The Qing Dynasty Is About to End

The title of the book castrates Kangxi and the father-in-law is pretty awesome. I think it has always been ranked high, but I just don't have time to read it. Can Da Luoluo also castrate Emperor Xianfeng? As a father-in-law, I will call my father-in-law Xianfeng.

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Author, don't be led astray by book reviews. Remember one sentence: the majority are silent. Data is real, book reviews are useless. Give you an example. There is a book called Kaihai, which is a book about the history of the Ming Dynasty. That book had just been put on the shelves that year, and it did very well for a while, and it was even recommended. The author wrote a heroine who accompanies the male protagonist in his development. The plot is brilliant, but the background setting of the heroine is not very good. Later, the male protagonist said that he wanted to marry the female protagonist, start from scratch, and earn the title of royal wife for the female protagonist. The emotions are really well described. It was all good at first, but as a result, there were various comments in the comment section saying that the heroine had a bad background and was delaying the development of the male protagonist. Then there are things like women who don't look at it. As a result, the author believed it. A few chapters later, the male protagonist suddenly showed up with a daughter of the Banzhou Yang family. In order to climb up the ladder and marry the Banzhou Yang family, he immediately took the Yang family's daughter as his wife, and the heroine became a concubine instead. This unnatural operation really made some book reviewers happy, but the price was that the monthly subscription of that book was cut in half, and the performance has been in decline since then. Comments on this chapter were filled with outrage. Later, the author refused to change the plot, and would rather make various corrections. But the results never came back. I was one of them back then. This disgusting plot is as uncomfortable as eating a fly. I won't even read that author's books now. So we can draw lessons from past mistakes and learn from those behind us. It is best for the author to write according to his own ideas. Don't let book reviews sway you.

Even if you succeed in rebelling against the Qing Dynasty under the guise of a monotheistic religion, it is not a good thing, and it may even be worse!

I used to think that religion was something ridiculous, ignorant and ignorant. Now it seems that the reverse effect is the cause. Religion is just a fruit, and ignorance and poverty are the root. Religion is not without its progressive nature. India can hold up the status of a great country thanks to the Hindu community. Some people think that Hinduism is ignorant and backward. Without Hinduism, India would be so complex that it would be a small country.

After all, he is an old author. Why does the AI ​​flavor become stronger as he writes? Is one third of one chapter written by me?

Writing historical time travel novels after the 17th century should change the world's demographic structure, otherwise it would be meaningless. The whole world should undergo population structure adjustment in the style of vacating cages and replacing birds. Exchange the populations of the Korean Peninsula, Japanese Islands, Indochina Peninsula, and Nanyang Islands with each other, and then immigrate Chinese to these places respectively, so that Chinese people account for more than 50%, and other systems of the population each account for about 10%. Ten million Chinese immigrants occupied the Indus and Ganges plains. In more than 200 years, the population of China will be more than 400 million. Immigrate 5 million Chinese people to occupy the black soil belt of the Eastern European plains. In more than 200 years, there will be more than 200 million Chinese people. Immigrate 5 million Chinese people to the Central Valley and coastal areas of western North America. In more than 200 years, there will be more than 200 million Chinese people, and an independent Chinese country in North America will be established. Immigrated 2 million Chinese people to the southeastern plains and Pampas of South America. Two million Chinese immigrants occupied Dhofar, Oman and the highlands of Yemen, the most fertile areas in the Arabian Peninsula.

Da Luoluo now uses AI to assist writing extensively. One chapter is 3,000 words, and it seems that 2,000 words were compiled by AI. There are a lot of metaphors and descriptions, and paragraphs without substantive content. Of course, the core idea must be the author's, and AI cannot come up with it. But I personally don't like this kind of thing. What other readers think, please feel free to discuss.

The author's best-performing novel so far is Saving the Ming Dynasty. This novel has contributed almost half of the author's fan points. Saving the Ming Dynasty was really popular when it was updated, but I didn't expect that it had only been completed for more than four years, and its popularity has almost completely cooled down. . . . After browsing various major novel forums, almost no one has mentioned the novel Saving the Ming Dynasty. . Let alone discussing the plot, almost no one even mentioned the novel. . . . Is the loss of popularity so serious? It's only been over four years since it was completed, and it's almost gone and buried in history.

This author from the Qing Dynasty wrote one book after another, and the worse his grades got, the more enthusiastic he became! ! Let's all boycott it! Let him write down (Apocalypse, Wanli, Zhu Yunqi, Masanori, Jingtai), hoping to write down (Qin, Wei, Jin, Southern and Northern Dynasties), Tokugawa Household. (Listen to others' advice to eat enough)!

