Mythology: This Yang Jian Is Pretty Strong

According to the myth, Yang Jian is the Jade Emperor's treasure: Qingyuan is the Jade Emperor's insane nephew. He picked off the sun and the lunar moon and put them in his purse, so that there is no distinction between day and night in the world. The Jade Emperor didn't know what calamity had befallen the mortal world. When he found out it was Qingyuan's trick, he asked him to take out the sun and moon. Qingyuan rolled on the ground and refused to take it out. The Jade Emperor coaxed him and said that the sun and moon placed on the body can make people grow old. Qingyuan was afraid of old age and cried anxiously. The Jade Emperor said: "Take it out and I will allow you to celebrate two birthdays every year until you are eighteen years old." ' So, Qingyuan's birthday is now June 23rd and December 23rd. Of course, you can also say that Qingyuan Miaodao Zhenjun is not Erlang Shen.

There seems to be no system in Baolian Lantern, and it is not recommended to spend too much time climbing to the top. Yang Jian, Sun Houhou, and Agarwood will reach the sky directly after just a few years of learning.

Now I feel like this book is messy here and there, and each world is so short that I don't know how helpful it is after reading it. Moreover, it's a waste of time. I won't be able to finish this book unless I revise it.

I don't think that Yang Jian, who has not suffered any suffering, can achieve great achievements in later generations. I feel that Tu Zhu's journey through so many worlds is just a patchwork of words. The lotus lamp has no passion and is suitable for a romance heroine. It is perfect. The Supreme Humanity is vigorous and vigorous. Any little character can write his own story.

This book says that the Immortal King is equal to Taiyi, the ultimate Immortal King is Daluo, the quasi-immortal emperor is Hunyuan, and the Immortal Emperor is Pangu. You are exaggerating too much. Taiyi is unique in time and space, Daluo plays with time at will to open up the world, and the Immortal Emperor changes history and affects the future, but will be backlashed by cause and effect. Even Daluo is not as good as it. You tell me it is this Pangu. Who is the author reading the "Zhe Tian Trilogy"?

It's such a mess, this book must be a mess

I really don't have a sense of immersion when writing about indigenous protagonists in fan fiction, and the dialogue is also quite white.

The indigenous protagonist is written in the introduction, which is a waste of time

The thing I can't understand the most. As the sister of the Jade Emperor, how did Yao Ji fall in love with a mortal?

They are not a family, they do not enter a family, gods and mortals are combined, Yang Jian's mother, Yang Jian's sister, these two people, if they are gods, they don't do it... I feel that they are sick