The Cyber Fengshen World

The Xiaojing family is full of spirit, full of Xiaojing citizens' thoughts about the emperor also using a golden pole. A true immortal who has been cultivating for hundreds of years can actually see ten meters away... He can't see further than my surveillance camera.

The author has written too many names of people from the Conferred Gods period. As long as the protagonist is not a fool, he must know there is something wrong. Now the protagonist looks like he is not surprised and is speechless.

The most important thing for researchers is theft of research results Total disrespect, both sides pay. Once (secretly photographed), it was an inevitable result The second time, induced to enter the prototype, stole the enablement (taken without telling), and then beat him up, the protagonist resigned and became a dog The third time, the test came again. The problem is that the protagonist did not feel at all, you are a researcher, I was not happy when my teacher borrowed my idea without telling the source. And that's not to say that it can't be given. I said that it would be okay for the protagonist to just give it to him, which makes both characters problematic. Shi Ji has more bosses than the protagonist, can he be guilty? And if you assume that she is a first-line researcher who is still in the upper circle, she is a serious researcher. It is difficult for me to imagine that when a scientific researcher encounters something curious or does not understand, the first thing he thinks of is to sneak a look and go to a first-class area. Personality can be despicable or even despicable, but you must respect knowledge and be honest in research. Otherwise, if you don't get results through research like this, rely on Tencent's victory method. There is no way your world setting can support this (three families fighting for hegemony, endless infighting). It feels very disrespectful to myself and the other person.

Awesome, full of imagination. Keep it up and it will be a hit!

Looking at it now, I can only say that the idea is very good, but the author probably doesn't have an outline, which is a pity.

Low expressiveness: ¹ Ace machine cannot attack from a distance, ² The laboratory does not have full-system defense capabilities, ³ The expressiveness of several major groups is too low and those who don't know it think they are studios, ⁴ This is the age of the Star Sea, please be more open-minded, the population cannot start at one trillion. ⁵In addition to mechas, do you have other things that express social characteristics? New materials, new energy, new social theory.

Chapter 4 is too weird to persuade you to quit. The settings of ancient martial arts battles are too weird and not reasonable enough. At least there must be appropriate technology and tactical coordination. You are too weird and easy to quit.

Basketball Pangu, Wing Chun Day of Destruction, Ten Meters True Immortal

The rebirth at the beginning of the chapter combines the knowledge of the two worlds to open up a new track. But after entering the group, it becomes a mess. Now in the latest chapter, it is okay to get the best materials to design a new product. The problem now is the sense of fragmentation. Your cultivation is like a human being. This is unreasonable for special machine players, and the expressiveness is really stretched.

After reading it, the so-called universe has only five large star fields and two small star fields. The population setting is too chaotic. One moment it is billions, another moment it is tens of billions. One moment all the people in a star field are dead and then they just sit back and watch. This is the so-called for mankind. I laughed.