How Come You Have Such Strong Superpowers?

After seeing the latest chapter, I want to say that the protagonist is a bit too miserable. What the hell has he been deceived into? I encountered an accidental awakening of abilities, and was sarcastically criticized by the person in charge of the official. After entering the workplace, I encountered workplace bullying. I encountered four fatal incidents in one month of work. I took 60,000 a month, which was not enough to buy a cemetery. Each of my seniors was more unreliable than the other. After several times, the two seniors could not beat each other. They were pure drags. It has been more than a month since I joined the company, and I have not even been included in the company group. This is still official! The most ridiculous thing is that the protagonist of the new incident was dragged into the other party's secret realm. The two seniors gave up without even turning around to save them. If it weren't for the big mistake, they were sent on the spot. The immediate boss was ostracized by his colleagues. There are a lot of moles in an organization who want to take out the protagonist's underwear. There is also the underworld residual scroll that is unable to complain. Help, is your official organization at all reliable and professional? Every time you perform a mission, you have to have new people wipe your butts. It's even worse than northern Myanmar. You have to work hard when you go out, from C to one against five. When an incident occurs, one of your teammates will be killed, and the remaining four are all the heads of the protagonist. When you go home, you have to help your teammates practice being a father and a mother, and you get 60,000 pure black slaves a month.

The organization in this novel is the kind of decadent organization that is very classic in novels. It is nepotistic, oppressive and backward in the system. It seems like those who rebel are really being forced out. I understand that you want to take control of your own abilities, but the question is, can you explain it clearly from the beginning? Is it difficult to add this clause to the signed contract? You have to wait until everyone is familiar with your abilities and have reached a certain level of cultivation, and then you are informed that I will have the authority to deprive you of your abilities with one click, and I still ask you to hand it in in person. How arrogant? You either do this kind of thing when you don't have the strength at the beginning, or you hide it as a back-up, how could you do this? And that person named Xia, can he also be an HR person? There is a psychological problem, and there is no review or corresponding guidance. You are more private than private. Good guy, now that you know that anomalies are everywhere and there are opposition groups within, you don't unite all the forces that can be united, and you still push it outwards? What a family business. There are other people in this organization who know that there is a mentally ill person (Xia), but they don't provide guidance or find anyone. They just let it go, well, it's more of a family business. Also, what kind of nihilistic self-destructive tendency does the protagonist have? If you really have no self-destructive tendencies, the first time that woman targets you, she is already dead and you have self-destructed. Then there must be no consequences. You just have a name and look good, but there are no actual symptoms, right? What is the second phase of night emo NetEase Cloud.

I really wanted to read on, but I was really embarrassed about Xia Panqiu. Not only this female supporting role, the creation of other female characters is not considered successful. The description of the emotional drama cannot be said to be bad, it can only be said to be the blind obscenity and fantasy of emotions by a fifteen or sixteen-year-old student. The relationship with the other male co-stars is obviously okay, but when it comes to the role of the female character, she enters a state of shy estrus and courtship that continues regardless of the occasion and time. In addition, in the plot, when the protagonist uses power or ability that no one else has seen before, both the good and the bad will only use the words "what the hell is this" and a series of exclamation points to express shock. It is worth mentioning that this kind of pretentious thing happens frequently, so everyone is stunned, what is this, what the hell is this, and there is a screen of exclamation points. Regardless of whether it's vulgar or not, it just makes the characters seem shallow. The characters should have accurate personalities and positioning, but the contrast between the preceding and following events is ridiculous, but that doesn't mean it can't be done. After all, people are complex, and the human heart is complicated. It's okay to use some childish and innocent thoughts and behaviors to create contrast, but is it necessary for all characters to do this? Change is a good thing, but as for the mental journey, the transition is too abrupt. The current progress is about 230 chapters, and the evaluation is that it can be watched without all the emotional scenes with female characters (even including Arashi)

Does anyone know how to report these authors?

