Tokyo: I Picked up a Troubled Girl on the Yamanote Line

It's very good-looking. It's a high-quality novel with a literary temperament. It expresses the awkward feeling of material sadness. The heroine is also very cute. But I think the reason why it wasn't popular at the beginning is that the title of the book is not good. In fact, this type of novel should be given a literary name. Second, the male protagonist is too weak and grows too slowly. (There should be events in the early stage to urge the male protagonist to grow up. Weak male protagonists are not popular in online articles. At least one of cheating and charisma must be present. This book is too overwhelming. In fact, I really want to watch the sweet love scenes between the male protagonist and the female protagonist who have become normal to offset some of the awkwardness earlier) The third heroine's scenes are not up to par, and she prefers Mashiro too much, especially when it is clear that it is a real harem story (of course I hate party disputes). The cool writing is okay, but this type of writing is not up to par, which will make the plot more and more awkward. The subsequent emotional development of the heroine will be more blunt, especially when Echigo appears. Of course, the author's writing is very good. It is the best quality and closest to the Japanese style among domestic Japanese literature. However, I think that if you want to be popular on the Internet, you still have to conform to the flavor of the Internet article.

I clicked on this book, and it is one of the best and favorite books I have ever read. To be honest, this book does not look like the work of a new author at all. I personally feel that the characters are perfectly created and the plot is quite fulfilling. Some plots even moved me to tears (laughing). During this period, I voted monthly and rewarded the characters intermittently. Of course, Broken Silver A few taels are not worth mentioning. Regarding the fact that Glass Bird always asks for leave (I poked at Glass Bird), I also thought about whether the author ran away, but every time he updated as scheduled (I like this very much, and I would be more satisfied if I didn't ask for leave). Today's final chapter came quite suddenly, and the ending made me feel empty. In fact, it is okay to write a few more chapters to transition. . . Anyway, now that it's over, the author needs to have a good rest. When a new book is released, everyone at Aite must be in the group to support it🫰

Is this an extraterrestrial demon or the reincarnation of Lao Deng?

Why do you feel like you are reading Japanese literature?

My novel of the year this year is you

It's beautiful and well written, keep up the good work

Our subway driver has also joined the Qidian army as the male protagonist😭, the most immersive episode

I will pick one up at any station😭

I'm stupid, awesome It's not like a book with this popularity. The writing style is like the reincarnation of an old man, but this popularity also scares me. I will be sad if I run away one day The author will update soon!

When I looked at the name, I thought it was some kind of assembly line article from a studio. I didn't expect the writing to be so good. I really need to change the title of this book to eliminate at least 60% of the passers-by.

I read ten of them, and they were very well written. Isn't it so good that it's not possible to write a title like this in terms of writing style or style? I was a little surprised and couldn't help but post it.

Someone jumped on the Yamanote Line today. I'm late for work.

It is a very standard Nikkei style, twisted, morbid, coupled with extreme emotional pull, it can be said to be another peak of the niche Nikkei...

I don't know if you have experienced the baptism of Japanese light culture in junior high school. It was the evolutionary culture that brought the mourning culture to China. It was called love for illness. However, because of the huge popularity of Sanzhongmen at the same time, this mourning culture was only a small minority and did not develop. Ps: If it developed, it would be over. Now all kinds of perverted sex are due to the development and evolution of this mourning culture. This book, I can only say that it has written all about the culture of grief and all the love in the name of illness.

Speaking of which, Mashiro is no longer a minefield player.

It is indeed a bit naughty, and to be honest, it is a bit perverted, but it becomes reasonable again in Tokyo.

This is an extremely standard Niqing. The story line is short and fast, and the narrative focuses on the description of the characters' actions. There are also self-monologues that cut into the story, which made me think it could be turned into a story line for a text game.

The smell is too strong, it doesn't look like it was written by a Chinese person, it smells like a twist.

💩I found gold🤓🤓🤓🤓

The writing is very good. The main character is mentally disturbed but the writing does not appear pretentious. The literary youth is moaning for no reason. Let's make money quickly and find a house to live in. It is really a sin to let these girls suffer together.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I feel like I've found a treasure. This twisted and tangled feeling is really delicious. I'm a newbie and I like it.

Mutsuki Mashiro

It's really a shame, I found gold while searching💩

Shencheng Miyuki

I just read Chapter 10. Where does this extraterrestrial devil come from? I haven't seen similar writing in the starting point, so this taste is right! ! !

I feel like it has the flavor of Shakama Firefly, focusing more on unconventional stories (originally I wanted to write them as "non-daily", but when I think about it, they are actually more important and interesting plots in daily life). Yinghuo is about students who do not write about boring studies. This is about social animals, not about the depressing workplace. It is turned into a background setting instead of a stage, and instead extends outwards to a larger field, more interesting stories, and deeply explores the emotional changes of the characters. All in all, even though it is short, it is undoubtedly a buried treasure. At least if the subsequent plot can maintain the same level as the previous one, this book should become my second fully-ordered novel after Tokyo Handsome Guys (although there is also a reason for being short hh). The last thing I want to say is - come on, my big brother who writes Riqing. There may not be a place for you among the future "great gods"

Can I write a novel like this for a lifetime

In fact, our culture pays attention to the organic combination of ideas, materials, and people. Neon things value people and things, so they often produce some more extreme things. For example, they pay attention to the sorrow of things, like incomplete beauty. In general, it doesn't matter if you take a look and understand it. But don't bring it in. The author of this book is also very skilled in playing this trick, and he can also develop it in the early stage. Love and desire are also separated. Although I think the ending is a bit abrupt, it is still a good ending and we are still human. Overall positive reviews! Is the Glazed Bird still around? Don't be lazy and write a new book quickly! Ha ha

The twist is so exciting that my hands and feet are numb😋😋😋

That's great, that's great. I heard that the big one is coming. I hope to think about it carefully and wait for you to come back