Mortal: I Have a Fairy Cave

Pig's feet are actually indigenous? Swallowed time travel? It's very uninspiring when a fan writes like this.

1. Aboriginals are boring 2. Goldfinger has no sense of existence

Fan, you write a native of Hammer who abandons the masses for a small group of people?

Ouch, this time travel is really embarrassing. The souls are being stripped and eaten by the natives. Tsk, tsk, tsk, I can't stand it anymore.

If the author wants a female protagonist, she must be effective. The fused Linglong of Xiang Xin Ruyin and Ge Yiyue are relatively effective. Although it is said that after entering the spirit world, she will be targeted by the wolf king of the monster clan, but by then the strength of the trump card should be almost increased. And I think these two are already very good compared to the other female cultivators. Later, writing the spirit world chapter will still need some foundation, and naturally, I will leave a writing pen. These two are already very suitable to be the female protagonists.

Mortals Cultivation to Immortality, Purple Mansion Immortal Fate, Hundreds of Refinements to Become an Immortal, Three Immortals in One, Cultivation of Immortals Invincible 😁, these three are all fairy novels that I liked to read at the beginning.

I don't understand what you think about writing about indigenous people in fan fiction (the memory of the time traveler hasn't been retrieved yet, so I'm even more speechless). If you write about indigenous people, it's better to just reopen a new background. I might as well just read normal novels about cultivating immortals.

Writing fan fiction is mainly about showing off in front of the protagonist and popular supporting characters. Why do so many authors put the cart before the horse? . . Can't figure it out

Personally, I feel that the natives have nothing to see. Secondly, it is not clear whether the golden finger has any sense of existence. These are the core issues. Updates are slow. I estimate that I will be able to become a eunuch in about fifty chapters at most.

It is recommended to have more female protagonists. Recommended collection: Nangong Wan, Xin Ruyin and Xiaomei, Dong Xuan'er, Chen Qiaoqian, Hong Fu, Zhong Weiniang and her master Jiang Yun, Nishang Fairy, Zi Ling and her mother Zhou Yuan, Fan Jingmei, Zhuo Ruting, Yuan Yao, Yanli, Mrs. Wen, Ling Yuling and her mother Wen Qing, Yinyue, Bingfeng, Han Zhixian, Mei Ning, Wen Siyue, Liu Yu, Xiao Cuier, Nie Ying, Yan Ruyan, Bingpo Fairy, Mu Peiling, Bai Yaoyi, Holy Ancestor Yuancha, Holy Ancestor Baohua, Dai'er, Fairy Heifeng, Jin Yue, Xianxian, Liu Leer, Bai Suyuan, Mo Caihuan, Mo Yuzhu, Mo Fengwu, the four ladies of the Mo family (Yan, Li, Liu, Wang)

Everyone is here to see the fandom. What's good about the indigenous people? Have you, the author, ever thought about this issue?

Alas, some of your plots are purely about fighting for the sake of water, participating in sect competitions, completing bounty tasks during the Qi training period, and fighting with others in the Hidden Moon Sect. Do these have anything to do with the main plot or the plot? Han Li can laugh his head off with your start. Anyone with any brains will practice wholeheartedly. The main line of mortals is practice. Those who talk about going out for experience are not stuck by bottlenecks.

I can't even find a cheat code, I just saw the latest one, it's too boring and there are no fan elements that I want to see.

The first three chapters are poisonous, contradictory, and indigenous literature.

Write about being kidnapped, but not how you were rescued, and then you arrive home as soon as you open and close your eyes? ? So what's the point of writing about this kidnapping? ? I don't understand, I really don't understand

Come on, keep writing, keep updating, I'll give you the monthly ticket. I hope there won't be too many female protagonists. Two or so is best. I hate having a harem. The author should be careful and write about the feeling of cultivating immortals instead of writing about women.

There's no need to describe so many parts that are the same as the original work, right?

I need to download a dungeon. It's all a family matter.

Many people are reading the book, and the plot is too slow

My personal opinion about Liu Jing in the original work is that Liu Jing should be classified as a hero. After participating in the auction in exchange for the thousand-year-old elixir, looking at the ill-intentioned eyes in the auction room, Liu Jing's mentality should be written more generously. Those who are following the robbers must be killed with a backhand, but those dark thoughts should not be written out for Liu Jing, who prefers to be an upright leader. Personally, now Liu Jing is the re-skinned Han Li who has good talent and background and can grow up smoothly

It's really pretty good in fan fiction.

Is the author a side job? Why is there one chapter every day? I have already voted for several monthly votes. Is there still hope for this book?

Borrowing precious treasures to push the book, "I will clean up the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion at the beginning, and I will complete the incomplete skills." Mortal flow, Gou Dao flow, IQ will not decrease if IQ is online, the protagonist's magical power refers to ancient magic: a wonderful pen creates a dragon, scattering beans to form an army, dividing the ground to form a river, etc. Interested Taoist friends can take a look. If you are bothering me, please contact me. [Asking mortals to recommend each other's authors]

I voted for another monthly vote. The author should write quickly. Stop playing with your phone and focus on coding. I rarely see Liu Jing's fan fiction. I need to work harder.

I voted for another monthly ticket and suddenly discovered that the protagonist and Xin Ruyin can use dual cultivation to replenish Xin Ruyin's excess yang energy. The ancient monk's exercises are definitely possible. Although it is still difficult, at least they can wait until Xin Ruyin forms the elixir, and the protagonist is almost Nascent Soul.