Coffin Painter

This book is written in vernacular and became popular early on. If an author doesn't write a book to make money, you can keep writing it your way. Maybe my knowledge is not enough, my realm is not enough, and I really don't have the desire to watch it.

This way of writing seems very awkward.

There is no need to change it, you can use it directly for storytelling. My writing skills are really solid, but my reading experience is a bit lacking.

After withdrawing, it looked strenuous, and I read novels just to relax.

The author might as well create a video account to tell stories and write one chapter to tell the story.

The writing is good, but it's too hard to read. 90% Of it is not suitable for reading.

The people who come here to read are not just listening to books. You speak one mouth at a time. When you open your mouth, say, shut up.

I was originally annoyed by your purely storyteller style of writing, but I could tolerate it, but the setting in your book turned out to be like garbage! The various spells are incredibly powerful and completely unreasonable. Any character can easily kill the protagonist with their spells. However, the protagonist possesses a bunch of spells and martial arts, as well as the highest level of Vajra Kung Fu. None of these are of any use to the protagonist! Moreover, a mortal who knows nothing can pull up a weeping willow tree, but the protagonist has broken through twice in his skills and only has a few hundred kilograms of strength? He actually had a fight with an oversized python! ? Does the author not even have enough common sense? Withdrawn!

Fang Qingping's apprentice? Stand-up comedy?

The subject matter and portrayal are all excellent, but the writing is messy. You are just writing storytelling. Storytelling is a layer apart from the performance method. Who among the bookworms will have a sense of empathy? Either change it or cut it off. Start over, you won't be able to keep a few people.

I can't stand it, the author is writing an essay,

This is not like it was written by an old white reader who has been at the starting point for almost 10 years, but more like it was copied from a set of orphan storybooks from a hundred or two hundred years ago.

It's a pretty good book. The author should change his writing style and make it more concise. It can be regarded as a way to keep pace with the times.