My Name Is Namikaze Naruto

The plot is really dragging, I won't watch it anymore! ! !

It can be said that I have read so many novels with Naruto as the background, and this is the first one that makes me feel that it is worth pursuing. It is the first one that does not treat other characters as idiots, and it is also the first one that is really written with heart. The insights it writes express the cruelty and reality that are inadvertently expressed in the original novel about the world of Naruto.

I don't like the author's description of the third generation. The third generation is definitely an old hermaphrodite and an old politician. Even if he is doing it for the village, it is for his village. The author writes that he is selfless for the village, but sometimes a little weak and kind. It would be better not to write about Naruto who is anti-Konoha.

It is really problematic to say that you are copying Naruto. Hokage: False Naruto was the first fan fiction I read, and it was one of the earliest ones I read. It was about six or seven years ago. I loved it in my memory, but now I can't stand it anymore. Sure enough, does it have a memory bonus? The more I read it, the more I liked it before and I can't stand it anymore. Although I have forgotten a lot of the plot, the content is completely different from this one. It's just that they both rebelled against the village. Could it be that both Neji and Sasuke rebelled against the village? If this is plagiarism, then there is no originality.

In fact, the author's writing is impeccable in detail, but it is long. Like a running account, many words are repeated over and over again, such as: just like the original work, in the original work, etc., And Namikaze Naruto's ideals are repeated over and over again. You have already jumped out of the original frame, so don't repeat the original work too much, and in terms of details, save what you need and don't be too streamlined. I believe I am not the only one who will skip most of the sterile characterization dialogues. Online novels are either great or detailed, but they should not be repetitive if they are exciting, and they should not be boring if they are detailed. Just skip the detailed description of the shrimp soldiers and crab generals, and focus on the description of the protagonist and a few important characters. Otherwise, once a lot of things are accumulated, they will not match up and will collapse sooner or later.

Naruto

There are over a hundred chapters, and the book reviews haven't even passed a hundred yet. Tsk, tsk, tsk, I've already agreed and I've ordered them all! Author, your writing style is very good. It is obvious that you wrote the original work, but it is still able to make people read. You set a goal in the early stage to defect in the Chunin Examination, which makes people have the motivation to pursue it. However, the same problem is that your plot is too slow. I wrote two chapters in one day. Today, I wrote the first scene of the Chunin Examination, where Naruto meets Kabuto. Well, after recalling the original work in my head, it seems that you are better at procrastination. I believe I'm not the only one to raise this issue. The plot is dragging. I remember you posted once before and mentioned the issue of the plot dragging him out, but it doesn't seem to have been resolved. You just said, if I don't correct the problem, then I will have no choice but to throw it away! Why do so many people watch pirated copies? You're too watery, I feel like it's not worth the money, uh... I guess so. Maybe you have your own ideas, but to use Guo Degang's words: It's not even worth it for the audience to spend 50 cents to buy a ticket for you. They feel that they are losing money, so why are you talking about your dream? It seems to be said like this, look at your book, it's a mess. But your writing style is very good. I believe if you simplify the plot, it will be a good book. If you are still like this, then it will only depend on your enthusiasm to persist, and you will not make any money! Again, I'm fully booked.

Although I am not Madarabuki, I still want to clarify it for Madara. It was just Madara who wanted to have fun. What kind of finale did Rin Tomb show? What space distortion is is just a side description of the high attack power at this time, how can it block space. From such a long distance, if he lets go of Lan Dunguangya with both hands, only one leg will fly over? Life has been sublimated and we are no longer human. Why am I so happy to play with you?

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Let me share my thoughts and some of the poisonous points I saw 1: After traveling through time, it still looks like the original owner has not learned the clone technique 2: The protagonist actually had a hard time fighting Mizuki, who was defeated by the original owner. The original owner abandoned his studies, but the protagonist has been practicing hard 3: The protagonist has nine tails and three tails in his body, and it is outrageous to be suppressed by Itachi when the relationship between the two parties is very good. 4: The supporting characters on the protagonist's side are infinitely stronger. On the protagonist's side, in addition to Ningji who obtained the reincarnation eye in Naruzuo, Konan Itachi Kakuzu, and several supporting characters led by the protagonist Yakumo Karin. On the whole, except for Naruzu Neiji who is in an advantageous position relative to the five major countries, the rest of the high, middle and low schools are in a weak position, but they write a state of comprehensive suppression. 5: The combat power is very strange. Why does the author of "Naruto with Nine Tailed Golden Body" think he can beat six spots? In the original "Naruto with Nine Tails and Golden Body", Kake and Sasuke are still overwhelmed by six spots. Why do they think they can beat six spots?