After reading it, the whole book is pretty good. The setting and plot are good. Although the combat power collapsed in the later period, it barely managed to come back. But I still have to complain about the author's writing method, which uses too many narrations and reverse sequences. The most annoying thing is that a sudden reverse sequence and narration occurs at the climax of the plot. Once or twice is okay, but if it happens more often, it will be disgusting. Many plots can be written directly, there is no need to go backwards and start over. The emotional line, the sisters are okay, but the others are too forced. To be honest, it's not about stallions, so there's no need for all the female characters to rely on them. The plot line is not a big problem, at least it can be rounded out, but it is still a bit too thin. It is difficult to support the Tiance organization from the perspective of the protagonist. Old butt, the remnant of the sect, the self, the aristocratic family, Buddhism, Taoism, and Tiance, the product of compromise. These are originally a huge plot point. After all, stubborn diseases are really hard to eliminate. Even Xia Yue, the strongest combat power in the early stage, cannot be dealt with. However, the protagonist easily handles it in the later stage. It feels weird to watch. Xia Yue can defeat the Kunlun God System by himself. I don't believe you when you say that he can't conquer the entire country. As a result, in the early stage, it was said that organizational problems cannot be solved by brute force. The protagonist's appearance is actually no different from solving problems with brute force. The description of the protagonist's abilities was not completely finalized in the later stage, including knife, shadow, clock, and wheelchair. The knife and the shadow were barely visible, the clock was vague, and the wheelchair was not visible, just like it was not written. Because the cheating in the later stage was too outrageous, the collapse of combat power directly caused the protagonist's abilities to be too vague. I won't go into details. The more I write, the more I feel like it won't work. Anyway, I finished reading it successfully, and I didn't stop reading halfway through. This book is worth reading. I would like to give some advice to the author: read the book to check for omissions and fill in the gaps. After all the changes are made, the writing level will definitely improve

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If you want to see the protagonist accept a girl with a low IQ, if you want to see a harem, if you want to see Japanese comics, I don't recommend watching the rest. It smells like a stream of consciousness, and you have to accept the mentally retarded child in the front, and then it's still seduction, and knowing that the protagonist has a childhood sweetheart, the protagonist also starts to persuade people to be good in this state of seduction, and then it smells like preaching, which is not exactly the same as advising people to be good 😰😰😰

Hurry, hurry, hurry!

Xia Panqiu makes me sick at the moment, not because he and the male protagonist don't deal with each other, of course that's part of the reason, but as a national public official who handles dangerous matters, she can't manage her own emotions just because the protagonist's abilities are a bit similar to her former colleagues. Is this the emotional management that a person in a key department should have? The author's writing of this part is a bit awkward, not to mention the lack of manpower in the special department. Since she is responsible for guiding newcomers as a leader, she is unqualified, especially for such an important department. Maybe her special ability is more useful for observing the psychology of people with abilities, but it can also be used behind the scenes. Why do you have to throw her out to disgust people? Speaking from real life, if there was a guy like this in the SWAT team, would you dare to trust the SWAT team to save you from the kidnappers? Not to mention that novels should not be brought into reality. This book is based on reality, but it just has a little more supernatural powers. The entire world view is still real society.

Such awesome management can only be imagined by humans. It allows people to do things that make them lose their heads, and can also deprive you of your abilities at any time. If this kind of thing happens in reality, only normal people will rebel.

Many people in the current plot, whether they are good or bad, are easily startled and then become hysterical, just like those idiots in Japanese anime who always shout Nani Masaka Bakana. There is always an uncomfortable feeling when watching them.

