Welcome to the Nightmare Game

I just finished reading a copy, and I think this book is a bit interesting.

I have a few questions to ask. Just listened to episode 6. Let me round it up a little for you first. Ghosts have the power to forcefully knock one person into coma and seduce another. He chose to stay a wise one. It's possible that ghosts don't have such strength. It's a 50% chance. You may be in the extraordinary world. Our protagonist. It can be seen from the face of the corpse. See micro-expressions. I'm curious where he went to study? A ghost's rotten face can still have micro-expressions. The maintenance ability of this ghost is really good. A pair of ordinary human hands directly pressed the ghost's face, and the ghost was helpless. As far as I'm concerned, this isn't a ghost. This person is designated as a personal murderer. He will kill you if you turn around. If you don't, he will not kill you. There is no difference between him and a human being. Ghosts should be humanoid creatures, not humans. What's the difference between this and writing about people? There's a murderer behind that. I will continue to listen. I hope that there won't be any protagonists who rely on their own wisdom to play with ghosts and monsters without any solution. All ghosts. If you don't have any means from the underworld. It would really disappoint me.

Why do other people listen to pig's feet? Others can't find anything, just show pig's feet.

The story is well written, and the characters often don't look like they can survive. The main character in Raincoat Murderer loses his wits in the middle of the film. In the second script, the supporting character next to the main character has no role in the plot, but he plays a brainless character, which is completely contradictory to his cowardly character. This is a huge problem

Post a few more chapters, they will do anything (crying

To be honest, I especially like to support unlimited novels if they are original copies. At first I wanted to support you too. But apart from the first dungeon, which is usually mediocre and barely passable, the second dungeon is stinky and long. Those who watch are drowsy. There is no sense of horror at all. It doesn't matter if it doesn't feel scary, I just listen to the story. But I fell asleep while listening. I have tried to read this book several times, but I just can't stand it anymore. This may be one of the reasons why entry is limited and exempted.

The penalty for being unlucky in the second copy was ten times greater, and I didn't see the effect until I cleared the level. If you, the author, have forgotten it, why not change the penalty?

There is another truth. I have read too many novels of the same type. Infinite suspense novels basically end up with rubbish realistic plots. Writing less realistic plots is the best way.

I read Chapter 30 today. What can I say? There is nothing serious about it, but there is nothing great about it. It is a very standard book with no new tricks at all. It is just old wine in new bottles. Old wine is not good and nothing will happen if you drink it. It is a standard 60-point work.

I have a feeling of suspense after reading the first two stories for the time being... But I feel that many pits (story background) are not completed by the end... But it is a bit weird to get a high degree of completion when clearing the level.. For example, in the first story, the completion level of the dungeon seems to be only over 60 to 70 at most. For example, it is not clear what the use of the things in the sacrifice passage is... And the boss has not been introduced through the plot background and hastily passed the level... Then the early stage of the second story is suspenseful with the disappearance and return of Bai Wu and the nurse. Click... And then pick up the words of the patient and the patient... But the plot does not say what the use of these is from the beginning to the end. Or what is discovered through these... It is just a sudden investigation of strangeness and then coming to the fourth hospital and then ending it hastily.. It also does not say why the deputy director died... Reading it, it feels like the copy is incomplete... There shouldn't be such a high completion level... It's probably like understanding about 50% of the plot and then accidentally bumping into the boss room and completing the level... It should only be 60 70 dungeon completion... The plot of the dungeon is still good to watch... But there are too many pitfalls and there is no filling in, which is a bit uncomfortable...

The copy is good, but the writing is not enough, and it lacks the feeling of horror and suspense.

I just finished reading the first copy and read other people's comments. I think it's great for a lv1 author. I don't know how long the author has been thinking about it. I hope it can continue. After all, many great authors start high and go low. It's not easy to create a purely original copy. Come on!

The author has seen Welcome to the Nightmare Game?

Why is there no one in the comment section? Wouldn't it be deleted by the author because of all the criticism?

The copy is quite well written, but the character descriptions are far from satisfactory. Lin Hao, a person who got through the nightmare dungeon three times, should be a cautious character rather than careless. The little girl said that using her brain to make up for her brain was too ridiculous.

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Welcome to the Nightmare Game?

The writing and plot are average. I can read it but not think too much about it.

The plot is not procrastinating, and the descriptions are clear and concise, but the logic of the copy is not very reasonable. While emphasizing the need to distinguish between true and false, I have no brainers to trust the ghost Wang Huowei. I already know that I am in the copy. How can I confirm that the Wang Huowei in front of me is the ghost I know? After all, the illusion can extract memories and imitate my sister. But it would be great if you can write it. If you give me a pen, I can't write it. Personally, I feel that my wits and logic need to be improved a bit. Come on, author.

Very well written. Someone come quickly!

The writing is okay, but the plot design is not engaging.

No, the author, are you tj?

What's the use of Lin Hao? Does the author disgust readers?