After Rebirth, I Have the Advantage in Love!

How to say it? I feel like the author is stuck in the last book and can't get out. Here are my suggestions as a reader of the previous book: It can't describe the feeling of youth and reveals the greasiness of an old couple. Please, this is a rebirth of 17 years old. The protagonist has a psychology of 27, but the others are not. Except for the heroines who are set to be good buddies, they have only been together for a few days, and they cuddle up to eat and watch movies together, and they don't resist touching each other. The hero is a succubus. The author is going back to the daily interactions of the couple who first met, but unfortunately, it is okay to write about childhood sweethearts and bury the emotional drama outside the text. It is really too greasy to write about the transition from strangers to friends. For example, if you openly say that you have opened the box, you have read all your browsing history and follow the daily life of the platform. The heroine actually felt so happy and warm at the first time. My God, even if she is married, she can't accept such a thing, can she? How can I say it? It's like a greasy old man who has lost touch with reality and fantasizes about going back to high school and using bad street pick-up techniques to win over Bai Yueguang. The female character will be assimilated when she meets the protagonist, as if she has become part of the protagonist's personality, and has the same interests as everyone. I like the songs you listen to, the movies you watch, I like the food and drinks you eat, and I also like the food and drinks you eat. Is this Aiwujiwu or Adam and Eve? All in all, it's too inconsistent to forcefully transfer the feelings that childhood sweethearts have had to a new friend. The emotional foreshadowing is too jumpy, and the love-locking spell is not that fast, my friend.

I admire the author's writing style! Sharp! The emotion is written so well!

Nowadays, discipline in the book club circle is corrupt and traitors are everywhere. This is precisely because of the lack of updates. If the author diligently updates 10,000 words every day, then the traitors will be afraid and retreat, and the moral gentlemen will rejoice. This is a feat worthy of praise by Yao and Shun! I have heard that calves born in sheepfolds do not behave like sheep when they grow up. You are at the starting point and your computer keyboard is often used, but you have lost interest in updating it. Is this reasonable? Qidian is strong because it has inherited the etiquette and skills of its ancestors. Stop updating, the pressure has nowhere to release, and instead you become tired. Isn't this the same as abandoning the roots of the tree and pursuing the treetops? If this continues, great disaster will surely happen! The reason why Bai Jin can earn tens of thousands of royalties and not be harmed by villains is precisely because they are willing to listen to what upright gentlemen have to say! But Pujie cannot get royalties, and is even looked down upon by his girlfriend. This is because they are close to evil villains. I hope you can think carefully about the difference! There is one thing for which the author can cry bitterly, and six things for which the author can sigh. Since ancient times, when doing something, the words are often very passionate. If it is not passionate, it will not touch the heart of the actor. Harsh words are akin to slander. Author, you should think carefully about whether such a thing is right or wrong. Those authors who updated less, delayed, or missed updates had no time to feel sad about themselves, so they were drowned in the torrent of works, leaving only later authors to feel sad about them; later authors felt sad and did not learn from it, and future authors felt sad about it. In ancient times, there were half a hundred old women who spent several years polishing the iron pillars, and they finally turned into needles. It is said that there was a bird spirit who spent his whole life just holding branches to fill the sea. Everyone who saw this article liked it, and everyone who read it said good things about it. Now that laziness has become a disease, can it be said to be reasonable? With only one or two chapters, can it be said to be wise? Is it allowed to have free time without thinking about updates? Sad husband, how cunning can the author's scheme be? It just adds to the jokes.

The problem is quite big. I feel that this book has no outline and the writing is poor. I feel like I am not the same person as I am.

Please recommend a couple with two heroines, like the one who is jealous every year, or twins, non-blood sisters, sisters, aunts, or less than 3 heroines, too many and I get tired of it, thank you guys

The money finally ended up in the hands of those two old guys, and was nominally kept by the heroine's brother, but what's the difference? Hurry up and arrange a car accident to send these two old immortals away. It's disgusting.

It's not as good as getting into a car, and there's basically no emotional line. It even feels like the whole book is like a Mercedes-Benz soft advertisement.

New students can read the previous book, it's super sweet

Ji Ning

Kisa

Jia'er and Lingyi's writing is very good, but there is no need to force the connection between the previous book and this one, which always feels awkward.

Wen Wen

Now we are all reborn in 2014 hahahaha

There is a huge problem. The backgrounds of the two heroines are very different. One's parents are both high-ranking officials, while the other has nothing and has big family problems. This leads to the fact that the two heroines cannot be equal at all. Whether the protagonist is in politics or business, it is obvious that Ji Sha has given the protagonist more help. The second female lead is naturally at a disadvantage. You can only be small, and this cannot be made up for by becoming excellent. This should be a minefield for rebirth stories with multiple female protagonists. If you don't grasp it well, it will explode.

My sister should accept it too. Break up the good brothers 🙂

How should I put it? It has been more than a year since I came ashore and I feel that I am almost paralyzed by fatigue. I can't go home for half a month. All the brothers in the unit are depressed. They take a bag of medicine a day. It is really painful 😭 Sometimes I think about it, if I could do it all over again, hey...

The daily writing is okay, but I feel that the biggest drawback is that it is linked to the previous book too frequently, which reduces the enjoyment of the book a lot and makes me feel a little uncomfortable while reading it. It's just a romance novel, not a fantasy novel. It's really not suitable for a crossover.

The writing style is different from that of the previous book 😥😥

Children, Lao Qing is alive because he went out to make money and forgot to log in to his account.

How to say it? The heroine in the previous book was so well written that there was no problem with the character at all, even before her rebirth. Why is the heroine's design so bad at the beginning of this book before she is reborn? And why do you look so bitter and angry? It's really not pleasant at all

It seems like you can only gamble once in your life, so you have to have a big debt, but in fact, as long as you have a principal, there are many opportunities for the reborn. Most of the rebirth writers play lottery to get a principal, and then use it to invest and start a business. For a female-headed family, the difference between 100 million and 300 million is really not big.

Girls do not exist as vassals. They have independent personalities and thinking, beautiful writing, and smooth prose. It is a rare good work.

It's not a supervisor yet. I agree with you, author. I would rather stop updating at every turn than not be a supervisor.

On the first day of this month, I cast two monthly votes in a row, please improve

Earn 30 million, and still don't want to travel to South America?

This book is well written, but the author is a bit greedy for money and charges money as soon as he sees the wonderful parts.

Using Guibao to promote books, "Happiness God" is also known as "I feel happy and I can make money continuously" A reward of 5,000 for making a short video and laughing, an reward of 8,000 for winning a game, and a reward of 10,000 for admiring a beautiful woman... Li Qi was about to resign when he was suddenly arranged by the leader to lead a well-behaved and clingy female college intern and a follower to familiarize themselves with the work. He wanted to refuse, but he suddenly discovered that there would be additional rewards for getting pleasure from beautiful women! When the accumulation reaches a certain level, you can even draw a mysterious prize! Li Qi immediately changed his mind. Extra rewards aside, how can that man refuse the word mystery? He decided to blast a wave of system gold coins first. Since then, Li Qi has gone straight to the road of wealth and freedom. He no longer needs to act based on other people's faces, and a wonderful life has quietly arrived! Sorry for disturbing you, please contact us to delete ​

Refined and refined

After reading a few chapters, I'm not interested anymore. Love comes and goes, life and death come and go.

The book shortage is so uncomfortable! Who knows the author's old vest? I want to go and read it