There Is Indeed Something Wrong with This Online Game Planning

I feel like it would be better to write less emotional scenes. My sister and Miss Mu have too much facial makeup. They are obviously trying to establish the character of a smart and capable strong woman. Their descriptions are all soft. I just look at the side of the protagonist in a daze and exclaim how cute they are. After watching it for a while, I can't remember these two people at all. Have you ever had any outstanding scenes, besides Tie Tie, Tie Tie, and the author, have you watched too many Lily shows in the early days? "When they met, they suddenly looked at each other and smiled.", "Looked at each other, and suddenly looked at each other and smiled." "Hold each other, and suddenly looked at each other and smiled." If they are dead, you can let them bite the lighter.

When I saw the latest picture of Ready Player One, I couldn't help but have something to say. The movie "Ready Player One" will always be the most special in my heart. In fact, what moved me most in it was not the easter eggs, nor the protagonist's various aspects... What moved me most was the last sentence, thank you for playing my game. You made the game, I'm here to play it. I compliment you on your game, and you say, thank you for playing my game. I think games are a type of art. Why? Because games can convey emotions. Just like novels, like music, like art, like sculptures, like dramas, like movies, games can build a bridge between producers and players, allowing players to experience the emotions of the producers. During this episode, he felt happy or sad. What kind of expectations he has for the protagonist, and what kind of ending he has set for the villain. This is what touches me the most, and this is why I firmly believe that games are art. This is not that the producer is "teaching you how to play the game", but the producer is sending an invitation to "how" to play the game. This is why there is the sentence "Thank you for playing my game". I think if this book had an ending, if this book had a fairy tale ending, it would definitely be this sentence. A few years later, Lin Yao will look at the "Congratulations on passing the level" on the screen, and she will also think of the time when making this game. Players are looking at her expectantly, hoping to hear news about the next game. Lin Yao has grown up, and so have the original players. They may have married, started a business, and are traveling in the world. The current group of players are new players, but whether they are old players or new players, they are all eager to play fun games. So Lin Yao walked to the stage again. She had one more thing to do and had to do. "Dear players, welcome." "Finally, I want to say to you, thank you for playing my game."

A novel composed of Yugi and Lily The beginning of the novel is not very good, I can't see what is going on, and the heroine is the heroine. The refreshing part is well written. In the post section, there is one thing to say, the writing is quite deliberate, and the repeated descriptions of the appearance of the female characters are a bit poisonous. In comparison, the supporting roles are much better. The chapters and comments about this chapter are really quite speechless. There are very few interesting chapters and plot discussions. Some readers are not very friendly. As for the plot, the cool points of the game are basically covered by the all-around game designer Qing Shitui. As expected, various games will appear in turn (actually, it doesn't feel good to write it this way, as it loses its unique flavor). Finally, the author can stop worrying about your appearance description. You keep writing about what kind of clothes to wear, what plumpness, what pertness and so on. Uh-huh, those who didn't know would have thought it was a color article.

The advantage is that the plot is acceptable, not rigid, and does not rely on the system to drive the characters. The protagonist has his own thoughts and ideas; the rhythm is well controlled, the cool points are on point, and there are few poisonous points. It has surpassed many of its peers in this aspect, and it can make people want to watch it; the protagonist and many supporting characters are vividly portrayed, although there are shortcomings or exaggerations, but it does not affect the overall quality; the overall professional content has no problems, there are few inappropriate things, and it does not affect the viewing experience. There are also many shortcomings. Firstly, except for the protagonist, the other two protagonists are really not brilliant in their portrayal. Their facial expressions are homogeneous, and the details and character language are not grasped properly. They are not even as vivid as the supporting roles of Zhu and Mo Shao. Especially the actions of the sister in the board of directors in more than 200 chapters did not reflect that her abilities did not match the character. The follow-up The supplement is a bit far-fetched. I don't want to affect the protagonist but I don't have a way to solve the problem. In order to highlight the protagonist, I have lowered the image of the sister. Secondly, the writing needs to be relaxed and relaxed, which is indispensable in daily life. However, the emotional line of the three protagonists in this article is relatively blunt, and the relationship between the characters is all based on hard copy, without any details. I carefully wrote interesting and warm details. In addition, the images of the other two protagonists are not full enough, which makes me want to skip or even get bored with daily life. Thirdly, the methods to set off the protagonist are not rich enough, which leads to some routines in the future. You can consider interweaving and connecting small plots to enhance the excitement of the plot. Fourth, some of the descriptions of the appearance are overdone, and the word "milf" is often used a bit greasy, which lowers the perception; finally, the interaction between the protagonist and other important supporting characters can be increased, otherwise it will be a bit of a waste of characters. Some places in the article are very interesting, which is more attractive to readers than a hard copy. The above is my personal opinion. Please forgive me for any inappropriateness. It would be great if the author could read it. I hope I can write better next time, and I will definitely support it then.

