All Mankind Has Fallen!

And what I appreciate the most is that unlike some back room fan fiction, where the protagonist purely treats it as an amusement park and grinds dungeons, it really depicts the feeling of survival in the back room. However, the protagonist's stakes are quite high. I hope to focus more on the content of the back room. Other novels will also write about real-life struggles, but the content of the back room is unique to you. Once you write it, readers will be very sticky.

You can post comments here with suggestions and bad points. I will read every one of them! The poison points will also be changed! (There are spoilers, so be careful)

The organization is immature and the protagonist's mentality is immature. The author may be young and lack experience in organizational operations. Nothing else.

Although the plot is a bit incoherent and the pace is a bit fast. But as long as you persist, you will definitely succeed. Don't be knocked down by the unsatisfactory data in the early stage. Since you have started a new book, you must stick to it and don't regret it. Finally, I would like to send you a pair of self-encouragement couplets from Pu Songling: "Those who have a will, things will come true, even if the cauldron sinks the boat, a hundred and two Qin Pass will eventually belong to Chu; a person who works hard will not be let down by God, and he will eat his courage even if he is tired, three thousand Yue Jia can swallow Wu."

It's not that exciting, and the writing is good, but it doesn't fit the online writing market.

The protagonist did not realize his own preciousness, did not realize the uncertainty of the people returning from the Matrix, and did not fight for enough rights for himself when the second exploration of the Matrix was a foregone conclusion The person in charge of Brake Pads also seemed to have no experience in exploring the unknown world. He did not try to send an exploration team in the form of a squad + guide protagonist, and did not consider the protagonist's ability to survive without equipment. It seemed that he was not trying to obtain the Matrix information. He acts with the goal of collecting information, but simply wants to throw the protagonist into death But the person in charge of Brake Pads is businesslike, directly informing the protagonist of the rules and regulations, pointing out the recovery of abnormal equipment, but will equip you with ordinary equipment, so that the protagonist can protect himself as the first goal and return the news for as long as possible, and the whole thing will not be so rigid There is a stereotyped villain impression, and there is the shadow of another similar novel.

After so many years, another novel similar to Blue and White Society has finally appeared. Although it is really not pleasing to say that the protagonist's family is not included, overall it is still good.

It's such a frustrating book, and the progress is so slow, so why are people reading it?

Tuesday's catch-up reading is really important! Please stay for half a minute in the last chapter!

If you don't like this, the protagonist will be treated as a guinea pig at the beginning, and he will be captured and studied. He has no freedom at all.

After reading the first few chapters, the boss's obvious and obvious maliciousness was a bit uncomfortable, as if he was deliberately trying to force people to react. The work is a good one, but the violent institution in the shadows that doesn't pretend to be fake is still a bit strange...

Back Room + Foundation, I like both of them very much, why not invest in science fiction? This theme is not urban at all QAQ

When I first read some of the comments in the comment section, I felt a little reluctant to read it. But after all, there was no book to read, so I read it for a while. I felt that the writing was okay and I could read it. There are indeed the shortcomings they mentioned, but they do not affect our enjoyment of the story. It would definitely be better if it was written by someone with experience, but the author has done a good job.

Everything is good. I feel like there is no problem with how the master writes it. If a newcomer has to suffer from the pig's feet for too long, it will be difficult to get ahead.

Are there exclamation points at the end of popular book titles these days? Suddenly found that several books on the bookshelf are like this? Because the title of the book is heavy?

Come on, author, the student party doesn't have much money, so they can only wait for it to be released and fully subscribe to support it.

Do you have any recommendations for Foundation containment novels?

It took a long time to prepare, but the result is still not satisfactory. The group portraits are very messy. Compared with online articles, this book is more like a set collection. I was really fooled by the previous book. I thought it was another mysterious Earthsea book. The result..., I can only say that the greater the expectations, the greater the disappointment.

The settings are okay. It would be better to write two more books.

This book is very interesting and well written, but it's a pity that it has been discontinued.

I like this kind of back room type of writing, but it's a pity that I can't find any good ones.

When will the new book be released? Is it still the same type?

Check back every day to see if the author changes his mind and updates. . .

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Social structure and organizational operations are too buggy