Harry Potter: I'm Just Running a Small Business

I would like to give the author a suggestion. As an author, you can write whoever you want to be the heroine. You have your own considerations in this, but the fear of being scolded is very low-end. Since you are afraid of being scolded and chose this character to be the heroine of Hermione, then if someone scolds you for being the heroine of Hermione, will you change the heroine midway? Or what about other content? It's not like there are no authors like this. I usually see authors saying this and quitting the book directly, even if it's Hermione, the heroine I like. Because a book that is manipulated by readers is definitely not a book that the author wants to write. If the content of the book is not what he wants to write, then it is definitely not a book. This is true for a good book, both for the author and the readers. Especially for the author who writes his first book, as long as he signs the contract, he really doesn't need to think too much. You just need to set your mind and write freely, so that everyone can see a different world through your eyes. Besides, fully catering to readers and making money requires a lot of skills. If you can't write what you like, do you think you can write what you don't like?

There are three Hermione titles in Chapter 25, and it's probably another one in which Hermione is the heroine.

Several people in the book review section said, "It gets better as you read," or "I thought it was very creative after copying the original text." So I persisted and read all the free chapters and some paid chapters, but I was still quite disappointed. Maybe I don't blame the author, the general environment of online articles is like this. It's my fault that I have to read online articles with my head in mind and look forward to it without authorization. Recently I like hp very much, and I also want to write my own articles, so I always reflect on it while reading it. After reading this part, I feel that I should summarize my thoughts and write something. The author does not need to take it too seriously. After all, the following are my subjective thoughts. Readers do not need to pay too much attention to it. Only after reading a book can you have your own evaluation. It is too arbitrary to judge the quality of a book just by reading the comments. The early plot is consistent with the original work. Although there is an additional protagonist entering the story line, the author has brought out such things as the "world correction power", and I can only take off my glasses and pinch the bridge of my nose. The plot is copied from the original work, so I can only look at other highlights. The main thing to watch should be the various cool things from the protagonist - things like pretentiousness or getting something for nothing. The author's design is quite retro, a bit like a web article from ten years ago. Ten years ago, I probably would have read it, but now I am a little tired of it. Knowing that the plot follows the original work, I can already tell what the chapter might be about without reading the title. I can talk about a few original plot points that I can still think of. The earliest memory that left me was when the protagonist got the first magic wand. It took me a long time to convince myself that it was a wand with mysterious Eastern power. It should be Ollivander's ancestors who traveled to the mysterious East. After analyzing and studying the Eastern flora and fauna, they made a wand suitable for Westerners and brought it back to England. After all, as far as I know, there was no concept of a "magic wand" among flower growers in ancient times. This should have been invented by Westerners. The author generously praised the power of this magic wand, a bit like praising the "mysterious power of the East", but as an Oriental, I couldn't be happy. Probably because deep down, I feel that there is nothing worthy of praise in illusory metaphysics, let alone being learned by the British. This feeling lasted until the battle for the Sorcerer's Stone. A eloquent iron-eating beast emerged from the wand and ate Voldemort's attack. This moment woke me up, and I finally realized: Oh, this is indeed what the Internet article from ten years ago was like. There are indeed a lot of things to complain about in this battle about the Sorcerer's Stone. Voldemort's strongest attack is an indiscriminate killing that requires a long time to accumulate energy. Dumbledore came late because he didn't expect anyone to steal the Sorcerer's Stone before Christmas, so he didn't add warnings to various traps. Many settings don't seem to stand up to scrutiny. But it's true, as I said, the general environment for online writing is like this. It's my fault for being rebellious and reading books without concentrating on my brain. One memory point going forward is the first Potions class. Snape was frightened by the exploding cauldron and fell into the big cauldron. He fainted and moved into St. Mungo's. This paragraph... I mainly don't understand the author's intention of writing this. In HP's original work, Snape is defined as "a brave and great man". I think such a character should be treated with some respect, but the two chapters of the plot made Snape look ugly. A professor who had been teaching for several years was frightened by the crucible and fell into the potion. His body was covered in burns and ulcers, and he lived in St. Mungo's for half a semester. The most important thing is that this plot has nothing to do with the subsequent plot. Snape recovered from his illness and continued to follow the original work to resist the curse on Harry's broom. I hesitated for a long time and felt that the purpose of this plot was that the author had a negative impression of Snape's behavior and wanted to punish him like James Potter, making him lose face in front of all the students and giving the protagonist a chance to show off. But in fact, the protagonist didn't pretend that this was a big deal, which made me sigh. In Harry's eyes, a man who was as brave and great as Dumbledore was now in such a funny state that he was bullied by a dog. Speaking of Harry's broom, when I discovered something was wrong with Harry's broom during the Quidditch match, the protagonist said, "There may be something wrong with the balance system of the broom." It really knocked me out of the fantasy world with a stick on the spot. I stared at the words "balance system" over and over again, but I really couldn't put it into a fantasy world with a fairy tale color. Maybe the author's design is feasible, but it did pull me out of the HP world. I haven't had such a hearty drama in a long time. The subsequent plots were not particularly impressive. There were two episodes where the protagonist wanted to secretly tease Voldemort, but what he did to Voldemort could only be described as a prank. He missed again midway, shouting in his heart that it was over, it was over, and then he struck back with a flash of inspiration and slapped Voldemort in the face. And the panda popping out of the magic wand really brings the book back from Western fantasy to Chinese style. It is such a classic magic weapon that a mythical beast or an old man pops out. The author wrote this book, and the original work was an outline, but I can't tell if there are any detailed outlines. I stayed up late in the morning and my head was not clear, and I couldn't think of anything for a while. I don't know if the author can accept my words. If he can't accept it, he should delete the post. I wrote so much just to sort out my thoughts when I was reading the book. If I write an article in the future, I will think about my wrong title. I wonder if the author can finish this book. There are very few HP fans who can finish the novel, and they either cut it in half or drag out three to four million words. I don't know what the content of the paid chapters of this book is like. If any readers see this, they hope to let me know if the quality has improved?

