A Rousing Song of Great Strife

Kunlun Has a Sword is a group of people who found their martial arts dreams in the game. Great Fighting Song: When the dream of martial arts becomes a reality, you chase the spiritual energy needed for cultivation and begin to explore and conquer the universe. This is a rare book that combines science fiction, martial arts and fantasy. For new friends, start reading Kunlun Sword. It is a very good online martial arts game.

I am a long-time reader of Kunlun. I have been reading the book for a long time and I have something to say. I hope the author will listen to it. First of all, I would like to praise the author for his persistence despite the proliferation of low-quality works in the online literary world. Whether it is Kunlun or Da Zheng, the world view, Chinese culture, and Five Elements concepts have obviously been done and seem to be well-founded, at least sincere enough. It can be seen that the author spent a lot of effort on all macro concepts. This is the advantage of Kunlun and Da Zheng, and it is also the reason why I have been pursuing books. But it is also a shortcoming. The reason is that the macroscopic part often consumes most of the author's energy, and the microscopic aspect is not taken into account. I wanted to say it when I got to the final stage of the last book, but after thinking about it I just forgot about it. The new book is also like this, I can't help but want to express my opinions. This book was originally not on the shelves and was planned to be turned into a short story, but now it is on the shelves and has been converted into a full-length book. It cannot change the problem that the progress is too fast and it is destined to be a short story. To put it simply, the progress is too fast. Compared with Kunlun, it is even more exposed that the author has always used a third-person perspective to describe the story, which seems monotonous and straightforward. The character has no personality and no soul. It's like changing the account in the game, but the operation is still the same player. Because of the third body perspective. The whole book has always been very harmonious. There are no conflicts, contradictions, struggles, struggles between different positions, helplessness and other pyrotechnic elements between the characters. It is also fascinating without passion. Kunlun ended with a macro description. I personally like your setting very much, but I feel that it was not fully utilized. This time when writing about two protagonists, we need more distinct character characteristics, and there must be contradictions and contrasts. Even when Kunlun described how heroic the leader of the Ming Cult was, he only talked about his indomitable martial arts, which was really boring. Could you give more profiling to the characters instead of telling them in a straightforward way? It's like dealing with people, different choices, handling methods, relationships with other characters, etc. I want to see real people instead of game account characters. Personally, I very much agree with the author's attempt to write urban prose in his next new book, which should be more down-to-earth. I hope it will be more smoky and humane. A major feature of Taoist culture is that gods are all evolved. They are all flesh and blood, and they are not gods without passion. Finally, I hope that this book will get better and better. I believe perfectionist authors can do it too, and I will continue to pursue it.

I just want to know if Yuanyuan was beaten by Wang Qing😃

This book tells the story of earthlings invading another world under the background of cultivating immortals.

Calling mom this time is very spiritual (ﾉಥBenefitಥ)

Don't worry, author, I'll save it for now and come back after I finish reading your last book! Kunlun Youjian has only read a few chapters so far, and the setting is not very good and there are even loopholes... But the text is quite comfortable to read! So I decided to pursue your book! I even canceled the automatic subscription, just to prevent the bonus coins from being mixed in when I first ordered!

Really cool operation, I recommend you to subscribe to the old book 😅

I've watched most of "A Sword from Kunlun" and the lack of sense of immersion is not the fault of the two protagonists at all. The entire story is narrated. Where does the sense of immersion come from? Everything has to be explained. There is no plot or climax 😰

It seems that it will be available after signing the contract 😅😅😅😅

If you change the content so that you can understand it clearly even without reading the book, you can probably sign the contract.