I don't like Lily's plot. Every time I see it, I feel like I just jump over it. Isn't it good to write about the content of making a game?

Two-thirds of a chapter is nonsense. How do you keep it like this? Can you write more? I've been chasing two books. I'm not a book fan, but I've ordered them all. Do you want to keep doing this?

Why is Mou Feng, who has been with Lin Yao for so long and has a good IQ in the early stage, still so stupid? It's time to discover that the forestry company is a bit of a policy vane! They all say that QR codes are not safe. You have to take it as a statement from the state and then be aware of it like other companies. In the end, the protagonist relied on the memory of his previous life to defeat a group of mentally retarded people, but that's all!

Lin Yao

After reading tonight's chapter I decided to read the book again. You won't be finished until I finish it, right? (｡ ́ ̀｡)

Please, please update at a later time.

This song is so touching, the promotional video should describe it more! I always put this on BGM to read this chapter. Write more!

This is my first fully-ordered novel In the past, I stopped reading it when it came to the payment stage It's a good book, come on, author,

What time does it update every day? The word count is really a bit short

After following it from beginning to end, I have only one thought: The author is so short! ! !

The light novel area used to be a two-dimensional area, and transformation stories have long been a common practice. 90% Of them are in the two-dimensional area because they have harmonized again and again. There are very few transformation stories now, but there used to be a lot of them, such as changing to a lily (Lily), changing to a single (single), and changing to a married woman. (Marrying) and gender change, as mentioned above, 90% are in the two-dimensional area and are all male videos. Instead of dwelling on these useless things, it is better to consider whether you are an audience for this type of subject matter. The choice of whether to watch or not is in your hands, right?

As soon as the song tribute arrived in the comments section, all the readers smiled at her. "Singing song, you are short again." Someone shouted. Xiange didn't answer, but casually wrote on the writer's page, 'Today's update has been completed. ', And then arranged a chapter. They deliberately loudly said: "You must have cheated on another chapter." "How can you taint someone's innocence out of thin air..." Xiange's beautiful eyes widened and he said in shock. "What innocence? I saw your chapter with my own eyes. The two-sentence plot is full of water." Xiange blushed, and the veins on his forehead burst out, and argued in a low voice: "Fine writing cannot be counted as water... Fine writing... The writer's update can Is it water?" Then there were difficult words, such as "describing the plot" and "explanation"... Which caused everyone to burst into laughter, and the comment area was filled with a happy atmosphere🐶🐶🐶😃😃😃

Hot Knowledge, Transformation and Substitution was a major category of male videos before being rectified. Moreover, if Baihewen belongs to a female channel, then Danmei belongs to a male channel? Secondly, don't you like seeing girls posting to each other? Lastly, girls should post more.