This book is also too confusing. All major national events are like playing house. The nonsensical words become pointless and the protagonist disappears from time to time.

This author has a crooked butt. Look at his previous novels about the Republic of China 😰😰😰

One glance at the AI ​​​​article. After all, he is a veteran writer for more than ten years, but he can be so shameless?

Hong Xiuquan (1814-1864) He founded Christianity in 1843 when he was 29 years old. He went to Guangxi to preach in 1844 when he was 30 years old. In 1851, when he was 38 years old, he started the Jintian Uprising. He named the country the Taiping Heavenly Kingdom and served as the king of heaven. He died of illness at the age of 51, becoming the only king to die well. Yang Xiuqing (1823-1856) Jintian was 29 years old and served as the king of the east. He was killed at the age of 34 Xiao Chaogui (?-1852) Jintian was 31 years old and served as the king of the west. It is estimated that he fought at the age of 32 Died Feng Yunshan (1815-1852) Goed to Guangxi to preach in 1844 at the age of 28. Jintian was 36 years old and served as the king of the south. He was seriously injured and died at the age of 37 Wei Changhui (1826-1856) Jintian26 years old, served as King of the North, and was killed at the age of 31 Shi Dakai (1831-1863) Jintian was 19 years old, served as King of Yi, and was killed at the age of 32 Qin Rigang (1821-18 56) Jintian Uprising was 31 years old, he was granted the title of King of Yan at the age of 34, and was killed at the age of 36 Hu Yihuang (1816?-1856) Jintian was 36 years old, he was granted the title of King of Yu at the age of 39, and he was injured and died at the age of 41 Lin Fengxiang (1825-1855) Jintian was 27 years old and was killed at the age of 31 Li Kaifang (1826?-1855) Jintian was 26 years old and was killed at the age of 30 Hong Renxuan ( 1822-1864) 1 The first batch of 843 to join the religion at the age of 22, arrived in Tianjing in 1859 at the age of 38, was granted the title of King Qian, and was killed at the age of 43 Chen Yucheng (1837-1862) Jintian was 14 years old, 1 In 859, King Feng Ying was 23 years old and was killed at the age of 25 Li Xiucheng (1823-1864) Jintian was 29 years old. In 1860, King Feng Zhong was 38 years old and was killed at the age of 42 Luo Outline (1811? -1855) Jintian was 41 years old, and died of serious injuries at the age of 45 Li Shixian (1834-1865) Jintian was 18 years old, in 1860 he was granted the title of 27-year-old imperial minister, and was killed at the age of 32 Yang Fuqing (1826?-1874) Jintian was 25 years old, and was granted the title of King Fu in 1859 at the age of 34, and was killed at the age of 49 Wu Ruxiao (1815?-1864) Jintian was 37 years old, and was granted the title of King Gu in 1861 at the age of 47 Years old, died in battle at the age of 50 Lu Shunde (1818-1865) Jintian was 34 years old, granted the title of king in 1861 at the age of 44, and was killed at the age of 48 Lin Qirong (1821-1858) Jintian was 31 years old, died in battle at the age of 38, and was granted the title of King of Qin in 1863 Lin Shaozhang (1825-1864) Jintian was 27 years old, and was 36 years old in 1860, and died in battle at the age of 40 Wei Jun (1 827-1884) Jintian was 25 years old. He was demoted to the Qing Dynasty in 1859 at the age of 33 and died of illness at the age of 58 Lai Wenguang (1827-1868) Jintian was 25 years old. In 1861, King Feng Zun was 35 years old and was killed at the age of 42. Killed Wang Haiyang (1830-1866) Jintian was 22 years old. In 1861, King Kang was granted the title of 32-year-old and died in battle at the age of 37 Huang Wenjin (1832-1864) Jintian 20 Years old, in 1861 the King of Blockade was 30 years old, and he was seriously injured and died at the age of 33 Tan Shaoguang (1835-1863) Jintian was 17 years old, and in 1862 King Mu was 28 years old, and he was killed at the age of 29 Tan Tiyuan (18 36-1866) Jintian was 16 years old. In 1863, King Feng Kai was 28 years old. He was killed at the age of 31 Huang Wenying (1839-1864) Jintian was 13 years old. In 1863, King Feng Zhao was 25 years old. He was killed at the age of 26. Killed Fan Ruzeng (1840-1866) Jintian was 12 years old, the first king in 1862 was 23 years old, and died in battle at the age of 27 There are more people who do not have detailed birth dates, so they are not written. Success is young, failure is also young