The overall framework of the story is not new. It is still based on the Harry Potter aid story line, but the magic has been changed a lot. The main idea is very novel and interesting. I read this book mainly because of the author's idea. I would also like to make some suggestions. The first few pictures are obviously a bit fast-paced, and it can be seen that the author is not good at writing fast-paced stories, so it is better to have a sense of separation starting from around chapter 20. Since the author is good at writing slow-paced stories, don't follow those clichéd fast-paced cool stories. The slow-paced fan fiction also has the beauty of slow-paced stories.

I think a lot of people who like Hermione prefer the movie version of Hermione because she has so many good looks. In the novel, Hermione looks average. Most people in China have watched the movie version, and the plot of the movie version of Hermione has been beautified a bit. These factors have led to the majority of HP fanfics being heroined by Hermione. So when Emma Watson becomes ugly, it is natural that Hermione starts not to be liked as before. Of course, there are also factors that lead to boredom due to too many heroine heroine stories. (Only personal opinion)

I was given shares at the start of the game, I'm speechless.

When I read the first few dozen chapters, I thought that the author would not change the plot of the original book in the early stage. I thought that there are no good Harry Potter fans recently, so I just read it casually. But the more I read from behind, the more surprised I am. I feel that the style of this book is slow-paced and more daily, but interesting later on. I like it very much. This technique has changed the development of the plot line without changing the original world beyond recognition. I especially like that the author gave Neville a lot of plot. He is really a character that I personally like very much in the original work. However, this is the first time I have seen a Harry Potter fan who wanted to take Neville with him after the protagonist traveled through time.

Not bad, not bad, although it's a little watery, but the further you look at it, the better it looks.

I just keep bragging about China and I can't stand it.

There is no need for the heroine to appear so early, the protagonist is only 11 years old 🤭