What do you mean, author? Set a fan value of 100 to speak, and let no one complain about your poor writing! The emotional description in this novel is messy and poor. Is this meant to describe two heroines? But your plot writing is poor and you haven't nailed any of it. A scene like Xia Panqiu could actually have been completed when Lu Wu appeared on the scene. It would have been better if she died directly, and the relationship between her and the protagonist heated up too quickly. The other heroine, Lin Ying, did not have many supporting roles, and the background was not explained clearly, which made her feel very outstanding. In addition, the protagonist's character was not well developed, and she did not feel like a normal person. It's okay to be put in small shoes by the heroine, it's okay to be monitored by the heroine, it's okay to be emotionally manipulated by colleagues, it's okay, it's okay to be told that you can forcibly strip away abilities, it's okay, it's okay to be assigned a dangerous mission... Doesn't the protagonist have any other ideas? There is a lonely description at the beginning, but the optimism at the end is not like that of a normal person. Moreover, a newcomer in Tiance Mansion can adapt to the constant scenes of murder and fights. Do you think it is normal? There is also the issue of Tiance Mansion. I can understand the emergence of the ability to peel off Huangquan fragments, but understanding does not mean accepting it. For example, it is like you are working for the boss, but the boss can take away all your money at any time. Can you accept it? Sooner or later there will be big problems within Tiance Mansion. Moreover, it is impossible for newcomers who have awakened their abilities to be under the surveillance of Tiance Mansion. Wouldn't those who are not under surveillance naturally push him to the opposite side? In this case, the villain forces cannot be completely eliminated. In addition, the real police generally follow the route of defeating the few with more and safety first, but the Tiance Mansion takes the route of competence first and defeat the many with less, for fear that their own people will not die quickly enough. And can't we give those who have had their abilities stripped away a chance? Just because they are not good at their abilities does not mean that they are not good at other things! Not even giving them a chance to do logistics research and development, I feel like Tiance Mansion is quite arrogant. In the end, there were a lot of factional conflicts within the Tiance Mansion. The protagonist could be assigned a position even if he killed a bad guy. This was due to the impure ideological unity and the inability to distinguish between right and wrong. It really just focused on abilities and not on ideological education. The more you read this book, the more confusing it becomes. It is said to be a refreshing novel, but your description is not exciting enough, and the plot rhythm is not clear enough

The official organization is such a child's play... I feel like even the management system of a small private unit is more reliable than this...

The beginning of the novel, the world building, and the description of the group portraits are all relatively good. If you keep it up, let alone the gods, it will at least be a high-quality book. Except for the relatively intellectually calming writing written by the official organization, it basically has no poisonous points. However, it fell apart as soon as it was put on the shelves. The emotional drama of the Japanese-style ambiguous pornographic novel was out of control. It was awkward to read, stupid and embarrassing. Take care of the author.

I quickly finished the review. The part before it was put on the shelves looked really good. After it was put on the shelves, it felt like a studio. The emotional lines were written randomly and the plots came and went. And up to now, I really don't know the differences in the personality characteristics of the several female supporting characters you wrote. You don't have a clear sense of image. After I saw the latest chapter, I regretted it. I really shouldn't have to look at myself to feel angry.

Handing over the fragments of the underworld and forcibly depriving unimportant rights is even more excessive than the superhero registration bill of Marvel next door. It cannot be tolerated if it is not contrary to nature Hostile countries must be very supportive of Tiance's policy. After all, it is really rare to see idiots who deprive themselves of martial arts.

It's a bit of a tasteless book, and it feels a bit too much like a Japanese light novel. If the female characters are changed or simply deleted, it's just a fairy tale. The battles were quite enjoyable to watch, but once the battles ended, it collapsed in a matter of seconds. But the group portraits and the characters were so silly that they almost looked like Japanese cartoons.

After scrolling through the comment section, I found that 80% of the people who said it was not good-looking were talking about Xia Panqiu's problem... No, do you all lead yourself to be the protagonist when reading books? It doesn't feel like the protagonist has accepted his grievance, but that you have been wronged. And I'm thinking that firstly, I'm not abusing the Lord, and secondly, this book isn't an invincible book at the beginning, right? Although the purpose of reading novels is to relax, the novel also needs to provide some grounding in order to feel more refreshed. Has the starting point environment reached an age where the protagonist cannot bear any grievance? Look at me and I will tell you that the era of your whole family is back?