I have also read a lot of Daluoluo's books, including Burying the Qing Dynasty Alive, Saving the Ming Dynasty, Dreams of the Celestial Dynasty, etc. I also paid attention to the newly released Chongzhen. Let me put it bluntly: Da Luo Luo is only suitable for writing books about the reform and development of ancient dynasties, and is not suitable for writing about modern revolutions. As long as it touches modern times (the late Qing Dynasty and the Republic of China), the quality of the book will quickly deteriorate. Let's first talk about why the author is only suitable to write about dynasty reform, because the author is essentially a reformist. Therefore, the protagonist in the author's works has never been a staunch people's leader, but more like a leader elected by the ruling class, the leader who guides the ruling class forward. On the way of the sheep, the protagonist will kick off the old and weak sheep, beat the disobedient sheep, and allow more strong sheep to join. So by the end of the story, the entire sheep flock will look completely new, but just like the ship of Theseus, the sheep will still be the same sheep in the end. This problem is even more prominent in this book. What you write should be a modern revolution that overthrows the feudal monarchy and ends semi-colonial and semi-feudal society, not a dynastic reform that replaces the leader of the landlord and evil gentry class! The plot of the National People's Congress completely exposed the author's limitations. Not to mention the shortcomings of imposing the American federal system and dividing the Chinese people into three, six or nine classes. The so-called "National People's Congress" is essentially a democratic shell in order to win over the old ruling class. The overt grading of Chinese people in the book institutionalizes class inequality. Rich and powerful landlords, compradors, and old bureaucrats can openly participate in political affairs. The so-called democratic republic is just a modern cloak for feudal privileges, but in essence it is still protecting the privileges of vested interests. What makes people even more speechless is the operation of the protagonist's holster. Luo Yaoguo used his identity as the King of Wu of the Taiping Heavenly Kingdom to carry out superficial land distribution and pretended to be sympathetic to the farmers. On the other hand, he created the identity of Luo Xueyan as a comprador warlord, specializing in dealing with foreign powers, landlords, and old bureaucrats, trying to please both ends and get the best of him. The author's understanding of modern revolution always remains at the level of improvement of utensils. They think that building guns, setting up industry, and setting up a parliament are all ways of saving the nation and trying to survive. Ignoring class oppression, feudal land ownership, and imperialist aggression are the fundamental crux. They neither dared to mobilize the broadest masses of peasants, nor dared to liquidate the landlord class, nor dared to smash the old bureaucracy. They only dared to tinker with the old framework. There is also the issue of golden fingers. The modern mobile phone in hand is supposed to be a productivity tool that changes the times, but the author turns it into a prop for showing off. To engage in industrialization and learn new knowledge, you have to go to foreign countries to buy materials, which is a complete waste of the advantage of time travel. The logic is divided and the contradictions in the personality are also very prominent: while shouting to overthrow the great powers, at the same time colluding with imperialism; while shouting to divide the land to save farmers, while leaving sufficient privileges for the landlords; while shouting for democracy and republic, at the same time, it is building an independent kingdom. To put it bluntly, Da Luoluo writes about ancient dynasty reforms, which is his comfort zone: the protagonist becomes an emperor, carries out reforms, enriches the country and strengthens the army, and fights foreign enemies. The logic is self-consistent, and the language is witty and humorous. Readers also like to read it. But when writing about modern revolution, his reformist background, his ignorance of class struggle, his indifference to the people, and his waste of gold fingers directly caused the book to be completely destroyed. The author is advised to write about the reform of ancient dynasties honestly and not touch the subject of modern revolution. It will not only fail to write in depth, but also waste this period of history that should be magnificent.

This book has more than a hundred chapters and I really can't stand it anymore. The main problem is that the sense of immersion is too poor. The main line of the story is not like the main line, and the protagonist is not like the protagonist. The author can count by himself. How many times does your protagonist appear in more than 100 chapters? Many times, thousands of words are written about supporting characters, and some of them are not up to par. It feels like a mouthful of "tasteless", regardless of priority. I see that you are also an old author who has written more than 20 million words. How could you commit such a problem? ! !

​​It is a joke to build a country based on religion and it will only lead to death. It's almost modern times, and the mainstream will only be exchanges between countries around the world, with the strong making the rules, and without openness to the people's wisdom, there will be no way out by setting up technology trees and improving productivity.

Can anyone tell me, is there any AI description in the follow-up plot? I originally read it because of the author's humorous historical writing style, but after using AI, there was no humor at all, and it just didn't feel like a person's writing 🤤

The protagonist can smile playfully, but the words you write cannot smile playfully.

Damn, I saw dozens of photos of the Taiping Heavenly Kingdom Palace. I'm sick.

