I Was Chased at the Beginning, but I Got the First Quick Sword

I have read the author's three books. The full-level magic is undoubtedly the god among gods. It has the style of ancient times. It is a rare martial arts masterpiece. If it had been born 20 years earlier, it would definitely be more popular than it is now. The internal strength of the second Jiazi is a bit average, and the writing style and ideas have deteriorated. This one is pretty good so far, surpassing the second one but not reaching the level of full-level magic. The writing style is slightly inferior and it lacks some literature and art. In today's fast food era, many people cannot read books, have no ability to think, and can only vent their anger blindly. Therefore, the living environment of this kind of classical martial arts is very difficult, and there will always be all kinds of brainless trolls (referring to unreasonable trolls) in the books. If you like classical martial arts and martial arts, I highly recommend it.

I have read three books, and currently I feel that only the image of Su Laomo is more in line with my wishes To be honest, conditional enjoyment is what I value, and suspense and strategy are a plus. The second book was too early and too heavy on the latter; this one has alleviated it, but has not regained the state of the first one Of course, it is undeniable that it is difficult to write about martial arts who are not fellow warriors and do not cultivate immortality, especially when it comes to controlling combat abilities In addition, the description of pure emotional lines is a bit... Um, ancient style? From my point of view, I always feel that there is a lack of calmness and leisure, just like Jin Yong did not write about the beautiful scenery and the beauty of life after the war A little humble opinion will inevitably make people laugh. I hope it can be used to attract others, which is also meaningful.

I think this book is the one with the most martial arts flavor among online novels, far beyond comparison with other mixed martial arts and time-travel martial arts dramas. It is a truly good article with a sense of chivalrous tenderness. To this end, I also read Chun Chun's other works, five in total, but the first two were not my favorite style. Starting from the rewriting of martial arts, the writing style gradually matured. Each of the three martial arts books is more interesting than the last. I hope that purity can continue to be maintained and carried forward, and the more I write, the better. Keep the spirit of martial arts inside. Don't be like other white-collar writers who only write about upgrading and fighting monsters. It's completely tasteless.

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If you think this book is not good to read, please be patient and read the latest chapter. Then you will find that your initial feeling was right

It's not that the author is bad, it's that the writing is really hard to watch.

The reason why assassins are assassins is because they are mysterious and powerful. And it's not that assassins cannot be just. If they are too just, they are called knights. Assassins just charge money to do things. Recently, these things have gone too far.

The first one was really well written, but in the second one it started to mess up a bit and the quality dropped. In the third one, has it started to fall apart?

Suddenly looking back, many novel introductions are in this style. Similarly, the protagonist looks at the sky full of gods and Buddhas and says, "Please lend me your lives" or something like that.

In the first twenty chapters, someone wants to assassinate the protagonist's father, and the protagonist goes back to report the news. More than twenty chapters were spent on such a simple matter. During this period, there were various twists and turns, and the protagonist disguised himself as a stranger and sneaked in.

Shen Nong is dead, a huge poison After reading one chapter, you will want to spit two mouthfuls in the author's face The protagonist is the type of third-rate cool and third-rate Chinese comics, deliberately pretending to be cool, and then the author has to make the protagonist pretend to be cool every time in order to prevent readers from feeling that he is deliberately pretending. Then the female protagonist "accidentally" discovers that the person who feels that the show is cool is the protagonist, and then the female character begins to have mindless psychological changes. Or when you see the protagonist's back, your eyes feel familiar to someone Then after the protagonist "unconsciously" pretends to be cool, the female character "accidentally" discovers or meets the protagonist, and "depends" on the protagonist because of some kind of brainless psychology. Then the plot of the previous sentence is that the protagonist clearly wants to hide his coolness and walk away directly. That's fine, but the author has to arrange that kind of mindless, disgusting, embarrassing dialogue. The plot: The protagonist could just walk away, but then he sees the female character "happening" to notice him and catch up to him. The protagonist has already run away for more than ten miles, but the protagonist "can't run away", so the protagonist must go back and say a few disgusting and embarrassing dialogues: Is the girl falling in love with me? Isn't this not good? I charge a fee. And so on, and then it is said that it is to "get rid of", "cope with" and "reject" the pursuit of the female character... Moreover, very often, there will be five such "inadvertent pretense" in one chapter. The female character "happens" to see it and feel it Anyway, it is this type. It is so disgusting that I want to write a long paragraph for people to see it. Don't come in and be disgusted by this author🤢