Personal complaint: There are many plagiarism routines in games, but this kind of plagiarism game that beta testers can play based on an incomplete memory can still play against Taiwan after just two games. I find it incredible! A game with no idea of ​​its future can actually allow Chinese people to spend a lot of money on research and development, and there are no specific parameters to compare the game. It is no less than a game that has an idea to be remade. The most awesome thing is that it can keep up with the development progress of the protagonist's game. Maybe it will turn into a completely different trash game later, and then the players will quarrel to increase the popularity. In comparison, it will be found that the people who steal the country are clowns, and the people who steal the country will blow themselves up! Isn't this routine a bit too bloody? Writing like this makes me feel that it really deviates from the title of your book. I would like to see the various tricks and plans after making 6 scenes, which will make players love and hate it at the same time! For example, after you tested "Hero", other companies saw the New World gameplay and began to develop similar moba games. Major game companies compete! Just like today's lol, dota, 300 heroes, etc. Mobile games are also king, Heian Kyo, Inhuman Academy, etc. Different games, different worldviews and backgrounds, and different heroes will attract all types of players. Isn't it great to write planning plans at this time? LoL's unlimited firepower, Clone Wars, Crying Abyss, all of these can be written, and you can also learn from Dream Three Kingdoms, Three Kingdoms 5v5v5, Guandu 10v10. Aren't these gameplay plans much more interesting than your initial routines? It feels like you have finished writing the early routines, but there are no plans or anything else in the back, which is outrageous! Now that I have started to make consoles, I can understand the development of a family business. Daily writing is also good, but there are always more daily scenes than game scenes. Everyone comes to see the game planning, not just to make games and follow the game company's various routines. It's so boring.

One hundred floors of knots🤣🤣🤣I just happened to have the tickets Does this have a fan base?

Those who talk about female videos should not reply. Just let them sink. Otherwise, they will come up again as soon as they reply, which will increase their popularity in vain. If you ask me, some people are just looking for trouble. It's understandable if they want to criticize the plot, the writing, or the characters. It's really just looking for trouble when they complain about the subject matter. If you don't like it, just leave, and you'll leave comments and curses while wandering around. Although the Internet is a public place, there is no rule that you cannot click in. But for example, if you don't like eating Western food, no one will let you go to a Western restaurant. Do you have to go to a Western restaurant and curse a few words before leaving?

I started reading this book in 2022, but there were some problems with the account in the middle, which caused the account to change. I also forgot the name of the book, but I still remember that there is such a book. I often search for games when I have nothing to do, and then browse from beginning to end, but find nothing. I have a bad memory, so I don't remember the title of the book at all. I only remember that the protagonist's surname is Lin. He likes to post stickers with his secretary. There is a mother of Switch in the label, and there is a clock slide in the company. Until just now, after searching for the game again without success, I suddenly felt blessed. The protagonist seems to be named Lin Yao. Finally found this book in 2024. I started to scroll down and found the place where I saw another account in my memory. Lin Yao did not appear at the carnival for the first time, and then I scrolled back. It seemed that the book was about to end. I hesitated again. In my memory, this book is very beautiful to me. Until now, I am looking for this book and trying to finish it. But at this moment, I hesitated. What if after watching it, I find that I don't remember it being that good? I thought about it for a while, and finally decided to add it to the bookshelf, but if I didn't read it, I would just let this book continue to be the most beautiful book in my memory.

The early stage is very good, but there are some problems in the later stage. At the end of the process, the protagonist discovers the problem, the protagonist ignores it, the problem becomes bigger, the protagonist is angry, the protagonist fights back, the protagonist declares victory, the protagonist discovers the problem again, and the protagonist ignores it...

This plagiarism incident is over. Kick me. I'm not going to read it. I'm going to use a routine to death. Obviously so many people don't like it, but I just want to write it. I'm really speechless.

Suddenly I felt that this book was starting to get boring. Ignoring the actual speed of hardware development, this bunch of games were released faster than the last, but what they showed more and more was how profitable the new games were, rather than how fun they were. Although it was a cheating game at the beginning, it was still very vivid and interesting. The protagonist also put his mind to researching which elements can best attract players. But when it comes to moba, I can only see its popularity, but it's hard to see the fun in it. The abruptness of the switch makes me think that this is probably the author's first console? I'm not an experienced Nintendo, but I always feel that the best-selling console of this generation, which balances power consumption and gameplay, is a bit lighthearted when it is created so lightly. I can no longer see the hard work that the protagonist has put into the game. No matter how brilliant the masterpiece is, it is not as good as the hundreds of pages of planning he wrote when he took the blame.

