Ascension

You only linked your number for the purpose of commenting. What the hell did you write? After reading your Super Shinto Technique, I thought it was pretty good. I vomited after reading a few pages of this Jidao Ascension. In a world where all people practice, the first time I bought something, I spent 7 star coins. When the heroine met, she gave the hero something worth 1 million, and then the hero ignored the heroine while accepting the benefits. Is this kind of forced matchmaking okay? There is also the possibility that the heroine's family is the enemy who killed the hero's family. Do you think we are still living in the civilian era and there is true love everywhere in the world? Also, you killed a few members of the Tiger Squad and sold them for more than 200 million. Is your money money? It is much worse than Super Shinto Technique. There are two extremes. Super Shinto Technique is a human being. In a world of force, no one will pity you. They all have a purpose. There is no bad person. You can only rely on yourself. Before the strength is not strong, you can even be a dog. People can bow their heads under the roof. If you don't want to die, you have to look at your face. If you have strength, you will kill it directly. This is normal. If you don't have strength, you still clamor. I read this book after reading your Super Shinto Technique. I feel like it was written by two people! One copy per person!

I just found out, why has it changed recently?

I've read about 10 chapters. Goodbye.

The main character's name is too **. This is why most readers give up after reading two chapters.

Overall, I feel pretty good at the beginning, and the plot is quite exciting, 😁 However, the backdoor is that the protagonist's training is getting faster and faster, and "rushing" begins to appear in the later stages, and the ending is just for the sake of the ending, which is not very good 😃

Whoever draws this book in the activity raises a paw

There is no use keeping this month's monthly tickets, so they are all donated.

I said, is it necessary to give away the eleven spiritual stones? They don't lack your money, but for you, it's the capital you need to become stronger, okay?

It feels so short The year-end ceremony has also been supported. I wish you good results and please support me more.

Monthly tickets are given. Come on, the first fully ordered book 👍👍👍

Author, your new book is very different from this one. This one is full of poisonous points, and the pretentiousness is not good enough. Why can't the new book be pretentious? The protagonist is so low-key. I came in through your new book. The golden finger and the subject matter are quite to my liking, but there are too many poisonous points, and I really can't stand it anymore.

I endured reading Chapter 25 and was still poisoned. Every chapter is poisonous.

I was shocked after reading the first chapter of this book. The protagonist went to the martial arts school to learn martial arts, and he was not late. His friend told him to hurry up, and he was taught the Seven Star Steps you want to learn. Then the protagonist thanked him, and his friend said no. The protagonist said that he should keep these things in mind and thank them one by one in the future. Oh my god😱, what happened? Who can tell me, how helpful it was? ? ? Waiting online, it's so urgent that I can't sleep well at night! ! !

I only have one question, is it easier to write about swords than swords? Why is it necessary to write about the protagonist using a sword in a spiritual recovery article? Isn't he handsome with a sword?

After reading Super Shinto Technique, I came back to read this book. The gap is too big. I really don't believe it was written by the same person. The protagonist's character is too bad and the plot is too rigid. It's okay for the Wolf Warriors to destroy the Li family. But when it comes to the protagonist, an uncle pops up. It's completely a forced conflict. It's really awkward after reading dozens of chapters.

Some of the author's plots are contradictory. You are invincible and he is invincible. Who is invincible?

The parents surnamed Hu indirectly killed the protagonist's parents and had an inexplicable affair with them. The beautiful teacher also inexplicably liked the 15-year-old protagonist? ? The relationship with the teacher is inexplicably confirmed. The mistress is in charge. This is, emmm, are you a stallion or a double heroine? If you don't know how to write a female character, don't write it. This is an embarrassing group. The currency system cannot collapse anymore. Those who have come from the Super Shinto Technique need to consider the trend of the Super Shinto Technique in the later period. This book originally looked okay, but before I even touched on the ambiguous character with the heroine, it gave me a pot of shocking shit, three views NB.

