I'm a Game Designer! ?

First, let me talk about my feelings The rhythm of reading a book feels strange. Start by traveling through the game to sort out your mood → Play the game → Reveal the amazing character's background at the beginning of the game → Modern military base → Encounter the BOSS → Meet the other two heroines → Describe the various reactions of the players At the beginning, it is thought that the game is in another world, both the dragon girl and the soldier are written with a sense of intelligence. Especially the military base, people thought it was going to be big, but in the subsequent turn, I started writing about various players I tell you it is just a background similar to Sword Art Online. After this wave, I feel that the sense of expectation is shattered. It is better to reverse the order and write the player reaction and plot life first, and let the protagonist follow the plot by himself. The military base can be explored by the players later, and a special world view can be written. Secondly A MMORPG with all soul monsters, a very... Imaginative mix and match. Various professions in the article have tanks and magicians. Since at level 1, one person can use a wooden stick to fight the BOSS beyond level 17, then it stands to reason that if a group of players form a team and take turns to fight in all directions, shouldn't the monster be able to fight infinite zombies? After playing games, who still plays 1v1 like a single player? Everyone went directly to the justice group to fight shoulder to shoulder. Imagine, there are countless rookies. They can't hide their skills and find the right time, but they can learn the body-holding technique! One hundred people took turns to decide on a level 100 BOSS, and in the end, the BOSS might not even be able to move. The protagonist is an elf and the attribute bonuses are different, but rolling is boosted by dexterity. Wouldn't it be unfair if the dexterity bonus is less? You can't just delete your account and play again, right? (Or is the rebound affected by the strength bonus, and different professions have their own unique ways to deal with the soul system?) It is also known that in MMORPG, you can upgrade and learn skills to add points. When the skills can be cycled, is it really still the soul system? Similar to what Chengzi said, I just stand and output, and throw skills with bang bang to kill the monster directly from a distance. If it develops like this, does it feel a bit strange in the early stage? Or in the later stage, when players have dozens of levels to fight monsters of more than ten levels, and they don't know how to perform operations such as soul rolls, monsters still abuse players like they abuse dogs? One set to take away? In this case, if I am taken away by this group of monsters at level 1, and I am still taken away by this group of monsters at level 100, isn't the player upgrading in vain? The opening chapter is tens of thousands of words, but the game setting is too hurriedly written. If you want to write that the protagonist is ridiculously strong, there is no need to make all the monsters in the novice village so strong. You only need to write that the protagonist encounters a maze with a soul-based mechanism, or uses the soul-based mechanism to defeat a BOSS at level 30 or 40, and instantly jump to the level of a first-line player. Of course, the above are some ideas I came up with when I was reading the book, and they are not meant to teach the author how to write a book. I hope the plot is more interesting. (Finally, the protagonist group is as familiar with the trio as ever. It seems that Tan Yuan does not need to be broken by the protagonist, but does she occupy a position similar to the sister in the first two books?)

The author wrote in 19 years and there were not so many idiots asking The first ones were poor people There are also academic tyrants

1. In a paragraph in the first few chapters of the article, it is written that the heroine was a man in her previous life. 2. The heroine's secondary sexual characteristics are described straightforwardly in the article. Although the writing may be a bit embarrassing, female channels will definitely be scolded if they write this, and this is also one of the cute points of male channels. 3. The subject matter is very novel, and the writing style is also rare or even non-existent in female videos. 4. The girl Tie Tie is Qing Lily for the time being. Light Lily is the cutest point of male videos. Although there are lilies in female videos, they are not of this flavor. Sexual Lily is an old theme of male videos and has nothing to do with the violent invasion of female videos and the violent expansion of Qidian in the past year or two. Sex-converting lilies are rare at the starting point because of the net. In the past, there was a special section for light novels. It has nothing to do with the events of the past two or three years. The author can't still be himself, write about the subjects he is good at, and vote for the same division. Suddenly one day a group of people will jump out and say, "You voted for the wrong invader", and then start to attack KY everywhere in the comment area, right? This is too ridiculous. Fortunately, there is a starting point to operate from before, making it even more ridiculous...