It's still very interesting to watch in one go. Just that sentence, Tiance Mansion is too tight. I have never seen such a tight official organization. Unless you say that there is another organization above Tiance, but it is impossible. This time the secret realm is in the capital. If there is a higher-level organization, it is impossible not to come forward. It feels like all Tiances have become monks halfway and have not gone through political review and assessment.

I feel that everyone else is a stick, and the protagonist always takes the lead, and with so many captains, this organization was wiped out early and no one can take the lead.

I can only say that it makes sense for you to rush into the street 😅

I really thought it was well written at first, but the emotional line is really messy. I don't write what I love, and I write crazy about what I don't love. The plot is getting more and more confusing. The group portraits are not well written, but the characters are not well written. No one can understand the Crazy Riddler except the author who has an outline in his heart. Don't write art that you think is elegant. Author, appreciating both refined and popular tastes is the key to the popularity of a book. Besides, your quality is far from being a good book.

This rotten organization only knows how to strip others of their power, erase their memories, etc... Without considering whether others will be able to survive or live well in the future... It's normal for someone to betray... After all, if you strip the power of others and give them good jobs, it won't make people disgusted. After all, when they have the ability, many people become stronger except for immortality, and it's not just to make money and live a good life? Many people work hard for the organization, and the superiors can strip away their power and erase their memories at will, so he is also a new villain and is destined to be overthrown... Because many people have power because they are victims, not because they want to get power... After all, as mentioned at the beginning, those new people who had their power stripped away after half a year, the main Those who join the organization can't leave. They can't do it if they don't join. After practicing, they are no longer human beings. Their bodies have mutated and their blood has turned blue, and they can't return to normal life. If they don't learn those abilities and have no fighting power, they will die. If they learn, they still need to work desperately for the organization... In the end, if Xue Lan's authority is gone, there is no way to turn back to a normal person? If those people cannot return to normal lives, there will be reasons for some people to resent this organization...

The first female partner was a dwarf monkey. She was biased against the protagonist and put a camera on the protagonist. Later, even Qian didn't say anything. The protagonist turned around and talked to the female partner. She was pressed on the ground and used as a doormat to rub the soles of the feet. She also grabbed her own clothes to wipe the vagina. The protagonist of muddy legs Also gave An the label of a nihilist with self-destructive tendencies. Turning back to his teammates who didn't even sit down to eat together in order to save food, he took off two fingers and started to tear off the label. Shen Nong spent 100 points and that's it.

Write about sisters well and don't do anything like Xia Panqiu. The author is always writing emotional dramas that are uncomfortable and incomprehensible.

This book is pretty good, but updates are too slow

The emotional scene is very awkward. Although I understand what the author wants to express, it is still very awkward. I suggest you reduce the amount of words in this part and write it more concisely.

Oh yeah, I'm first! I want to declare Gu Xue is the best!

When I saw Ape Alien, I felt that the protagonist was very pretentious. Am I unable to understand the author's profound writing style? Take for example the scene in Alien of the Monkeys. The analogy is that a group of people with a monthly income of 100,000 yuan see a check worth 1 billion, and they try to grab it even if their heads are broken, and then the check falls at the feet of the protagonist. The protagonist picked it up, and then thought to himself, although my monthly income is only 20,000, which is not as good as the group of people in front of me, but I am just a homebody, playing games and ordering takeout every day, so the money is of no use. Then he threw it to the ground and said, "Go ahead and grab it like a dog." No, your protagonist is so indifferent to fame and fortune, so advanced, how could he be seduced by a job worth 20,000 yuan a month? As soon as I heard about the salary, I immediately made a decision and I did it. He is so indifferent to fame and wealth that he eats spirit balls every day until he vomits?