You Have Truly Made Me Suffer

You added a dual-transmigration plot because you really think the grades are too good, right?

Just so you know, this is a dual transmigration story 🤫

It's well-written, and the plot is somewhat interesting, but what's the point of you, a storyteller, giving away spoilers? Are you afraid I'll go blind?

Is it interesting to dress like someone destined for success? Boring.

I can tell you're trying to use the combined cultural souls of these two time travelers to create a sweet romance, and incidentally have Lou act as a support character to give you an unfair advantage. But have you considered how to portray a modern-minded woman adapting to an ancient patriarchal society? Are you planning to create a situation like Empress Dugu, where two emperors rule simultaneously? I hope your writing skills can capture that.

Why do almost all historical time-travel novels involve soul transmigration, and why do many protagonists have systems or personal spaces? It would be better to write about protagonists being able to travel between the modern era and the ancient era through time-space channels, since there is Einstein's theory of relativity as a basis for this.

Your description should have clearly stated it was a dual transmigration story; those who wanted to read it could come in, and those who didn't could leave. Instead, it suddenly appeared in the text—isn't that just asking for trouble?

The author should try to use internet slang as little as possible, as it disrupts the sense of immersion. Even if it must be used, be careful not to include it in character dialogue.

The comments section says it involves both male and female characters, so can this harem still exist? Can he still sleep with married women? If none of these are possible, what kind of Gao Huan is he?

I can picture it.