People Are Cursing Back, and Their Good Feelings Are Full

The writing is a bit immature, and the narrative is a bit long-winded, but the overall feel is at least not bad.

With just a few words and a single action, he conquers others. The emotions that are too easy to come by make the characters seem worthless. You can spend a few years laying the groundwork and slowly settling in, but every time you attack someone, just use a few words and a few actions. Don't say that everyone has psychological problems with spells. If you have problems, it doesn't mean that others are idiots. The most interesting thing about this book is how to attack others. The clever attack skills are the most important part of this book. The strategy is so cheap, it's a waste of flash points.

If you write too much psychological analysis, it will look bad, and it will fall into disgrace.

The writing was pretty good at the beginning, but when it came to the Okinawa Maid scene, it felt a bit stiff and overdone. After all, if a child suddenly appears and says to you, "You have worked hard, what are you doing? You need to have a good rest, what are you doing?", You won't feel very moved, so you feel a little weird and a little embarrassed. Anyway, it sounds strange to hear it bluntly. I hope there won't be this kind of situation in the future where the protagonist will say a few gentle words to someone, but then the other person will be suddenly moved, making it seem like they are talking about strange rules with the protagonist.

It was so pretentious that I had to skip many places to watch it, and my scalp was numb from the pretentiousness.

The author's writing is very nice and steady. It is really the most normal cursed fanfic I have seen on all websites. There is no such thing as pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger to suppress combat power, brainless villains, and emotional drama that subverts intelligence. The proportion of daily and plot scenes is just right, and the author is very good at writing emotional drama. The emotional drama is very delicate and very comfortable to watch.

The recent plot... The protagonist who is taboo at the beginning is missing 😒 I can only say that I am not interested at all. I was quite interested before and have been following it 😒

The novel gave me a very strange feeling, and the rhythm didn't seem to be right. Sometimes it is very fast, almost an event is over in a flash, and the strategy for the characters is also incredible. It is true that almost every character in the curse has psychological problems, but it does not mean that the resistance is 0; I don't feel happy when I should be happy... Wait, I think this setting should be a happy article, right? Right? 😰

The writing was okay, and the protagonist was quite kind. Also, I don't want a heroine, I don't want a heroine. It's weird to have a female protagonist in a succubus story with this kind of popularity.

This is enough to show the strength, right? Dare Clepsydra say that he can definitely beat these two?

Personally, I don't have much interest in this type of novel. I need to like the original work. The work itself is indeed fan-oriented and ideal, and I am not very interested in the spell battle... So personally, this book can only be regarded as dry food. Due to the length of some subsequent plots, it may even be reduced to a weed... I have seen more than 200 chapters so far, and the author's writing skills are also very green, and the sentences are well-written. There are many incongruities. Overall, it cannot be considered a mature work, and there is quite a lot of room for criticism... In summary, I am actually not very interested in posting book reviews. It's just that some of the comments in this comment area and some of the reasons for criticism mentioned in the chapter are so unpopular that I can't help but post them anyway—— I just don't understand the necessary relationship between whether I give you ten yuan or not and whether or not your character is good? I don't understand why the protagonist can't be a bit like a virgin? I don't even understand why the protagonist is forced not to care about ordinary people? I don't know what my brain is doing day by day. I have seen enough of this nonsense in the past few years at the beginning... I have also seen too much and the author was biased by such comments, and then his style changed drastically, and the result was really shit... I hope that there will be one less author affected by this...

I just finished reading the previous book Psychotherapist, and I feel it is far worse than the previous one. Was it ghostwritten?

You have to watch the Shura field between men and the Shura field between women. Only then can you be called healthy.

The latest chapters are too boring. Are you addicted to the strategy guide and can't extricate yourself? You can count how many guides you have written about the astral body recently. You just crushed the plot and wrote it again and again. There is really no need to read the latest chapter. Let's put it this way, it is similar to 26 and 27.

The protagonist is so gentle that it's annoying

It's too watery, you can skip it and watch it, but you regret booking it all 😡

Yes, it's well written. Many comments are unfair.

I quit on the fourth one. With 5 10% abilities, I can't even defeat a level 3 spell spirit. Author, you are invincible.

It can be very good, The author just needs to pay attention to the wording when men and women interact. Some delicate words are used in a style that makes them look wrong. Gay is awesome.

The writing is very good. I like it very much. Sometimes I really hate some selfish people. Thank you for writing the protagonist, Zenyuan Qing. He is a very, very good person and has really saved many tragedies.

Rt, there are as many words as the mouth escape + inner drama, and the main character from the beginning of the plot gives people a feeling of suffocation as if they are walking on thin ice. The setting is obviously very strong, but the writing has to be dragged out and disgusting...

I don't quite understand why Tianyuan's judgment was suddenly transferred to myself, and then turned into a simulator text

It's over. Is this it? I feel like the ending is a bit hasty 😒

After reading a few chapters, I found it not very attractive. After thinking about it, I probably wrote too much about this insignificant little thing at the beginning, and never got into the main line of becoming stronger.

Does this mean you don't plan to finish the tutor book?

There are so many grammatical errors. Why don't you read it yourself after writing it? Very poor reading experience

In reality, if you ask him to give you 10 yuan, he won't even be able to give it to you. If you want to return the favor to the Holy Mother, you can only do this kind of thing in a book.

Is the author the same Jiao who wrote about the God of Death before?

Can you write a book where the realm is the dark sky, the dark sky of Shaantian?