Curse Back: the Singer Doesn't Want to Be a God

It looks good, but there has never been any specific psychological activity to describe "worrying about my aunt, so I ran away willfully". Until the new chapter, there is no appearance of the decision-making environment where the protagonist clearly realizes that "it is beyond the aunt's ability to handle and cannot harm her". There are only a few side descriptions. Tan found that the aunt was completely unaware of the problem, which means that the reasoning process was clearly written, but the final conclusion and decision were directly skipped, and the plot was directly pushed forward, which was a bit fragmented In addition, if the big eyeball is a new special-level curse spirit, the same profile describes "There is no high school student" There are five points. Asking for help without knowing the situation may be harmed and meaningless." It forms a double bonus with Aunt Away But if it is pressed to the first level, the unawakened protagonist is forced to a dead end by the new first-level curse spirit. It is very reasonable based on your ability analysis, but being beaten by a If the super-level curse spirit forces you to run away willfully without even daring to calmly ask for help, it will appear that the protagonist is incompetent and cowardly In the final analysis, although there are some shortcomings, it is surprisingly good. At the same time, the haiku's character creation and plot twists are extra points.

When will the author plan to incorporate the Curse Return storyline? To be honest, the current plot of this club feels a bit too much, and the three supporting characters in the club are not very likable. There is another day of updates ahead, all about the gangsters the protagonist encounters. There is no more enthusiasm for pursuing more. Come in with more exciting points of upgrades, or some new characters and new plots, or write about the challenges and solutions that the protagonist encounters in conquering the cursed spirit. You can also write it as a unit drama, where the story behind the birth of the cursed spirit turns to social issues. One person's word, feedback only.

If this book only contained the combat power system and world view of the curse, and the outline plot was completely original, it might be more attractive to me. After all, this is a cursed fic. The previous daily chapters only have the same name as the castrato, and there are too few other related characters. And since I have read the original work, my expectations for the subsequent plot will also be lowered.

It's a bit too slow, and it feels like the plot develops too slowly and there are no exciting points. A few cool points in the early stage are still necessary, otherwise how can we retain people.

I feel that the only way for the singer to become stronger is to take the big route. Before fighting, give yourself a cha cha dance to add buffs, and then rely on black flash to exchange elbows with the opponent.

Can there be strong lonely love? Can there be strong lonely love?

The early pace is indeed a bit too slow. It took more than fifty chapters for Goldfinger to reveal half of it, and too much text and bloated details about daily life on campus are all obvious weaknesses. The advantage is that the writing is very detailed, and you can feel the various considerations between the lines. Even if the writing is only average, it can still be said to be a small masterpiece. It's worth raising, I hope it won't die suddenly. Only one-third of the books in our bookshelf are kept alive, so I have the advantage. (

As the title says, there are too many nonsense things in the early stage, such as gangsters, and the consciousness of hegemony. Without the title, you might not even know that it is a cursed return fanfic. Although it is very Japanese, but so far, rather than being called a cursed return fanfic, it is more like a weird and strange coming-of-age novel with the same world view as the cursed return of battle (it started to get a bit explosive after about 40 or 50 chapters)

Fill it with camellia sauce, meow~ Fill it with camellia sauce, thank you, meow~

It's my favorite subject. It's related to ghost stories. I love it. The author shouldn't stop updating it!

Ask about sexual orientation Baidan? If you don't reply well, you can say that you are not just not married🤔

How about changing your name and not wanting to become the strongest?

The reason why many transformation books are called industrial assembly lines is that they don't have the shyness and dislocation of identities that girls should have. This one is just right, and it is intertwined with daily life and has sufficient shaping of the characters. However, if the hang-up is too big, it may take half a year to speed through. I hope to see the second millionth word of the spell, and I don't want it to end like this.

Unlike most hot-blooded comics, you have to wait until the protagonist grows up before you can defeat the boss. In the sequel (not counting sequels), Gojo Satoru has the most powerful combat power from beginning to end. Gojo can really defeat the opponent by himself. Then should we reveal the information to Gojo Goto? If we don't reveal it, then we are both positive, and this behavior is worse than the "war criminal Tian Yuan" in the original work. If revealed, the plot would immediately fly off the page. And at this point in time for the protagonist, I'm not sure whether Riko Tenuchi is dead or not, so the impact is even greater. I don't know if the author has thought about this problem. Anyway, personally, if I were to write a cursed return fanfic, I would find ways to avoid it, such as choosing an indigenous protagonist, or a time traveler but not understanding the cursed return plot, or understanding the cursed return plot but the time of travel is late in the plot. Of course, you can also face this problem head-on, put aside the original plot completely, and start over with the plot from the setting up. From the design point of view, Naohua is a very capable mastermind with unlimited trump cards to add. If the five pieces of information fail to take him away in one wave, or Tianyuan does not have a magic spell and he chooses to continue to wait and see in secret, then it is okay to write a battle of wits between the two sides, but the requirements for the fan author are very high.

I would like to ask the author, you haven't uploaded it to the database yet, right?

Write quickly, keep the author in the dark room and it will take you three hundred chapters a day

I finished reading it in one go, so short...🥺

The plot becomes interesting after dozens of chapters

Ghouls, summer returns, will the double join in?

It's well written, and the Japanese folklore story is quite interesting.

Ga oil. If the author promises that the eunuch will not change his CP tendency, I can vote for you with all the five monthly votes I have now. Although I don't know if the monthly pass for the new book issue is useful.

Don't live up to it

Good looking\(//∇//)\

Author, you can write the story of the original character before he became a sorcerer, and then let the protagonist deal with the problems encountered by the supporting characters.