I have read this book. The level of xx players in the world has dropped ten thousand times. I am the only one who is not affected.

Ever since the army in the past life appeared in online games, I couldn't stand it anymore, it was like a thorn in the side. The main performance is that the protagonist himself asked the home intelligence whether the "mother machine" read her memory. The home intelligence said that according to what definition, artificial intelligence cannot read human memory, and then the protagonist completely believed it? ? ? When the author was writing later, the protagonist thought about the possibility of the army appearing in the previous life, but ruled out the possibility of artificial intelligence reading the memory? ? ? The writing reveals a kind of clever stupidity. A time traveler can believe what artificial intelligence says, even if he can travel through time, there is no one who dares to believe what artificial intelligence says. When writing, can you not block out a possibility? Is it fun to write like "there is no three hundred taels of silver here"? The more emphasis is placed on other possibilities, the more the excluded option will be magnified.

Great, I deleted the comment and banned it, then banned it, I still have it

It's like white lotus root🦶, with crystal red lips. It's really embarrassing. After you finish writing it, read it yourself. Just express it verbally. Don't make it look like writing a composition.

Writing a novel is inherently contrary to nature, and dying on the road is normal.

It's much worse than the previous ones. It's like an online game novel from ten years ago. The supporting characters are unlikable and just a burden. I can't tell where the designer of the title is. The level distribution is too bad and the span is too wide. The foreshadowing is also very poor. There is nothing except riddles. It's hard to believe that it is a book written by the same author.

Finally started writing heroine stories again

Song Xian's new book "I became a game designer!" ? Please add it to your favorites and read it~ If you don't like it, just support it. If you like it, you can vote for recommendation and read it... Especially, it's really important to read it, please.

Transform into a time-travel maid➕The villainous lady, the animation is available, the game is available, it's time to help the lady become a movie queen

So far, there has been a lot of talk in the chapters The author seems to have been writing for some years, and the quality of the previous books is quite good I personally think the subject matter of this book is quite novel and attractive I feel that the author may be able to do this this time It's because I wasn't too well prepared, which made the early updates uncomfortable, and the main story progress was relatively slow Well, uh uh uh, uh, that's it, I'm looking forward to the author's next work (If I were to reset this book, I would have to support it with both hands and feet)

The beginning is really unbearable. The protagonist has brains but not much sense. He travels to another world and boldly gives up on himself without looking for information and tries the unknown. He is not afraid of being found out and sent to be sliced.

Compared with the previous two protagonists, the protagonist this time is at least not as likable as the other two in terms of personality.

RT and MMO emphasize social and team skills, while Soul Games mostly emphasizes single player. Many soul game bosses are actually not as good as those in MMOs. They are designed to be played by a single player. As long as the toughness is low, your boss will still be a dog no matter how strong it is. If I form a group, I can take turns to attack and kill easily. If the toughness is high, it will be a difficult group. It will not be difficult if you practice more, because there is no penalty for skipping a level. Also in the modern army, all damage is done to the gun. Does interrupting the reloading count as interrupting the immobility?

Does the author actually have an outline? When I see it now, it feels like a mess. The plot is here and there. Forget it that the virtual reality game has rolling invincible frames. Now I see various characters appearing but there is no introduction to the environment at all. I still don't know where the protagonist is and how far away from the player's main city is.

The recent chapters are very poor in terms of sensory experience and are not that exciting. The content is still unclear and there are few updates. I hope the author can think about it well.

Hahahaha, I will also be a monthly ticket sponsor

Not pigeons, where are your books?

Overall, I still like it. It's a bit of a pity.

I really like the heroine's character, and I've liked it since the anime. Although the character design is very similar to Ha, it still feels very immersive.

Don't do this kind of thing😢😢😢😢😢

Ah, come on, it just so happens that I don't really like reading this kind of game articles. I'm looking forward to the next one. As long as it's a post, I'll definitely subscribe and support it.

This one really doesn't work, so prepare to get another one.

Gugugu... Gugugu... Guga! No more

Pigeons, when will the new book be released?

I just took a look at it. It's pretty good.