This book is so poorly written. The integration of politics and religion is too feudal after all. It feels like nonsense.

After reading about 50 chapters, I was thinking, how will the messy things that came from time travel to the later electric revolution be rounded off? Also, even if the Taiping Heavenly Kingdom takes over the country, what should we do if religious forces are implanted in people's hearts? Will it stifle people's scientific exploration? Never mind. I'm afraid of getting scolded if I talk too much.

The portrait of Hong Chengchou looks very similar to the portrait of Kangxi. The emperors of the Qing Dynasty had round faces before Shunzhi and oval faces after Kangxi. (There is a clarification on this point: the existing portrait of Hong is a redrawn version in 2001. It is not an original painting from the Qing Dynasty and cannot be used as a basis for appearance.) Some foreign missionaries said that Kangxi had six toes, and Hong also had six toes. 2. North Korean officials recorded that Kangxi looked older than others of the same age, and nine years old looked like thirteen or fourteen years old 3. After the death of Concubine Tong, Kangxi only left the court for a few days, but after Xiaozhuang's death, Kangxi kept mourning for her for three years. Xiaozhuang was not buried for 37 years. Kangxi was very filial to Xiaozhuang, but very unfilial to his nominal biological mother. His nominal biological mother died as soon as Kangxi ascended the throne, and Kangxi did not build a large tomb for her to bury her in the mausoleum of the concubine who had not given birth to any children. 4. Lifespan. Shunzhi died at the age of 24, Concubine Tong at the age of 24, Kangxi at the age of 69, Hong Chengchou at the age of 72, and Xiaozhuang at the age of 75. 5. There was a gap of exactly one hundred years between the death of Hong Chengchou and the end of Qianlong's succession. At that time, he was going to the south of the Yangtze River. They had a normal meal together in the morning, but their hair was cut off suddenly, followed by the Eight Banners disciples, who had their hair cut off to honor the national mourning. It is speculated that it was discovered that Hongli was not a descendant of Aisin Gioro but of Han descent, and was mourning the Qing Dynasty as a queen. 6. Oboi used to be very loyal to Shunzhi and Huang Taiji, but after Kangxi ascended the throne, he opposed Kangxi and rebelled. Just after Kangxi ascended the throne, a group of Eight Banners, the retainers who had previously supported them, rebelled. 7. Kangxi's pro-government ceremony took place approximately 27 months after the death of Hong Chengchou, which was in compliance with the son's filial piety rule. On February 18, the fourth year of Kangxi's reign (April 3, 1665), Hong Chengchou passed away at the age of seventy-one. 8. In the imperial edicts of the Qing Dynasty, the words "Feng Tian Cheng", "Cheng" and "Shunzhi" can be written normally. The writing method in the Kangxi period was one less horizontal than that in the Huang Taiji period, and the taboo of Hong Chengchou's name was obviously avoided. Then in Dream of Red Mansions, Jia Yucun said that Daiyu was very filial and her younger sister would always miss one or two strokes when writing sensitive characters. 9. Hong Chengchou's father's name was Hong Qixi, and his benefactor's name was Hong Qiyin. The character Xi was used in the year name, and the character Yin was used in the ranking of the princes. 10. A strange ancient corpse was unearthed in Shijingshan, Beijing in 2006. It was wearing an authentic five-clawed dragon robe from the Qing Dynasty and a first-grade official uniform from the Ming Dynasty. It had a Qing Dynasty braid on its head and a Ming Dynasty wig. Its actual identity was Huang Zhuowu, a fourth-grade official from the Qing Dynasty who has not been recorded in history. It was very strange. It has six toes, and Hong Chengchou has six toes in many historical records. He was a first-rank official in the Ming Dynasty and was demoted to the Qing Dynasty.

AI writing is good, but your humor style is gone. Should I read your book or the AI ​​book in the future? If this continues, I may not be able to stand it anymore...

I just saw Chapter 600. Is this what everyone thinks?

😥😥 When I saw the ending two days ago, I casually recommended it. I thought about giving it a recommendation score of 70 points because I always felt weird when I saw the end of it. Why did it become a biography of Zhao Si? The protagonist has disappeared. I can only say that the first part is really fun to watch, but the second part is just casual. The author just gets paid every month.

From the way he appeared in the world, he directly recognized the rebel leader as his godfather. Really outrageous

If you like this book, you can also read it (Charcoal Burning Workers of the Qing Dynasty in 1848). The writing is quite good.

Not updated yet? Hakiro, you guy

Can you write a book that travels through Yongli? I want to see how Yongli makes a comeback.