Don't Worry, Heroes. Swordsman, Please Ask the Ming Dynasty Law First.

It feels a bit pity, but the core of the story is still very interesting, and it has a certain degree of research on history and the original novel. However, the writing style is a bit too jerky and cumbersome, and the writing style does not fall where it should. It seems to be the same "blank space" as in traditional martial arts novels, but it also hides too crucial information and makes it incoherent, leaving readers to infer. Perhaps, this ingenious way of writing makes a short novella a masterpiece, but I don't think it is suitable for such a long online article - it is too tiring to read. It's not very friendly to readers who didn't follow it from the beginning. Moreover, the story itself lacks a breaking point. In the middle period, it feels like the majestic Five Mountains and the vast rivers and lakes, playing house with the protagonist here, and listening to the protagonist's far-fetched nonsense here. Perhaps, this is indeed one side of Jianghu, but the other side of "pleasure and grudges" is even more eye-catching.

The current map is too small. It is written based on the original plot of Swordsman. The book is expected to end in less than 2 million words. At present, the introduction of longevity has been introduced. If the book does well, the author may change the Gaowu map to add plot in the future. In view of the fact that most readers read this book as a martial arts fan, if you do not write a very long novel in a big world, I suggest that one idea is to use the history of the Ming Dynasty as the big background (to enhance the plot conflict, and some major events can be brought forward), and introduce world maps (Japan, Jianzhou, Nanyang, etc.) , Add elements of historical hegemony, increase the level of force as appropriate (refer to the force settings of works such as World No. 1, Fengyun Yi, Legend of the Emperor, etc., And consider the balance between Jianghu force and court force, such as: the royal family is a master, the court army has formations, etc.), And increase the plot of the work. Another way of thinking is to refer to works such as Lu Xiaofeng and Lotus House, and introduce suspenseful crime-solving elements to increase the plot of the work.

Based on history, Chief Yu single-handedly singled out Shaolin. The Qi Family Army formed a military formation. To put it bluntly, the Wudang Shaolin Demon Sect is a mess of sects. If you face a thousand Qi Family Army, one or two Qi Family Army should be exhausted to death. Qi Jiajun can kill thousands of enemies and suffer single-digit losses in his battle against Japanese rogue samurai.

Four different feelings You can say that he pays attention to the real history. People in the Ming Dynasty used to say "adult" one by one. It really makes me want to laugh when I hear it. In fact, this title only began to be abused in the middle of the Qing Dynasty. Officials as big as sesame seeds and mung beans can be called "adults". Prior to this, shouting was not allowed, either when it was an occasion of extreme humility, such as when the leader of a defeated army knelt down and begged for surrender, you could use the title of the opponent's commander in the letter of surrender; or someone who was highly respected and had great achievements could be addressed as "Sir"; even if you were really shy and flattering the superior officer, according to the practice of the Ming Dynasty, you would just call him "Sir, Sir" and this must be at least an official of the level of Jiuqing. If you really call someone "Sir" when you see an official, it's like you enter a government building and you catch someone and call him the chief. If you dare to call him, do you think he has the nerve to agree to you? You can say that he is imaginary. He often mixes in some historical records of the Ming Dynasty, trying to rely on historical texts, and trying to "sew" the characters in Xiaoao into the background of the Ming Dynasty. However, the original work of the martial arts novel deliberately blurred the existence of the ruling class in the feudal dynasty. Otherwise, the plot will not progress at all, and there will be many bugs in this stitching Overall, it looks a bit nondescript, tasteless and a pity to throw away.

The setting is good, but the foreshadowing is too long-winded. It's just long-winded. The author has decided whether to write a fan martial arts novel or a historical novel. You can randomly pop up a new character here, and randomly pop up a new character. The look and feel is very fragmented.

An author who amuses himself. It's a very good new routine about officials governing the world. It would definitely look better if it were written in a more humorous and refreshing way. I can't stand it if I have to write an article like Zou Zou's lecture on popular science.

