The Immortal Martial Venerable

The more I watch it, the more it looks like the first part of "The Master Dao Wants to Ascend" 😅

The protagonist of this book is too eccentric The protagonist is soft-spoken but not tough-minded, and acts without any roundabout considerations. When he learned that his colleagues and superiors were guilty of killing good people and taking credit for their crimes, he did not secretly collect evidence to protect himself. Instead, he went directly to his superiors to question him face to face. The superior had tactfully prevaricated and deliberately avoided, but he still took a tough stance, forcing the other party to give a clear position and pushing himself to the forefront. What is even more confusing is that he was already being traced, and the reason why he was traced was the previous sneak attack murder caused by exquisite archery skills. But he was in a dangerous situation, and he actually used this highly recognizable archery technique in public, which confirmed others' suspicions about him on the spot. However, these are minor flaws and are barely acceptable. The overall story still has merits, but the logic of the protagonist's actions is really hard to complain about.

Overall it's pretty good, the only drawback is that the update is too slow

The plot follows the rules and there is nothing too poisonous, but other quotes from a book friend

This kind of book cannot solve a common problem. It requires various exercises to consume points and suppress strength. Why can't there be less exercises? Speed, defense, physical body, weapon skills, secret skills, major, that's it. New consumption points are added at every turn, and it keeps going down. If you don't put any effort into the plot, you are either reading the panel or on the way to see the panel. The numbers are watering every day.

The protagonist hasn't become stronger yet, things are coming in waves, it's too fast. Not interesting

We have to build up our character and attach great importance to love and righteousness all day long. Wouldn't it be better to sacrifice them all to heaven as soon as possible? I've been chasing it for a long time, but recently I really can't stand it anymore, the water is so ridiculous. I said I don't want to watch it. Whoever wants to watch it should go and watch it.

Pei Tugou really ruined the entire martial arts genre. He taught the author how to play with the readers' psychology, how to draw a big pie and hang a piece of meat in front of the readers but not eat it, and how to set up the climax without writing the climax.

The last author who made me feel so uncomfortable was Pei Tugou. The number one reason for all the worlds is this. After dozens of chapters of foreshadowing, the plot is full of emotions, just waiting for a battle that will determine the difference between superiority and life and death. In the end, when it is time to fight, he is as cowardly as a dog. What are you doing without a fight in those dozens of chapters? It is fun to toy with the readers, right?

The more I watch it, the less interesting it becomes. There is no plot, it just describes the protagonist's breakthrough, and every picture is the same.

Just read chapter 1 and skip a few chapters. Just look at the title and you will know the content. There are long paragraphs of nonsense that are repeated over and over again. The actual plot is probably less than 30% of the full text. The problem with the protagonist is even greater.

They have so much background, so much foreshadowing, and it's so verbose to fight a sword slave and a Shangguan. He also competes with the second grade, is the second grade so weak?

The author could write better. There shouldn't be so many masters in a small county. It's outrageous that gold and silver can buy treasures from heaven and earth. The arrangements for breaking the limit are also messy and long-winded. It's outrageous that the weather can affect the masters even if it's so high-tech. Ordinary people are still alive in that weather.

It's 1.2 Million words long, and it's finally coming out of Novice Village. The plot is basically zero, and it all depends on the word count. They also engage in routines like Liu Xiahui's to whet their appetites.

Classic cool article. The protagonist knows nothing except practicing martial arts and killing enemies, or to be precise, the author is very attentive to the idea of ​​the protagonist's training, upgrading, and killing enemies, but not much attention to the rest of the plot. For example, the protagonist obviously did nothing, but it makes people feel that the protagonist is an ungrateful person. Obviously changing a few sentences can greatly improve the protagonist's image, but the author doesn't care at all. The upgrade is well written, but some subplots are too sloppy and slightly affect the senses. Overall, I feel it's worth watching.

The number one reason in all fields of physiognomy, but I can't describe Yang Yu's personality charm, martial arts, and the settings of Shinto. It's a pity.

It was okay at first, but the more I read, the more I read it. Finally, I just threw it under the bookshelf, and I didn't have the heart to read it!

There are over 90 chapters since going to the county town, and the average speed of one chapter a day for 3 months is very few that can really be considered a battle. Every chapter is practice and practice, and even if you lack resources and borrow money, you have to practice, even if you work behind closed doors, you just play.

The pace is too slow. After entering the martial arts hall, there are no conflicts or gains in more than 20 chapters. There are only a few settings that are not covered in half a chapter. What do you want readers to read? The writing is just a lot of chattering back and forth, I'm afraid I didn't hire a ghostwriter.

The so-called heroine is actually a time traveler! Rubbish!

A clever and classic novel, of course the plot is also very classic and there are no new ideas to read.

The plot between the protagonist and the princess is very inexplicable, like a sudden illness

The plot advancement is too dry, the number of words in the panel is too obvious, the label is a hook, but I didn't see it, and I don't bother to talk about the rest. You will know it after reading a few chapters.

Extremely missing → incomplete → partially missing → half missing → slightly missing, it can really be corrected.

It's very good. The only drawback is that it's not that exciting, but it's good in every aspect. There's no inexplicable ridicule and hostility in the so-called "Bitterness and Enmity". The protagonist develops secretly when he's cheating, unlike other books where he's cheating and then goes out to wander around like a dog, being beaten up like a dog, and then inexplicably defeated by cheating.

Can you not write about Heavenly Court? It feels very dramatic. It always reminds people of the real-life Fengshen, Journey to the West, and The Wilderness. It lacks a lot of sense of exploration, curiosity, mystery, and freshness. Isn't it good to be in a completely unfamiliar time and space?

All well written. The disadvantage is that there is no climax, and there is not a real fight in the whole book 😅 Every time the atmosphere is set up, I just wait for the protagonist to come out and fight, but the author always uses other methods to make the protagonist stagger the fight, and then waits for the protagonist to improve a lot, then secretly kills others alone, which is not fun at all

An average novel, the plot content is a bit watery, the villain has a slight intellectual decline, and the protagonist's character is a bit selfish and taken for granted.

You can write two chapters by eating materials and earning gold. The last book that was so good I remember I read Tiantang Jinxiu

Che Zhuglun talked over and over again, and he could write three chapters of what others wrote one chapter.