Seeking the Way to Immortality Begins with a Cultivation Seedling

In current games, the protagonist's master is often poorly portrayed. They are either stereotypical passersby who quickly disappear, or they contribute to the plot in the early stages but are overthrown by the protagonist, or they are mysterious and have a formidable enemy who becomes the catalyst for the plot in the mid-to-late stages.

These days, how many fantasy novels dare to spend 200 chapters writing about ordinary people? Even 200 chapters about Qi cultivation are hardly worth reading. People prefer stories about powerful figures like Haoyu Zhenxian who are reborn, understand? Early on, the protagonist's intelligence is overwhelming; a strong opening is essential to attract attention.

The protagonist is twelve years old, an indigenous person, and has the mental capacity of an eight or nine-year-old.

Are they all shills? They're still calling this herbal remedy incredibly good.

To be honest, the protagonist of the Earth Bureau, who incorporates some modern memories, is really stupid and unlikable, but the author's writing style is good, so it's still readable.

Children in rural areas are precocious, but not stupid. It's just that they lack experience and find it difficult to accept new things, which is why they seem foolish. After all, even if you gave an ancient person a mobile phone, they wouldn't know how to use it. It's simply a matter of limited knowledge. Also, that "fairy seedling" shouldn't always be called a single seedling; it's too frequent and distracting.

November 30, 2024, Completed (Unfinished), Congratulations 👏

The story gets worse and worse as it goes on. The master becomes the protagonist, and the disciples are just ruthless cultivation machines, with the old man simply handing out cultivation techniques and opportunities. It feels like the author himself is a middle-aged unemployed person fantasizing about his children becoming successful and his relatives and friends rising to prominence—of course, it goes without saying who those relatives and friends are.

Well, it's another shocking story. One move and it's shocking for two or three chapters! Why is there so much internal monologue?

The author is clearly a city dweller and has no idea what going up the mountain to chop firewood is all about. When going up the mountain to chop firewood, the forests are all owned, especially those near the city. In the past, people often died fighting over forests.