Martial arts and officialdom have always been two paths. Even if there is an intersection in some novels, such as Tian Long Ba Bu, the connection is very weak. The officialdom is just the background, because the martial arts in the novels are fake, but the history is true. Unless it is imaginary, there will be too many logical and common sense problems, because if there is true internal martial arts, the most powerful should not be the sect, but the ruler.

1. When officials in the past dynasties lost their official seals, they generally chose not to make it public and find ways to find it privately. If you say that those who steal the seal will be severely punished, then what if you can't even protect the official seal yourself? 2. In Three Heroes and Five Righteousness or Bao Gong's case, Bai Yutang steals the Three Treasures. In the adapted TV series, Bai Yutang steals the seal of Kaifeng Mansion. So if Bao Zheng doesn't punish him, is it because he is not selfless enough? 3. When facing Lin Pingzhi before, and now facing Yue Lingshan, the protagonist intervenes in an official way, not for punishment. If you think it's such a double standard: I suggest you don't read any further. If you think that because you have given this title to your book, you should be killed and imprisoned, I suggest you not read further. If you think so, I just think the protagonist should fight his way through. Sorry, this book is not your type either. If you say that this history is not historical and martial arts is not martial arts, I suggest you find Qidian to complain, or complain to Qidian. If not, please be kinder and more tolerant. I sincerely advise you to quit, and it is good for both you and the author.

I feel like the author wrote the book for himself.

I saw someone discussing the fight between martial arts people and the military. However, martial arts people do not need to fight the army to fight against the imperial court. They only need to fight logistical wars and public security wars. And some people mentioned a million-armored army... Nurhaci only had 18 pieces of armor when he started, and dispatched 10,000 armored soldiers to capture martial arts masters for a long time. Not to mention whether they could catch martial arts masters, the logistics alone would have to drag down the local finance. Everyone overestimated the economic level, logistics capabilities, and mobilization capabilities of the feudal country. There is no need to assassinate the emperor. If a martial arts master like Ouyang Feng has been killing county magistrates for a long time, how will the court send troops to protect these low-level officials? Even if there are experts in the field, can each county magistrate be assigned at least one? In this long-term logistics and security war, a Wujue level leader with several deputies can defeat the basic administrative power of the feudal dynasty without the interference of other masters of the same level. You don't even need to kill the county magistrate, you just need to purposefully set fire to the granaries in various places, intercept and kill the local postmen delivering messages to the central government, and destroy the autumn harvest, which can cause a lot of trouble to the court. As for kidnapping and assassinating the family members of senior officials, coercing senior officials to do things for themselves or not to serve the court wholeheartedly are more troublesome methods. As for the terrorist actions, anti-national actions, and actions that undermine the private economy, such as releasing large quantities of corpses into water sources to cause a plague to break out in a certain place, harassing, attacking and intercepting teams transporting food and wages for the border army, and controlling green forest bandits and water bandits to plunder the waterways and land routes of various merchants, there is no need to mention these actions. Huang Yaoshi in the Condor Shooting can do the above. He has a group of apprentices who are at least second-rate or third-rate. Among his apprentices are Lu Chengfeng, the general manager of the 18th Green Forest Road, and Mei Chaofeng, who has close contacts with the enemy's high-level officials. If there are no masters of similar level like Hong Qigong and Zhou Botong to restrain him, it would be too easy to cause huge damage to the Song Dynasty.

What's wrong with copying Jin Baoyi's book? He can beautify his traitorous ancestors into patriotic heroes. In the early years, he also worked as a dog for the British and took advantage of the United Front.

