In the Perfect World, I Devour the Wilderness to Attain the Dao

Unlike Shi Hao, who constantly addressed others as "fellow Daoist" when he was seven or eight years old, Shi Hao was very lively and unrestrained.

I didn't want to complain, but I just had to. It's amazing how much the younger brother of the "Covering the Sky" sect can suppress Shi Hao. 🤭🤭 I won't even mention your claim that Shi Hao participated in the battle between Immortal Kings. And what kind of nonsense is this "Covering the Sky" guy? Could his youthful self possibly have been a match for your upgraded version of Shi Hao?

This will surely destroy the forbidden zone if it doesn't cover the sky.

I never expected that besides the Book of All Heavens, someone would write a book about dogs.

Well, the author's idea is great, but the writing is lacking, and the protagonist is basically useless. It would have been better to just write about Ara as the protagonist.

I support removing the main character. Actually, removing the main character preserves a glimmer of anticipation for the unknown, making the game run more smoothly.

Why don't we just delete the main character while we haven't written much yet? This main character is a bit redundant.

The protagonist's name is really jarring. It's become an overpowered advantage for the protagonist. Why not just use a single character for the protagonist's name (恒)? Wouldn't that elevate the character's sophistication?

The main character doesn't feel very present; their presence or absence wouldn't make a difference.

He obtained the Six Paths of Reincarnation Dao Fruit in just the first world. The Reincarnation Body was already an incredibly powerful cheat in the original story, and now that he has it, killing enemies across two major realms will be as easy as mowing grass, right?