The three martial arts books written by the author are indeed inferior to each other. It is obvious that the writing style has been improved and the design is also thoughtful. However, most of the old readers do not buy it. No matter how well you write and how diligent you are, if your grades are not good, you will not be good. This Kuai Jian Invincible novel is not that invincible. A time traveler who came back after the death of his original body quickly accepted everything about the male protagonist. He is a righteous martial arts person who cannot be more upright. There are inexplicably multiple female protagonists (at least two female protagonists) who are innocent. A smart man who was hunted down to cut off his original identity but not completely cut it off. Men and women have to be matched everywhere, so the conjoined man is hidden but not completely hidden, the invincible warrior with unknown combat power who has no level of martial arts but still has to fight for 300 rounds to try his hand is known to be awesome, and there are a lot of introductions to the main character of the Holy Body who have to meet by chance in a huge world to avoid being called weak but are still very weak. The protagonists in the author's works are all so affectionate and innocent. Wouldn't it be better to have a few less emotional lines or to have a few more that are not so innocent? I haven't finished reading the previous book, but I heard that the protagonist in the previous book became the leader of the demon sect, so does this book have the light of righteousness? The protagonist is cheating, and he is not invincible. His original body died after traveling through time. Is it reasonable to have such feelings for his family and pure love for his fiancée? In the last book, I saw the heroines coming out one after another. When I saw the princess, I didn't want to read it. This book is too watery and bland, and it doesn't have the refreshing feeling of Invincible Literature. I can feel that the author wanted to write a real martial arts book, but unfortunately it lost the refreshingness of the invincible novel and the chivalrous style of martial arts. I can only feel the bloody arms and love.

The collapse of combat power is too serious. If you don't have this level, it's better to divide the realm. Don't keep stacking boxes. The leaders of the first-class sects in the front are almost the same as the generals. Some are weaker than the generals, and some are stronger than the generals. The princes are about the same strength as the generals. The Buddha Prince in the back can kill all the leaders in Nanling; the war leader is stronger than the prince. Just one move left in the body of the soldier can kill all the leaders in seconds; the Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors are higher than the leader by I don't know how many levels, and the protagonist before killing the Ghost Emperor can easily kill the leader; in the end, the leader of the Tianxie Cult can beat the Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors by himself, so they can barely guarantee their undefeatability. Why is the Tianxie Cult doing so many twists and turns in front of them if they are so awesome? Just conquer the whole world directly, and hide like rats in the gutter. The Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors don't have a good relationship. If you find two who are alone and kill two, isn't the world at your fingertips? I don't know if it is representative of the latter. The level is too low. It all relies on lowering everyone's intelligence to set off the protagonist's average IQ level. They also boast that he has heaven and earth. None of the Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors has fully developed intelligence. There are several Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors who are as simple as three-year-old babies. The remaining few are either idiots or ostriches. Are these people still controlling the world? Being able to practice to this level means they are very cheating The soldier master behind knew that the protagonist had killed the Ghost Emperor, so he sent a group of ant-like masters to sneak attack on the protagonist, thinking that he could successfully seriously injure the protagonist. Even the masters of the six tribes also thought so, and the soldier master could do it. He could blow these people to death with his breath, let alone the emperor who could blow the leader of the army to death in one breath. The protagonist killed the Ghost Emperor again, and I don't know what the leader of the army thought That Yin Cao Conference was even more of a joke. The leader of Tianxie could kill Emperor Wu with just a glare. Emperor Wu dared to talk back to the leader of Tianxie. It is said that the leader of the Tianxie Cult is not in his right mind, and at this time he is thinking about the overall situation. It is enough for Mingming and the big shopkeeper to join forces, who do not take the Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors seriously at all, but they have to use Emperor Wu as a supplement, which is not enough to put a gap in the teeth of the leader of the Tianxie Cult. As mentioned above, it is okay, knowing that the protagonist is in the conference, You can't act rashly. Later, Emperor Wu rushed in like a brainless person, and the leader of Tianxie also rushed in like a brainless person. He gave experience as a gift and found an excuse. Why not just write about the protagonist meeting Emperor Wu while shopping and slapping him to death? The protagonist didn't expect that Emperor Wu would not appear in person at the Yin Cao Conference? Is there no possibility of finding a stand-in or being the person behind the evil mirror stage? You put on makeup and went in, and let three women stand there. Who didn't know you were here? Fortunately, Emperor Wu and Master Tianxie's intelligence was suppressed to the level of a brick. They ran out inexplicably. What's the use of hiding yourself with makeup? Anyway, these villains will come out even if they know that the protagonist is there, so it's better to kill the protagonist directly. You can get in, take off your pants and fart; gentleness also affects the setting. I have described the Tianxiang smelling body for half a book, but now the protagonist is unrecognizable with a mask The Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors are also clowns. As mentioned above, they are so powerful and powerful, but in the end, even a drop of water poison cannot be detoxified. The Yin and Yang layman's method of detoxification He is not very clever. He is helpless with this level of poison. That is, the protagonist has taken the poison of dripping water, or the Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors have been killed long ago. To advance the plot, he always picks up things with gentleness. It happened once or twice. Next time, it is better to just pick up the head of Tianxie Cult Leader and then forget it in the finale. The big shopkeeper poisoned the Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors. Emperor, one poison is accurate, and there is a way to absorb the internal strength and martial arts experience of the Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors. The Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors are all stupid and sweet, and that's all. The big shopkeeper has not completely used the Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors as puppets. He usually shuts down his phone, and his main actions are to cooperate with the protagonist. Doesn't it appear that the protagonist has a high IQ? It's too high in the crotch.

Starting from Su Mo, other authors are getting better and better as they write, but this author is getting worse and worse. After reading this book, I will never read another book by this author again.

