book will still remember you as the author.

I think the subsequent treatment is a pity. Many plots and characters that could be written are ended hastily. Having more female protagonists is not a problem, but the writing cannot be too simple and flat. The domineering empress, the lovely queen, the innocent Shen Zhixia, the contrasting Ye Henshui, the cold Ling Ningzhi, and the aloof Xu Qingyi are all written very well. The portrayal of Ji Lianxing in Paper Plane is also very good at the beginning, but the emotional changes in the back are too little. The same goes for Ji Hongxiu, Chu Yanli, and Ye Zicalyx. As for Sikong Huiyue, Yu Hongyin, and Zhu Wujian, they were almost completely reduced to backgrounds, and all the emotional lines were covered in just a few chapters. The same is true for some supporting characters, such as Wei Xuan and the Empress Dowager. Their existence seems to be purely for the death of Emperor Wu Lie, and they do not reflect the arc of any character. The number of words from appearance to death does not exceed 1,000 words. Especially the Empress Dowager, her end seems too nonsensical. She was mentioned in the previous chapter, thinking it was foreshadowing and she would play an important role in the subsequent story. In the end, she committed suicide because of Wei Xuan's ability to take action. There are also some repeated characters, whether one of Lin Jingzhu and Li Yuan can be retained, and the appearance of You Ji seems to only replace Yu'er's role. Other than that, the sub-plot setting seemed too simple to me. For example: Villain A was tracked and met up with Villain B. Villain B frowned and asked: "Have you cleaned up your tail?" Then with a bang, the protagonist appeared. I have read this plot no less than four times in this book. In terms of the context of the story, as the author said in his final remarks, it may be too thin due to temporary changes, but the flaws are not concealed. I think this is still one of the best harem novels from the beginning. I hope the author will publish a new book soon 😁

Starting from the chapter where the little white-haired sisters recognize each other, the progress triples. That chapter includes the sisters' recognition, the mastermind behind the sect annihilation case, the reason why the sect was annihilated, Zhi Fei Ji's confusion, etc. Especially the portrayal of Zhi Feiji started to go bad in this chapter. The character who was a vengeful demon suddenly turned into a character who didn't know whether she should take revenge or not. Obviously I could have written a few more chapters, for example, I didn't want to believe it after learning about the sect's extermination case → I went to investigate what the sect had done in the past → The more I investigated, the more I collapsed → I was confused and didn't know whether I should take revenge → I was saved by the protagonist → I fell in love with it. In the closing remarks, I said that there is nothing more to write, but I feel that there is still a lot that can be written. The main plot was pushed too fast in the later period, so many female protagonists were not fully formed. A daily novel should push the main plot slowly and write more interactive characters to shape the characters. The early and middle stages were very good, just fast forward from the chapter where the sisters recognized each other Generally speaking, it is still good-looking. There are no poisonous points in the current books, and there are very few books that can land smoothly.

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I think this palace is just a winery, full of moles, and the emperor thinks so.

Are you planning to close it down? It's been so long since I've published a new book

Where has the author written before and what is his pen name?