Beiyang Dream

Saw more than 30 chapters. So far it looks pretty good.

Come on, boss

June has passed, and the average number of words per day is even higher.

The two books about the Republic of China written by Da Luoluo before were great, but unfortunately they were blocked. I wonder what kind of different protagonist this one could have written.

The ultimate goal of all actions is to "become the president", and the country is just a tool to realize one's desire for power The logic of normal national salvation time travel stories is divided into two types: One is to save the country first and resist foreign aggression, and power is a natural responsibility after saving the country; and the logic of the protagonist in the first few chapters of this book is completely inverted: saving the country is just a by-product, and seizing the highest presidential power is the only core purpose. He made friends with Duan Qirui and Feng Guozhang, studied military industry and coastal defense, and lobbied Li Hongzhang. The starting point of all his actions was to "make it easier for me to take power in the future." This kind of narrative can easily convey dangerous perceptions: the suffering of the country, people, and nation is only a springboard for individuals to reach the top, and the so-called ideal of a strong country is just a cloak to package personal desires for power. The Sino-Japanese War was never a simple conflict between great powers: the entire Beiyang Navy was annihilated, Taiwan and Liaodong were ceded, and 200 million silver indemnities were paid. It directly interrupted the self-rescue Westernization Movement of the late Qing Dynasty, and started the frenzy of the great powers carving up China. Countless soldiers and civilians died in battle, and the people were displaced. It was a real national humiliation and suffering engraved in modern history. The protagonist has the perspective of God who can predict disasters, and he clearly understands what a huge national disaster this war will bring; but his first reaction is not to find ways to warn, remedy, and avoid disasters. Instead, he thinks about whether the war will disrupt his career path of promotion and study abroad, and even regards troubled times and conflicts as a ladder to seize power. In the face of national crisis, the survival of the country is secondary, and the future of personal advancement is the first. It completely dispels the heavy national tragedy carried by the Sino-Japanese War, and anyone who reads it will feel uncomfortable and even angry. Objectively speaking, the fatal flaw of the author's narrative: the weight of history is completely eliminated by power-seeking and self-interest Writing about the late Qing Dynasty, Beiyang, and the Sino-Japanese War of Sino-Japanese War naturally has to bear the heavy background of modern history. The author should have balanced "personal growth" and "national justice," but the first few chapters are obviously out of balance: 1. Excessively beautify the logic of speculative tycoons, regard "power theory" as the wisdom of survival, and weaken the harm of power struggles to the country and people in troubled times; ​2. Understate the national blood and tears behind the Sino-Japanese War of 1898, and escalate the national crisis as the protagonist. The background panel lacks awe of the modern history of humiliation; ​3. The long-term slogan for the protagonist to "save the country" completely abandons the priority of family and country in all recent decisions. The slogan and behavior are seriously separated, making readers feel hypocritical.

After reading the content, I feel that the author's political skills are very poor. It's okay to deceive a novice with this kind of subject matter!

Write quickly

The book is a good book and quite interesting. However, the AI ​​narrative structure and terminology in each chapter are too prominent and frequent. Many readers have left comments about this. The author should have a team in charge of it. It should be revised at least. It smells like AI 😰😰. I looked at it and string it together again, but I was still confused as soon as I entered it.

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I heard that I was beheaded. I don't mind if you use AI to write it. Can you make it faster?

Big Luoluo! Every book was written like a military idiot, and then every book was not changed. As a result, this one is still like that. No wonder the person is almost nowhere to be found.

No wonder I kept writing my heartfelt words at the beginning

I really didn't realize it was AI.

The AI ​​smell is too strong, the author is really lazy

The protagonist is said to be a 30-year-old person, and the psychological description is that of a fifteen-year-old or sixteen-and-a-half-year-old child. The same goes for the author, who doesn't even understand the AI ​​and doesn't bother to polish it, it's all about "President" and "Hanover standard accent".

I don't dislike you for using AI. The key is that you update too little. If you update so little content, it won't make any progress at all. Who will read it?

Can any good person recommend novels about the Republic of China? Now I like novels about the late Qing Dynasty and the Republic of China. The great changes that have not happened in a thousand years. I feel that the previous dynasties were really just reincarnation, which is boring.

The protagonist gets distracted when he meets people talking to him, and everyone in the comment section calls him crazy, but the author still doesn't change his mind. He gets distracted even when he meets Zuo Zongtang, when he meets foreigners, and when he meets his own family. The protagonist loves butterflies very much. Once he wants to accomplish something, he will start to think in palace style. I, the butterfly, will not flap my wings again and blow away the Sino-Japanese War. No matter how readers give feedback, their opinions remain unchanged, almost blowing their wings once. The author adheres very closely to his original intention. Many readers doubt that it was written by AI. The author openly uses "no, but", the most commonly used sentence by AI. This way, he remains calm in the face of danger and does not shy away from suspicion, but appears to be sincere. I admire the author

The writing is great, but I really can't complain about this inner drama. There are too many, which seriously affects reading. No matter I am chatting with people or doing other things, I keep nagging in my mind, and then people just stand there like a fool. Even Mrs. Wang can't say this...

The writing is not as good as that of AI. It used to be crooked and mixed with personal information. Now it is bad ass and it is written like a bunch of shit.

This book has such good results and is very popular. It can be regarded as your turnaround. Use AI less and update more.

Is it still useful to vote monthly? If it doesn't work, I won't vote.

Was this thing written by Da Luoluo? Isn't this an AI article? It talks nonsense over and over again.

The previous version of "Taiping Heavenly Kingdom", later period: pure love, no cultivation. The previous version of "Chongzhen" started with AI and was slightly revised. This book is slightly better. Although I have used AI from the beginning, it is only half-repaired.

Does this protagonist always seem to be unable to hold himself up from the wall? Cherish your life when doing big things, forget your life when you see small gains. We have repeatedly emphasized that the Sino-Japanese War must be fought and the Japanese must win. Then after this treaty is signed, you don't care about the Chinese people who suffered due to the cession of territory and compensation? It's as if you'd be happy just to get 20 taels of travel expenses. I won't refuse government-sponsored scholarships to study abroad. It requires your efforts but you are hesitant and timid. Wanting to be the president, after Sun Yat-sen abdicated, which president did not come from Beiyang as an official? Even if you are really a fan of officials, you still need to understand that you must be in a high position before you can wear a yellow robe. If you can win one or two foreign wars in the late Qing Dynasty, have military power and be popular, even if you become emperor by yourself, the royalists will change their families and join you.

The book is okay, but there are too many good people in the book club. After staying for two days, a group of Guodang people were mindlessly making history. A group of good people couldn't tell the difference between the Beiyang period and the Guodang period. The classics attributed the achievements of the Beiyang government to Beiyang. When asked, they would change the topic.

The author should use better AI instead of free ones.

I won't say how the author writes it, but I feel that the protagonist is not serious enough and often makes jokes just for the sake of being funny. Moreover, the protagonist is too light-hearted and does not have a strong personality charm. Like a sophisticated egoist. Moreover, the author always uses civil engineering terms such as Party A, project manager, and engineering to explain the plot in the book. It's a bit boring to watch.

Very average, at the level of more than ten years ago, with all kinds of poisonous points happening frequently. With this result, I have lost my starting point, but I don't have the benefits of novels of this era.

Why is the author so willing to write about psychological activities when writing novels? He keeps talking, talking, talking, non-stop. You should advance the story, what are you talking about? A lot of your psychological activities have no effect on the reasoning of the plot. They are just words.