I got addicted after seeing 50 photos. To sum up: 1. Routine text; 2. Various settings are unreasonable. For example, if you have qualifications for pig's feet, killing a monster will cost you hundreds of thousands or even millions; monsters in the Qi training realm will cost you hundreds of millions; and three hundred million will raise your qualifications to the top level. 3 All kinds of brainless supporting characters. They are considered to be great masters at first, but in the end they have no big heart at all. Ready to Test Poison Immediately, Author's Second Book

I hope the author can change it, otherwise it will be uncomfortable to watch, so I will only talk about Chapter 567: The protagonist goes hunting in the wild, kills a half-meter chicken, cuts off the head of the chicken with a knife, and blood flies wildly. After that, the protagonist grabs it and puts it in the bag. In my opinion, if he is not the protagonist, he will be dead after doing this; then he finds a cave and blocks the entrance with a big stone weighing more than 2,000. The protagonist removes the chicken feathers in just a few seconds. What a cow, what is the hand speed of decades~; after that The protagonist makes a fire in this cave to make barbecue~tsk; after that, the protagonist eats chicken and starts practicing. He has 108 bones in his body. Hehe, the protagonist is not a human, because humans have many more bones than you~; the protagonist eats the "medicine" given by the heroine in this cave and falls into a coma. The protagonist is not dead yet. The barbecue chicken has been roasted for half an hour. Can the stone seal the cave tightly? The aroma of the roasted chicken plus the smoke may not be the best for the people on the mountain. Are all the wild beasts attracted? Speaking of which, I think the protagonist has a hundred lives, and six of them will die in these three chapters. What do you think? 🤭

I thought if I jumped and watched, I wouldn't be poisoned. Sorry, I'm still too young.

The monetary system has collapsed, time has collapsed, the relationship between the male and female protagonists has collapsed, their power has collapsed, and they are worth millions. They come to kill a weakling carrying a garbage boar. In two or three chapters, the author randomly changes the protagonist's weapon levels. F-level weapons are 300,000. The male protagonist uses F-level suits and E-level weapons.

You can be persuaded to quit within the first few chapters. The protagonist spends more than 400 yuan on food every day, and his parents' pension is more than 10,000 yuan. As a result, the protagonist gets a few million back from his first trip to the wild, and then buys a martial arts skill for the Qi training period for 300 billion... This inflation rate is too exaggerated. What is the biggest problem with this book? In the name of the spiritual energy recovery flow, I wrote a novel that imitated the swallowing of stars. It was a novel from 2010.

I have read more than 600 chapters, and there are several poisonous points. 1: The protagonist comes into contact with Tao during Qi training. During the Qi training period, he comprehends a boxing technique because he comes into contact with Tao, so it is called Dao Fist. You are not even innate to return to Tao. 2: There are two challenges in this book, one from Kyoto to challenge the First Academy, and one from other countries to challenge the Xia Kingdom. Each time, the protagonist loses miserably. This is such a big country, are you the only one who can defeat it? It's a bit disgusting. 3: Accept humans as slaves. Even in a feudal society, only eunuchs are slaves. It's disgusting. 4: The protagonist's little sword has no hilt. I wonder why it's called a sword even if it doesn't have a hilt? Is that a toothpick? 5: In this book, swords can only be flying swords, the kind that fly out and are hot in the hand? 6: Currency chaos. The number of star coins can easily reach tens of millions. It's a mess. There are also disordered combat abilities and brainless supporting characters, such as Meng Yan's master, who is born with such a big heart.

After reading Chapter 14, I was poisoned by the price. At the beginning, the protagonist has no money anymore, and has only 6 yuan left to go out and fight to make money. His girlfriend helped him and gave him a potion worth 1 million. The protagonist said that she did not expect that she was so rich. As a result, the protagonist went out to kill a few low-level monsters and sold the materials for millions. The key point is the Qi refining period. The protagonist buys this incomplete sword technique with a total price of more than 300 billion. I'm speechless at this price.

Why do Eastern fantasy and cultivation genres often have their authors deliberately use the excuse of having an unstable foundation to slut numbers, deliberately suppress the strength of the pig's feet, deliberately suppress the plot, and pretend to be slapping them in the face a few times before the foundation is inexplicably stable, while the Western fantasy genre of magic and vindictiveness does not seem to say that the foundation is unstable.

Can't I continue writing without a girl in the beginning?

The classic protagonist attracts hatred wherever he goes. The classic protagonist feels that he is highly talented and does not need to become a disciple and then be hunted down by minions. I read it. Chapter 1: The Innate Stage Flying Over the City. I flipped through the table of contents. The protagonist is innate in more than 520 chapters? 😅 What about those people who are in the acquired stage in the previous dozens of chapters and want to accept you as a disciple to pretend to be a bull demon?

It's all poison, even an individual can step on the protagonist

It's the start of the game where I'm given away a girl again. There's always a rich girl who has a crush on me. Bah, are you worthy of the good-for-nothing protagonist?

Just like the title, leave your footprints in the same way