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In the first few chapters, the waiter in the shop gave you two cakes and a bowl of water, but he was killed by a horse thief. You were right next to him. He was obviously the fastest swordsman in the world, but you just watched and waited for revenge, just to promote the plot. Martial arts warriors don't have a chivalrous heart, right? The details are too rough, and it is in the details that you can see the character creation skills.

I really clicked on reporting it. 💔 I understand that you want to make money to support your family, but you can open the box first and then write about other things. If you don't, what do you think of the readers, brother? What readers like is this book, this martial arts world, not your little thoughts! I have been following your first book until now. I often recommend your books to my friends. When you write about conspiracies and conspiracies, no one thinks you are slow in word count. I understand that it is easy to get tired after fighting and killing all the time. Just open a box and you'll make people wait day after day. What do you think readers are waiting for? We also have emotions. If I wait for you all day and you don't open, it won't make me look forward to it any more, it will just make me feel as uncomfortable as eating a fly. Separate priorities, do business first, and talk about other things later. Those who change their pursuit of books will still pursue them, and those who want to support them will not stop raising them just because you can't open the treasure chest. I sincerely suggest you enjoy yourself a little bit. We only read two chapters every day. We will not give up this book just because of a few boxes. There are some men who do not yearn for the world of martial arts.

Just open the box and open a few chapters, but you only open half of it. Who are you disgusting? If you order another chapter, it's just me being a bitch!

Oh my god, Night Emperor? ! It's really embarrassing. I would like to ask if the protagonist only used it this time, or if he uses it all the time. Let me know if you saw the guy behind you.

After joining V, the quality dropped rapidly. Group after group of well-known sidekicks appeared. Every incident was caused by the conspiracy of the Tianxie Cult. Once or twice is okay, but too many are really boring.

After reading Chapter 592 and a few chapters left to finish, I really can't stand it anymore. Take the harem to conquer the world. He takes his group of women with him wherever he goes. Think about it from another angle. If Li Yunlong went to fight in Sword, instead of being surrounded by his comrades and comrades, but by a group of women, would it be possible to watch it? I really don't know if the author is writing martial arts or romance, every chapter is full of grinding and flirting.

It was a bit unpleasant to watch. The villain's arrangements were so awesome, and all of them were mysterious and mysterious, as if they were cultivating immortals. The King of Shows and the King of Tombs fooled the protagonist around. The protagonist was led around by the nose, and he couldn't beat the small bosses. The Tomb King had stronger internal strength than the protagonist in all the tombs, and the protagonist could only defeat the protagonist by relying on his internal strength. How powerful is the big boss at the back? Isn't that just making fun of the protagonist, little Karami? Hurry up and arrange some high-strength ones to crush them. Don't be so aggrieved. Your strength is far worse than Su Mo's...

The battle strength collapsed drastically. In a cult, the leader can defeat the Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors at a young age. It feels like the leader is the one who controls the system. Then what kind of military leader has eight generals who can torture a sect leader who has been inherited for hundreds of years and has been in seclusion for decades? It takes three years to unify the northern and southern territories? The leader can directly kill the Ghost Emperor, and a few of his subordinates can directly push him forward. What kind of conspiracy and tricks are they still using here to kill the protagonist in turn?

In summary, one book is not as good as the other

I haven't finished the book yet. I can't stand it after more than 30 chapters. The plot advances too slowly. It's a lot of nonsense and the setting is also toxic. The protagonist makes me feel like the protagonist from The Master Descends from the Mountain that I watched more than ten years ago. He can't walk when he sees a woman, but the setting is killer. Isn't this a contradiction? The beginning is okay, but the rest is a mess.

How about you continue with the plot of walking escorts? To be honest, the plots of your next two books are really poor, especially the descriptions of emotions and women, which make people feel very embarrassed. It's better not to have emotional dramas.

It feels much better than the previous one 🙂

After the 400th chapter of this book, I don't know why the author is so angry, but the good invincible writing overwhelms the combat power. In the first part, Su Mo looked so smooth and invincible. From the beginning to the end, he never used his full strength. Every enemy he encountered was forced to run away. What about this one? After the 400th chapter, every boss that needs to be fought requires all the strength, and many of them even pose the threat of death to the protagonist. Am I here to see this? If you don't even have the most important characteristic of yourself, the easy push, then you deserve the poor grades.

I have read Chapter 400 so far. Isn't this combat power too collapsed? I don't know if what I said is wrong: when I was in Nanling, I felt that the bosses of the major forces could not defeat the princes. After Han broke through in Beiling, he was stronger than the bosses of the major forces and then on the same level as the eight generals. At the same time, some princes were at the level of warrior generals or even weaker than the warrior generals. That is to say, the bosses of the major forces <war generals<war masters. If there is no protagonist, Tianxie Cult would just push it. After all, the level of the second disciple of the ghost emperor, one of the five emperors, is not seen to be higher than the power master.

I can criticize any plot, no matter how the author writes it. I am really convinced. I advise you to read the book and not read the chapter reviews, they are an eyesore!