Become a Great Name in the Ninja World

Frankly speaking, this system is too restrictive. It's not that its effect is small, but it's too old-fashioned. As an old bookworm, it's a bit boring to read. It would be much better if the exchange in other worlds is opened. Of course, the author's writing skills are also high. After all, it has to be interesting and maintain a balance of combat power.

The first three chapters are all nonsense, and the Wanjie Mall can only buy things from the Naruto world. Couldn't you just call it Naruto Mall?

I originally came here because of the title of the book, thinking that when the emperor used the Wanjie system to develop the country and the army. As a result, I saw that the system had a limited version of Naruto in the first two or three chapters, which was boring and I was immediately persuaded to quit. Basically, many fan fictions always use and praise the Naruto system, either the Sharingan or the Wood Release. I really got tired of reading it too much.

Speaking of becoming a daimyo, I remember reading a book about becoming a daimyo a long time ago. The heroine was Kaguya. Ah no, it seems there is more than one. I vaguely remember that in one of the books, after he became famous, he lay down in a coffin, and he has been lying there until now. It seemed that he was following the plot, pretending to be slapped in the face, etc. I saw him coming out of the coffin, and then stopped reading after a little while. There is another author. I remember he also wrote a fanfic about Journey to the West, but I forgot its name.

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I've read Chapter 18, and there's nothing poisonous about it. It's just that there's not much plot, and there's a lot of narration, and there's an endless stream of "for example,"

I was attracted by the title of the book, and I thought I was going to be the famous name directly, but I didn't expect that I was just running around and trying to make up for the plot 😐

The plug-in is too weak. The Daimyo in Naruto is equivalent to the era when the Seven Kingdoms competed for hegemony in the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period. Everyone recognized Emperor Zhou's status as emperor and were very willing to accept the various honors awarded by Emperor Zhou. However, if Emperor Zhou wanted to interfere with the military power and internal affairs of the Seven Kingdoms, the Seven Kingdoms would pretend that Emperor Zhou did not exist and would not obey any of his orders. They would only obey orders but not propaganda! Similarly, the daimyo in Naruto are the same existence as Emperor Zhou. It is basically impossible for the daimyo to control Konoha! It is indeed possible that the protagonist has a cheat, but this cheat is too weak!

There is a lot of nonsense at the beginning, and the narration is embarrassing. I only think about it in my heart but don't put it into practice, and I don't fully understand it after the introduction.

There is no need to explain it so clearly, and the readers are not stupid. If you explain too much, it will feel like water. It's okay to add water twice, but readers will be annoyed if there is too much water 😅

See the mission system. . I can't stand the punishment of tasks. If you still write like this in 2021, you are afraid that there will be too many readers.

The name we agreed on turns out to be a soldier running around

I don't know how to focus on the key points, some plots are too boring

Talking about nonsense, I would like to call you the strongest. You have to join the fight for hegemony in the beginning for 6 chapters, subdue the horses and horses for 8 chapters, and bribe a minister who does not appear in the plot. It starts from chapter 17 and lasts for 7 chapters. It is basically all narration. Every time something happens to a person, I write 10 chapters. This book can contain 10,000 chapters.

According to this map, you can directly attack Bo, Wo, and Cha in the order of taking over these territories, and let the post-prefecture and county system send people to manage them. The troops are stationed in Bo and Wo, the mine protection is there, and the attack is in Tang. Then Uzumaki's army sent out a large number of ninjas and troops to quickly capture the water (Obito messed with Kirigakure, there were basically not many masters) and sent out sealing troops to seal 3/6 tails. Then kill the daimyo of the water and send someone to take over management. This way the protagonist has a lot of logistical resources. Then digest it for a few years. Either go west to hit the river wind or north to hit the Tangyue Lei. Although the wind is easy to fight (only 1 tail), but there are too few resources (there are deserts everywhere), it may be a drag in the end. You can leave it until the end. (But I am afraid that there will be a backstab at the critical moment) Thunder is difficult to defeat (unity, no major internal conflicts, and 2/8 tails are obedient), and the resources are even more than water. The unity level of soil is only lower than that of Lei, and the level of unity among masters is average. According to the landform of the original work, there may be more iron ore

I'll order it all, please give me some suggestions. The writing is very good. The only thing is the punishment mechanism of the system. This is really a big flaw. The system of this book has a weak sense of existence. It is not a very detailed data flow. There is no need to force the system to have such a punishment mechanism. Just make it so that there are rewards for completion and no rewards for failure. According to the current mechanism, and according to what some book friends have said, the author really dislikes the large number of readers. Since I haven't finished the book yet, let's revise some of the previous content.

1. The language is neither foreign nor rustic. Except for the word "yu" that appears every time he speaks, there seems to be nothing else. It looks a bit strange. 2. The real struggle for power and intrigue are difficult to write, and the article does not reflect that kind of turmoil.

The update is too slow, forget it is slow, the number of words is still small, although it is not too watery, and everything that needs to be explained is explained. The most important thing is to stop updating for one day without any explanation! Even if the article is good, I have no opinion on the subscription content, but I have a strong opinion on the author, so the vote is gone.

Oh, it's well written. Please update the author more!

Those who invested may have made money, but people like me who only subscribed have lost money?

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Author: I thought you would exchange achievement points for telegrams. Add a few main supporting characters, write about business and the black market, and add some original characters.

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I hope this book has Hinata as the heroine