Hey, the heroine story, I'm still thinking about Gu Xue, so I didn't read the middle one because I wasn't interested. I hope this book can reach the same quality as Gu Xue's one 🙂

The comments are full of people who are on the wrong channel. I feel like I want to watch it even more.

Let me briefly talk about some of my thoughts after seeing it now 1. The most serious character separation is Mu Mu. From the beginning, the long-haired and black stockinged lady with the greatest workplace power has been directly reduced to a running vase. Maybe she works hard in places that we can't see. But the only one shown is Miss Mu. Miss Mu is completely different from the image of an independent and self-reliant strong woman at the beginning 2. The proportion of plot components. I read part of the book and wanted to read a cool article, so there is too little description of the game! Write more games! ! Part of me wants to read the post instead of writing about games! I want to see the busty sister! From a reader's point of view, there is no one who is right or wrong, but after writing it, it feels wrong. Writing games is not as hard as writing turn-based games at the beginning. It is nothing more than opening a new book and a new one, making a new one, and making a new one. I think the writing in the middle game is very exciting. At the beginning, I was also looking forward to watching daily dramas to see how to deal with family conflicts. Now I see daily family members with expressionless faces and even want to skip it. I don't think the problem should be attributed to someone being unlovable. It should be a big problem with the rhythm. There is no sense of time in the book. Now I don't know how many years have passed and what month I went there. What is the weather now? Such small details should add a lot of immersion and make the task more three-dimensional 3 Game. This is a book based on online game planning, but it feels like she does not want to be a traditional planner. She is also a founder of the online game genre. What is the planning in our impression? It is the life gate responsible for running the game. The man behind the scenes who determines the direction of the game! And the protagonist is completely a game developer. After he didn't compete with the players in a battle of wits and courage at the beginning, the whole main body of the book became crooked. . I probably think of this much. Writing a book is very tiring and hard. I hope that my sister can have a fulfilling and happy life while writing a book.

Tell me how you feel after reading this book. Really, really, really don't say 'stick' or 'hug' so frequently and repeatedly. As soon as similar scenes appear, you can jump to read the next few pages. If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, you can skip them or write them off. It's so embarrassing. I really don't understand the difference between these three girls in terms of characters. If you focus on games and feel that you have nothing to write about, you can just write about the people and things around you. The assembly line interaction that lasts for nearly a chapter is worse than the number of words! What's even more outrageous is that after reading the boring interaction, I still didn't understand what this interaction brought to the two ladies, or how it helped advance the plot. There was nothing that could be said to have anything to do with the book. Contents that wouldn't appear obtrusive if removed directly appeared so frequently. I was speechless. Brothers who think what I said is wrong can refute me with reason, but be sure to bring your brains to bear. Just swallow rz comments like 'you only want to watch but don't watch' and 'you only have to spend a few dollars to be a fan, so you are picky'. Consumption = right to comment. Even if you spend 5 yuan to buy a can at a convenience store, you can still get the boss to open the lid.

I'm a 20-year-old American girl who can still speak Chinese because my parents are from China but can't write very well, so I'd like to say sorry first. I really don't know how to use Qidian T~T It's too hard... It took me an hour to figure out how to leave a comment, and now I don't know if this is the right place... But! ! This book is really beautiful... I spent 5 days reading this book from beginning to end. While reading, I actually cried. I cried 6 times! I still remember the three worst times I cried: the first time when Lin Yao said she was leaving, her last live broadcast, and the last time she got a Love Letter... To me, this book feels much more than a love letter to games, but more like a love letter to passion and chasing dreams. Anyway, this story really moved me. I also write in my own free time, so I know how hard it can be and how fun it can be to receive comments. Also, I think you seemed a little tired when you wrote the end of the story... (That's why I wrote this comment) I hope you remember that your writing is beautiful, and there are always people in the world who appreciate it. Don't be sad!

He really just parachuted into the relevant households and kicked out the original team to pick peaches. . Then he died suddenly without the ability to update the version And the reality is crazier than the novel. Not only was he airborne and unable to update the version, he even fought. .