Pirates: Starting from the Failure of the Public Test in the Advancement City

After reading the introduction, I have a question: Where can Impel Down City get the souls for you to eat? ? The people imprisoned in Pushing City are felons who are not suitable for immediate execution, those with special fruit abilities or serious criminals. If you go to Pushing City, what can you do?

Male female prison officer When I saw this sentence, it reminded me of a clown🤡

It's okay, but it's better to get up early and stop using it. This thing will appear in the Capital of Seven Waters, and then it will disappear after the Capital of Seven Waters passes.

Why is a man assigned to a women's prison? There is a problem

No, dude, Shiliu was hit three times by Magellan, and he can still come after the protagonist? Abstract.

It's too fast. Both the plot development and the relationship between the characters are too fast. There is no need to write it like this. How long ago did you start to contact the revolutionary army? If you follow the route of the revolutionary army, it is okay, but it is obviously not the case. If you write it like this, it feels like the later stages will come soon.

It is recommended not to use Daoli, a setting that has been eliminated.

The heroine Stussy is the only one among Pirates fans, I'll keep an eye on you!

The setting theme is good, but the writing is not good. Only the first few chapters are good.

Having two books with different styles makes me afraid to read your book.

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The writing behind it is too messy, and I don't know what the protagonist is doing or what he wants to do. The psychiatrist at least knows the purpose.

So far I have not seen the author's picture above

Chapter 7 is actually only six pages, so it's a bit awkward to write.

This is a rare One Piece fanfic that can be read. One Piece is a kind of romantic comic, so there are very few descriptions of human nature. It is enough to be happy. Even if some are added later, it is too disgusting and too emotional. I have abandoned One Piece and read the fanfic. After all, the values ​​​​are similar and it is comfortable to watch!

Hope Liu can kill jailers at will, is he so awesome?

I feel that Thresh's skin transformation is much more handsome than that of Lei Lei, who is glowing with lightning all over his body.

Will they break away from the world government in the future and build their own forces to directly use famous brands?

Go to a psychiatrist🤫

Domino