The Forbidden Book Librarian of the Wizarding World

It's more like a script than a novel, with a plot that resembles a theatrical performance, featuring plausible misunderstandings, tragic fates, deeply buried foreshadowing, and excellent writing. As for the main characters... Everyone except the librarian NPC is a main character.

After reading more than twenty chapters, I felt something was off. The story itself was good, and I liked the ensemble cast, but your descriptions were too bland, giving me the feeling of reading a medicine instruction manual. Even in ensemble dramas, there are always characters that readers can identify with, and these characters should be more fleshed out and relatable, but so far they are…

It's actually not bad. I've seen an almost identical cheat before. But I have a small suggestion: the second part is much longer than the first. It's an ensemble piece, so the narrative length between each story shouldn't differ too much unless that part is extremely important. Also, don't make the distinction between good and evil too clear-cut. This isn't the real world.

Ensemble dramas, or behind-the-scenes stories, are basically about creating a few heroic and tragic characters and having the protagonist clean up their messes.

In my view, curses and blessings are not entirely opposites. For example: 1. Human cells can only divide about 50 times, which is why people age and die. Theoretically, if human cells had no limit to the number of divisions, humans could live forever. So, would allowing a person's cells to divide indefinitely be considered a blessing? But this is cancer; is it a blessing or a curse?

To sum it up first: I rarely read ensemble pieces, so my comparison is limited. So far, the character development, the overall ensemble cast, and the interplay of different perspectives are all very well done. After reading it, I think it would be great if the author had even a tenth of the skill in this area.

Have you ever felt this way? Recently, Qidian novels have become stagnant, lacking any sense of innovation. Some new novels with novel themes appear briefly, but they always end abruptly. And while some novels that don't end abruptly are completed, their plots are either stiff or uninteresting.

What kind of creatures are these? They cause trouble and the protagonist has to clean it up, and when they get upset, they run away from home and never speak to each other again. Is this what you call flesh and blood?

The premise is quite interesting, but unfortunately, judging from the first chapter, the library doesn't quite capture that ancient and transcendent feeling. Even the protagonist's immortality within the library is something they're afraid the natives outside will find out about—it feels rather cheap. If the library were invincible, and the library itself invincible, then the books in the library would be a lifeline for the chosen one, rather than an added bonus.

Hopefully, things won't all end in tragedy from now on.