The Black Mist Descends, and the Witches and I Live in the Underground City

It's simply unwatchable. Is the protagonist a witch who licks dogs? I can't even feel the disaster. I keep trying to please the witch all day long.

How about re-opening a book? If it's not on the shelves, it's not considered a eunuch.

See the witch, come and taste the saltiness

In the apocalypse, people are more likely to undergo extreme changes, with good things getting better and bad things getting worse.

The story structure and imagination are very good, and it has great potential, but the writing is not very good. It is recommended to practice writing before writing (you can try to read more literary works, watch online classes to learn some writing routines, find a fixed writing style and keep practicing). Of course, if it is purely for fun, pretend I didn't say it, and it's good to write for yourself. Come on.

This should belong to the territorial construction stream, so why do you write such bullshit about the male protagonist's inner activities and the female protagonist's inner activities? You constantly emphasize equality and so on. Are you writing a romance novel? ? What kind of favorability is needed? Why not focus on obscene development and building farming? Now I feel awkward watching it.

It feels okay, but there is no hope at the moment.

Why isn't it updated?😐

Apart from Qidian. Com, this is my first post. I want to be a real veteran and follow the author. Liu Ming is not a good person.

Added a bookshelf, waiting for Shennong 🙂

I have been emphasizing that the protagonist has never been in contact with women. He has obviously bought the heroine. The protagonist still behaves and behaves like a eunuch. The story is very good, but it is ruined by the protagonist's turtle attributes. It is a pity. Learn a lesson. Next time, don't write eunuch + turtle protagonist in a story with multiple female protagonists. Repeatedly emphasizing that the protagonist has never been in contact with a woman in his previous life. All kinds of blushes will not make your protagonist attractive. He will only be a loser. What a good subject. The protagonist will be ruined by you.

The worldview is very grand, but the author's handling methods make this grand narrative structure incomplete, and it always feels like the author is correcting something. But there is no one subject in the process. It feels like when I write about something wonderful, the plot suddenly takes a turn and turns to some trivial and trivial place. Take a quick look and you will find that the writing style is very awkward anyway, mainly because you can't tell what the author wants to express specifically.

🎭 Character: 5 🎬 Plot: 3 ✒️ Writing style: 6