The Cyber Fengshen World

It's incredibly petty, full of the narrow-minded thinking of a commoner who imagines even the emperor using a golden carrying pole. This supposedly immortal cultivator, with a century of cultivation, only has a divine sense spanning ten meters… not even as far as my old man's security camera can see.

The author has used too many names from the Investiture of the Gods period. Unless the protagonist is an idiot, he should know something's wrong, right? But now the protagonist acts like it's nothing unusual, which is really frustrating to watch.

For researchers, the most important thing is stealing research results. Completely disrespectful, both sides have made sacrifices. One (secretly filmed) attempt was barely acceptable, but it was an inevitable outcome. The second time, the protagonist was lured into the prototype to steal its power (without being asked), and then the perpetrator turned on them, admitting defeat and becoming their…

Wow, that's incredible imagination! Keep it up, it's bound to be a hit!

Having seen this far, all I can say is that the idea is great, but it's a pity the author probably didn't have an outline.

Low expressiveness: ¹Ace mechs cannot attack at long range, ²The laboratory lacks comprehensive defense capabilities, ³The major corporations' expressiveness is so low that they look like studios. ⁴We're in the interstellar era now; please broaden your horizons. A population starting in trillions isn't enough. ⁵Besides mechs, what other things do you have to represent the characteristics of society? New materials, new energy sources, new social theories.

Chapter 4 is too discouraging. The ancient martial arts combat system is too bizarre and unreasonable. At the very least, it should have appropriate technology and tactical coordination. This is too bizarre and easily discourages players.

Basketball Pangu, Wing Chun Destruction Day, Ten-meter True Immortal

The opening chapter, which combines rebirth with knowledge from both worlds to create a new path, was alright. However, it became a mess after the protagonist entered the group. The latest chapter, which features the acquisition of top-quality materials to design a new product, is fine. The problem now is the sense of disconnect. Your cultivation level is that of a Human Immortal, which is unreasonable for a special-type machine player. Moreover, the performance is really lacking.

I've finished watching it. The so-called universe only has five major star systems and two minor ones. The population settings are a mess—one minute billions, the next hundreds of billions, then an entire star system is wiped out and they just sit and watch. And this is supposedly for humanity? I laughed.