I'm ready to give up, it's a bit of a show-off in the early stages. Although the wit and martial arts peach blossoms are a bit forced to pretend. I can still see it. Things started to get weird later on. It would be better to delete the two emotional lines of Yue Lingshan and Ren Yingying. In the early stage, the protagonist at least prevented two murder cases, and later it was completely lower body action, and the plot was promoted through peach blossoms. It's really better not to talk about this love. My position has changed. If I really want to accept it, I might as well just repay the favor and accept it all.

Recommended by bookworms of 20 years! Great book!

History is history, martial arts is martial arts. Why is Jin Yong's novel called an adult fairy tale? Because he is not trying to build a rationalized martial arts world. What he wants to say is that human beings are sentimental and chivalrous. The magical weapons that everyone talks about are just props to promote the plot. The force in them cannot be studied deeply, because once you study deeply, there are holes everywhere that cannot be filled, and martial arts are needed in many places. When you are strong, you are strong. When you need to be weak in martial arts, your martial arts will be weak. Huang Yi is actually more reasonable in terms of the setting of the martial arts world. However, Huang Yi also made many blunt turns in order to cater to the historical trend. For example, no matter how good Kou Zhong is, Xu Ziling will force him to quit fighting for the world. For example, Chuanying can easily break the momentum of the Yuan Dynasty and then Shatter the Void, but he pats his butt and leaves. If you want to discuss the world of martial arts, you must exclude the influence of real history. Assume that in a world with ancient productivity conditions, there is a group of extremely talented people who deeply study attack techniques and internal power techniques that break the limits of the mortal body (allowed by the rules of the world) and create various miraculous skills. Then generations of people continue to practice from an early age. How will such a group of people change the world? Instead of assuming based on real history that martial arts masters are novices who are casually abused by the military and court, and then these military masters are driven like dogs by high-ranking officials and royal families, and are casually given away. Then history has not changed at all. There are no internal skills, no special skills, and no magic weapons in history.

I almost missed the title of the book. The writing is good and the author has real material. It would be perfect if the rhythm could be 10% faster

No wonder your grades are not good, just entertain yourself there, Miao Lingzi, the plan is to get you involved in a rebellion and die for her. If you want to commit suicide, just let him die. How can you show mercy to her? The distance won't be maintained? He seems to be a handsome gentleman

It's true that the viewing angle is pretty good, but the protagonist's martial arts is too low. There are some little logics in various aspects that are not very clear.

Ming law? A military household is a military household, and a craftsman household is a craftsman household. There are roads leading to the door, and there are closures in the mountains and forests.

Since the largest sect in the world should be the imperial court, if you learn martial arts and sell them to the emperor's family, it's easy to practice in the six gates.

What a wonderful novel. Why are there so few monthly tickets? I think this book is seriously underrated

The book review section really shows how high the threshold for this book is.

This book is very good and the author is of high quality. The point of frustration is that the author too much wants to round up the irrationality of Xiao Ao. This is the problem of Fuwei Escort destroying the family and keeping the government secret. To be honest, the author is pretty good. But this process is too long, too long. The reading rate is definitely low. Next time, don't show off, show off ten chapters to the sky, okay?

One second, Mr. Lu is a fair and honest rookie in the officialdom. The next second, the entire intelligence organization comes out and starts to humiliate him. One second, he is planning the whole world with his eyes shining. The next second, he has a different attitude when facing the woman who wants to kill him. The temperament of the protagonist is really taken over by you 👍

A book friend strongly suggested starting a book club. The geese passing by leave a sound. First open a QQ book club group: 789541658 (group number) It is not large in scale, friendly discussion, and those who are willing to join.

The writing is good, the thinking is bad, the plot is interesting, and the general outline is boring. The protagonist is good, bad, treacherous, and innocent. The character collapse is too serious, not to mention the inexplicable plots of all sizes, such as Lin Pingzhi riding a horse and hitting someone in the opening chapter. . This book is a shame. It would be better if it were deleted and rewritten.

I haven't joined the group because I don't use QQ anymore. Is there anyone who joins the group and tells me that the author was locked in a dark room by a rich woman?