Become a Taoist Master by Starting from the Underworld

The writing is really long-winded, and I keep writing one thing over and over again. It's really watery.

Don't say anything else, let actions speak for themselves!

The bigger the world is, the bigger the target is and the more we catch up, the less we can taste it

I traveled back in time when I was 12 years old, and I have read chapter 100. The timeline has not passed a month. It seems that the 13-year-old is really invincible. I am convinced. I can't stand it anymore. The feeling of separation is too serious.

Even though she is a female author, she still feeds off male videos and makes the male protagonist stupid and timid. What does this mean?

The protagonist's main theme is that suffering is a blessing, so why should the benefits be shared equally? Wang Kui was about to kill him, but he didn't plan to take revenge? It's really outrageous, and you smashed thousands of taels of talismans and went out, and the other party just took away all the best things with peace of mind? The protagonist's indifferent attitude? The only handkerchief I got was actually given to someone else's pet. We went out together and got nothing. Just a few pieces of broken grass, and you have to share half of the money with others. You must know that the other party is basically led by the protagonist. Without the protagonist, he would probably die.

To be honest, it really doesn't look like what the old author wrote. The subject matter could have been good, but the writing was so poor and boring that it was like a piece of trash, so it would be a pity to abandon it.

After writing Chapter 73, 10 days have passed in the timeline of a 12-year-old child! Fortunately, I took a look at the review. It has 800,000 words and the protagonist is 13 years old. . . . . .

The writing is putting the cart before the horse, and it is based on the theme of fighting against evil. There is very little about doing evil, and it is all about martial arts. There are masters who choose to be evil, and they also worship masters who practice martial arts. This is a poisonous point. There are a lot of articles about the same type of martial arts, and the writing is better than the author. If it is written in the direction of martial arts, the book will become useless.

What nonsense, I am going to die. Just fucking stare! Who will die if you don't die? People who have no ability at all are still looking for trouble every day. Can you kill ghosts? I won't follow the ghost every day

No wonder the results are not good, Shi Hao's disgusting thing in front of him can persuade seventy people to quit.

The plot of this book is good, but the protagonist is too rubbish. The protagonist here is the kind of person who is extremely independent and is a lone wolf in the world. From the time he traveled to the past, he encountered a strange incident for several days. He was about to die, but he didn't tell his family. Later, the family saw something was wrong with him and hired a ghost to save his life. However, the same plot happened in Chapter 14. The protagonist watched an apprentice in the dormitory being sucked by a ghost. Even if he didn't care about the life or death of others, he still had to care about his own safety. After all, the ghost was around him, but the protagonist remained silent. His mouth seemed to be covered with shit. If you can't solve it yourself, you can talk to the people at the medical center.

The number of questions written is terrifying. First of all, they are very bad at mathematics and can make mistakes in calculations. Then I forced the protagonist to meet things, and the little naughtiness kept coming, which was really unbearable, so I subscribed to a chapter to criticize the author. The author is already old, how could there be so many little problems.

Brother, one chapter a day, don't be so sloppy... Do you really want to teach me by writing down the cultivation process in such detail?

Anti-theft or anti-chapter? Released in the early morning and can only be viewed after 12 noon the next day, bad review

There are constant little poisons, the plot is cliche, and it barely counts. If you use your brain more, you will get a headache, and you can't stand the scrutiny.

I have read more than 60 chapters. I won't talk about it earlier, but in the part about killing the ghost, you can tell what kind of cultivation the officials have, but others can't tell yours? What's the point of hiding your magic skills? Since your lack of money is exposed, why not make money by selling charms? As mentioned before, only when a genius is exposed can someone train him. Moreover, the protagonist has to work during the day and only has time to study at night. The key is that he likes to join in the fun. He can't defeat ghosts every day. If you like to hide, just hide away. Besides, you don't have many spells, wouldn't it be more suitable to communicate with your colleagues? Do you have to work for someone else? Furthermore, if you want to learn martial arts, wouldn't it be bad to reveal that you know how to get rid of ghosts? How many people respect the kid who sold you the talisman in front of you? If you want to learn any martial arts, just exchange the talisman with the shopkeeper and let him teach you. In this world of ghosts, wouldn't he be willing? Instead, he went to work during the day and came back at night to learn the basics of cultivating immortals. It is hard to see that he has the brains of a modern person and is still a time traveler... The author should polish it up. What he writes is inconsistent

There is no difference between those who have no ability, are weak and always go to idle life and die. Those who still wear pure SB, a gentleman who does not stand in danger will not understand the temptation of having Tang Monk's meat on his lips.

The realm of martial arts: The first realm of meat refining (externally forging skin, flesh, tendons and marrow, and the internal refining of the internal organs) The second realm of power The third realm of Yuan Gang … Taoist cultivation: The cultivation realm of the Yin walker: The first realm: igniting the heaven and earth , three human fires Entering the Tao in the second realm: burning the body with fire, building the soul Entering the Tao: leaving the body, night travel, day travel Refining the soul: true and false, transforming into Yang, killing life … Immortal Evil level, severe level, evil level, Chong level, disaster level, calamity level

This shouldn't have ended halfway! 🙂

I don't want to complain, the plot is acceptable, some of the logic is a bit far-fetched, and the characterization sometimes hits my head (the emotions are used incorrectly), but forget it, the poison resistance is high and the tolerance is high. But there are three main points that make it uncomfortable to read. First, the data is always messy. It was said to be perfect, but after a few chapters, it is written back to a masterpiece. Who can bear this, it is too stressful; second, the timeline is too slow, everything is explained bit by bit, and it feels like a long time has passed to the senses. But at a glance, Chapter 130 is still in the middle of the novice stage. If you plan to write two or three thousand chapters, tell me early, so I can withdraw! Third, the protagonist's power system is too complicated, biting off more than one can chew, and not systematic. The main reason is that the author himself can't remember the realm. It's inconsistent and brain-breaking.

I want to read it but don't want to. It's too boring. Only ten days have passed in the book with more than seventy chapters.

The story is interesting, but the poisonous points are one after another: I said before that my parents could only save about 30 copper coins a month, but your mother lives in a small yard in a small town and the annual rent is 30 taels. What nonsense are you talking about?

It's better to delete it, otherwise it will become too distorted if you look at the content in the back where you are trying to compete with your children, you have to start all over again in reading and literacy, you don't even know how to hold a pen, etc. As a modern time traveler, you can write ugly words, but it is impossible to write them so that others will not recognize them. The general meaning of the book may not be understood in every word, but you can also roughly understand the meaning. A brief look at 5 chapters is not my cup of tea. I hope the author can write a book that is logical and self-consistent.

Is the protagonist 14 years old? ? ? ? I've read Chapter 225... Is the author too ignorant of the protagonist's age... As of Chapter 225, is he 14 years old? …

It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away.

The division of realms is messy, the details are poorly written, and it doesn't stand up to a little scrutiny. The currency is also messy, and the logic conflicts. Don't read it with your brain, and it's not fun enough.

Like a fool, it ends right after it started! Now that I have a certain level of popularity, I think it will become popular if I write about it, silly

It's repeated every day, so I'm clearing out my bookshelves.

Why did it end so suddenly🤔 It's not that the writing was very good, it's getting better.