Qinglinxian

It would be nice if the gender of the little green snake could be male or female. . There seems to be a version of the Legend of the White Snake that the Green Snake was originally a male. Later he met the White Snake and wanted to become a Taoist couple with the White Snake. However, because he could not defeat the White Snake in a battle of wits, he turned into a female snake and followed the White Snake.

Can I leave out the lily...

The writing is good. I asked about the marriage bill and I had a good idea.

The way I see it now, the beginning is pretty good. The animalistic side of the protagonist is well described, and there is a bit of the wildness of a demon cultivator. But as it goes on, this wildness becomes less and less. There is no demon cultivator in the title. I still want to watch an exciting plot. I hope the author can refer to it with some personal thoughts. .

Come on, I fell in love with the combination of transformation + snake after watching the new White Snake Asks the Immortal.

If we write it the way it is written now, why not rename it Happy Zoo?

It looks good, I hope it will be finished.

After reading a few chapters, I feel like Bai Yujun

Try to write more chapters. It's too short and not enough to read.

It's a relatively comfortable read. So far, there are no bad points. It's just that [Jiao] should separate from the protagonist as soon as possible. He always has the old man with him. I feel that the protagonist himself has not grown much. Whenever big things happen, [Jiao] always takes the blame.

The writing is good, the character interactions are natural and real, and the fighting plot is smooth. It is a good book.

Too slow! I don't dare to read the Braille words like this.

Come on, come on. It's very well written.

The writing is good, but it falls apart at chapter 18. Magical weapons and mortal weapons are clashing back and forth...

The book is very good, it would be better if it was not updated every day.

His eyes were as sharp as a ferocious python waiting for an opportunity to move.