Dragon Raja: A Faulty Reboot

Suddenly, something funny came to mind. Of Liu Miaomiao's four chances to be with Lu Mingfei, one was snatched away by Xiao Tiannv, one by Chu Zihang, one by Xia Mi, and the one with the best chance, the one least likely to be interrupted, was directly stolen by Fanqie. All I can say is, typical Liu Sanshui!

I feel the most difficult parts of writing Dragon Raja fanfiction featuring Lu Mingfei as the protagonist are Lu Mingfei's transformation and Erii. The former is so difficult that most authors have Lu Mingfei return from some unknown source, giving him a period of "growth," but frankly, this is no different from a soul-swapping story; it's not really Lu Mingfei at all, just a very old-fashioned…

Author, don't rush to finish publishing all the previous chapters. It's best to update twice a day to get the most recommendations from Qidian. The editors at Qidian have probably already told you this. I suggest you sign a contract with Qidian first, then build up a backlog of chapters. Update two or three times a day as usual. Once it's released, you can have a big update burst.

Let ten-year-old Lu Mingfei pick up a ring, inside which crouches the old sorcerer Marvin Waltz, the Black Mist Elder at the Empty Seat Banquet, and an emotional mentor during adolescence, the female sorcerer: Grin Gillian. Let the little devil and the nanny trio play the most pathetic comedic roles and work as ATMs, since the little devil is no match for the ruthless quartet.

(Putting this in the work-related section would affect reading, so posting it in the book circle is a good way to get free monthly votes.) Angers' Time Zero allows him to use 1 second as 50 seconds, a setting from Ryuuichi Yamato. As for Setsuna, let's take Inuyama He's peak, Rank 9 Setsuna at 512x speed as an example. It's known that Angers' Time Zero is faster than Inuyama He's Setsuna.

The only problem with this book is the transitions between scenes; they are very choppy, abrupt, and disjointed. It's a truly poor use of montage, extremely jumpy and unconnected, which cured my habit of skimming.

This trope—the protagonist losing his emotions, and the girls who initially looked down on him becoming curious about his drastically changed personality and eventually developing feelings for him—is quite common. Most of the ones I've read are like that in other novels where the author just stretches out the plot to make more money. I don't know if this one is like that; I'll wait and see.

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I really liked Isabella and Charlotte in this book. The emotional buildup for the potato chip scene felt a bit lacking. Zero and Long Legs had too little screen time to be evaluated. Little Fairy and Liu Miaomiao had a lot of screen time in the early parts, but they became minor characters once the main storyline started.

Hey, I have a thought. Could Erii use speech bubbles to initiate a trial? Like in that Tom and Jerry episode where Jerry imagines drawing a sword and throwing it at Tom?