In fact, I want to see how Naruto used the questions of the Uzumaki clan, the Senju clan, and the Uchiha clan to ask the Senju Hashirama why Konoha, which carries the benevolence and justice he carries, treats the three elder clans as almost extinct. For example, why did Konoha not rescue the Uzumaki Kingdom of the Offensive and Defense Alliance? Others have no position, but Naruto can ask for his mother. I was looking forward to Hashirama's answer.

The more I read, the more annoying I am. I keep repeating the same sentence over and over again, but I can't make it more concise.

A Naruto fanfic that fits my world view very well. The protagonist has ideas and his methods are reasonable. Some Naruto stories travel through time and Naruto immediately destroys Konoha and destroys the ninja world, regardless of combat power, indiscriminate killing, genocide, brainwashing, population enslavement experiments, whatever is evil. I thought it was too much to say something, and then a bunch of people criticized me, as if I was a heinous person with some normal thinking. Can't stand it. This book is very good. Konoha is not good to Naruto and goes out to attack the power level of Konoha and change it. There is no need to be crazy and evil. Full subscription support

I'm convinced, please stop writing about these fancy palace struggles in the Water Kingdom! I'm really not interested at all 😐 Speed ​​up the progress a little bit, you are too slow to get started! This is Naruto! Author! It's not the Hokage's palace plan.

The author shouldn't keep complaining that no one is subscribing. I caught up with the latest chapter last night, and it was like re-reading the original Naruto novel. There are very few changes to the plot in more than 200 chapters, and there are a lot of narrations and psychological descriptions. I had such a bad experience after watching it in one go, not to mention the people who continued to subscribe. Originally, everyone wanted to see the changes in the darkened Naruto. The growth process can be abbreviated. To be honest, you can start writing directly from the chunin exam. Fifty chapters are too much for the previous plot.

It's too chicken to be watery. I can't say that, no, it's just too bland.

In addition to the second generation, even the first generation's Will of Fire has problems. Madara said that Hashirama's will has deviated from its original intention. The village is to better protect his companions and family, how can he give up everything for the village?

I feel like Konoha is too smearing and stupid. The Great Flood Period. The world is unified. Just Konoha. Why can you act so selfishly without conscience? Drag the ordinary people of Konoha into this torrent of war. To be honest, Konoha is not big. Surround it for a month. See if you are still proud.

Very good👍Then did the author understand?

I don't want to watch Naruto anymore in my life. I have never seen a person who can handle the three generations of Konoha and the scapegoat. It's really disgusting to watch if they can't handle it well, and it seriously affects my mood

You, the author, have finished this book and don't know what to write. How many chapters have been lost? You just won't write any more. Let's look at the next chapter for analysis.

It's better to watch the animation than start from more than 200 chapters. .

When I saw the chapter about the Kingdom of Waves, I wrote 5.6 Chapters just from my mental description. And almost nothing in this chapter is just water.

Will the unification of the ninja world finally resurrect all those who died? Besides Hinata, is there also Koyuki as the heroine?

In fact, I feel like the author could write about the God of Death, after all, the original work is really a bit unfinished.

{"NickName":"Xiao Yiqing ALEX","UserId":345838730} Squat for the essence.

It is very rigorous in logic and careful in details, but it is so rigorous that it makes people feel very stubborn, and the feeling of satisfaction is not that obvious.

Naruto level classification (each person talks briefly, don't criticize if you don't like it) Genin, Chunin, Jonin, Kage, Tailed beast level, Sage level, Indra Asura level, Six Paths Sage level, Kaguya level,

I got the nine monthly passes and read them all in one go. It was so satisfying that I actually got a burning sensation while watching it 😆

Congratulations on the completion, looking forward to the extra chapter Ming Hina's wedding is here 🤭