Konoha: Thirty-Year-Old Uchiha Can't Be Energetic

I was reading the introduction when I suddenly discovered that this book was included in a book list called "Poisonous Things", which made me laugh so hard.

After brushing aside for a long time, he is still Yang Wei. . 😅

Author, you really wrote about Naruto! A bunch of memories are smelly and long

The first chapter was good👍, but then it stopped~ I really don't know what to say

Uchiha Hikaru (wife)

Looking at the protagonist as a time traveler from a modern perspective, I only find it poisonous, but looking at the protagonist from the perspective of an Uchiha, I only feel that there is no sense of violation. This reminds me of a sentence: Uchiha big stage, if you are sick, you can come

It's a good enough book, the more you read it, the more angry you become

I don't understand what this novel is about. . . Uchiha and Senju have no main plot. . . . The plot is also bland, just like eating and drinking. . .

After watching more than half of it, I feel like the protagonist looks like a fool 🙂

When unfolding the plot of an online novel, you sometimes use flashbacks and sometimes use interludes. Author, you want to go to heaven.

I shouldn't have subscribed to junk gay stories

Well, roughly... Use the introduction to check it out, and then start writing slowly from "Once upon a time". You can imagine that the author has a big imagination and has his own Naruto universe Others don't know, but my interest in these is just average. I still make do in the Warring States chapter, and it is interesting to act to help Uchiha open his eyes. But the following Moon chapter, the main one is stinky and long... Even Hamura is dragged out to show off, and the effect is like adding a harem to the protagonist? Speaking of how stupid it is to regard a girl's already developed breasts as breast muscles... After all, she is a time traveler who has read countless movies, and then she is pretending to be stupid here?

Please, stop writing bad jokes. I know the author really wants to write a Gintama-style plot, but there are also burning plots in Gintama. Isn't watching Naruto just to watch the fighting scenes? Writing every day is like a running account. The definition of the protagonist is unclear. It is completely written in a straight line. It is the same as a shoujo manga. It is okay to keep the funny style in daily life, but you don't change the original plot and make it dull. It can't be connected with the previous plot at all. I don't want to watch the elbow strikes during the fight, Kamen Rider, Ultraman, and the atmosphere of price reduction every time. The protagonist is wearing a divine costume. As a result, the fireball does not appear a few times. The fight scene is basically the protagonist starting the fight, and then disappears. It passes in a blink of an eye. After reading the book for so long, there are not a few fights at all. It is inexplicably funny, the chain drops, and the crotch pulls.

It's not that reverse order is bad. On the contrary, there are some good ones. But the problem is, you did the reverse order without any foreshadowing. Let alone the Riddler's skills, what kind of foreshadowing is that? Also, the Warring States chapter in Chapter 2 and Chapter 3 was not well written, with frequent mistakes. The first time you wrote it was that you almost killed the original owner without looking at the memory of the original owner. Seeing that your subsequent actions were fooled, there was nothing to continue reading, but! But you actually did something that violated the original owner's behavior later. The key is that after doing it, you actually described the emotion in your heart, "Oh no, what did you neglect?" No, your memory is in vain? Did you forget to look at the front foot and the back foot? I can only say that I read my own book again. There are many places that can be handled better, but you turn a blind eye. Whether you have written a book carefully can be seen between the lines. It is difficult to make a difference just to advance the plot

There are a lot of little nuggets in the front, but this book mainly focuses on the harem, plus some nonsense from the author, which made me read more than 280 chapters. However, after the establishment of Konoha, the protagonist proposed the establishment of a position because Hashirama wanted to manage people's livelihood, so the current role of this position He is in charge of the military, and then Tobirama was appointed through his connections. This is so unreasonable. I have only heard of people electing a president, but never heard of people electing a marshal. The whole chapter is about everyone supporting Tobirama, Madara is silent the whole time, and the protagonist is selling melon seeds and making sarcastic remarks. The previous chapter focused on describing family relationships, and also put family relationships to the test with the help of Hei Zetsu. I thought the protagonist valued family relationships, but when this happened, I felt bad for Madara. I also paid a fee. After seeing so many chapters, you can't be so cruel to me. It's too much.

I thought it was fine before, but after I saw it on the shelves and subscribed for fifty chapters, I became increasingly unsatisfied. I felt that the word count was constantly low, and the character descriptions collapsed. The more I read, the more uncomfortable I became.

You can hide your power, but you can't hide it until the end of the book. So what's the difference between you and me? You don't do anything and don't care. You even add a deus ex machina to directly kill the two brothers. I don't even know what the meaning of this plot is... It fits the original plot, right?

If you follow the first chapter and write the follow-up! All kinds of low-key and pretentious! Very interesting! The result was written in a pile by you!

Let's talk about other things. Other fan fictions are too purposeful, the protagonist is too NB, and everything revolves around the protagonist. The protagonist of this book's early performance can be said to be an ordinary person. Although his identity and original talent are NB, he gives people the feeling of a normal person. He is not like the "perfect superman" like other protagonists. The supporting characters are also very distinctive and will not be reduced to a background. Conspiracy theories are prevalent now, and I feel that too many children are watching it, which is why the market has become like this, and then the fandom started to decline. This book is still good.

Now that Tobirama has become completely feminized, can he be regarded as a real woman?🙂

By the way, is this Uchiha Hikaru the sealed Uchiha Taichi or the ancestor? . . , Does anyone understand what I mean?

I think the battle between Zhuzhuxia and Komajuban is also a good story The Jade Emperor is dead and the Buddha is here

Don't say anything. Pictured above

I hope Hanzo can become a full-time employee and leave it to Nagato (

Yakushi Nonoyu's writing is so disgusting

It feels good in hand, has a little strength guarantee, and is eye-catching

I'm catching up with the progress, damn it, hurry up and write! The best Naruto fanfic I've ever seen, but it's a pity why it's not finished yet! It was a pleasure to read and catch up on the crematorium.

The front looks pretty good! Why can't I understand it at the end?

It's time to scold my cousin for the New Year, and then send him some clothes.