My Chat Group Members Have Bright Futures

Let me talk about the first point first. When the protagonist was practicing his worldly skills, I felt something was wrong. First, I don't know if there is any other world with such a high online level. And you actually know the upper limit of other worlds and can practice selectively. There is absolutely no need to stick to that technique, and there are restrictions later on. The technique you created yourself is completely incomparable to the perfection of swallowing eternal life. So if you don't reach a certain height, it's absolutely fine to create new techniques. You have the time to make that song in the second protagonist's native world. If not, can you go to other worlds to make resources? Primitive accumulation can be completed completely on the world line of knowing other worlds. You see, you have been working in the world for a long time before you are just getting started, so you might as well go straight to practicing the Heaven Covering Technique. Just hang out with the protagonist, and then go to other worlds to get some resources if you have some foresight. Why don't you just take off? The third point is to receive the author's writing method. There is no shortage of skills in the Zhutian chat group, and there are Ye Fan's resources in the early stage. As a result, the main character is obsessed with restricting the skills. The author should plan the outline carefully. Otherwise, I feel like this book won't be popular for long.

I hope the author will not write about death in a sea of ​​fire, death in a sea of ​​fire, and death in a sea of ​​fire. It's better not to have anime characters

Change the territory of Xuan Kingdom. It has more than 160 billion square kilometers and a population of 20 billion. You are going to fly to the sky. Moreover, your population density is written according to a modern city. Isn't this nonsense? A small town has a population of 80,000. Canada is not so arrogant. Canada covers an area of ​​about 10 million square kilometers and has a population of tens of millions, all of which are sparsely populated. Large areas of no man's land. Large pristine areas. Xuan Kingdom has a population of over one million people in 10 million square kilometers, and your small town has a population of 80,000. Together, a city covers an area of ​​10 million square kilometers. The population gathering area is only a few thousand square kilometers, and the rest is virgin forest? It would be appropriate to change the territory of Xuan Kingdom to 1.6 Billion square kilometers. Although the population density is not high, it is not that outrageous.

The group members were practicing hard there and trying to find ways to improve themselves. The protagonist just copied the songs and sold them for 50,000 yuan, and even asked the group members to sell them together. Are we here to see this? If I want to read this type of article, I won't look for entertainment articles, but will come to you?

To put it bluntly, it's all heaven. The world of your protagonist is just an egg, and it's not the mature world of other works. What's the point of suppressing your own qigong and world view all the way when you create a ball? Still selling songs? ? ? Then write several songs. At the same time, Ye Fan and Fang Han began to study the Nine Secrets and Five Emperors' magical powers. Are you selling songs? ? ? All in all, all in all, I can't feel the meaning of the existence of the protagonist's world at all, and the things written are all boring things The resources are provided by others, and the system is based on the magical powers of the Five Emperors and Great Demons The system you have set up in this world is very stressful. If you cannot bring out the top things, they are definitely not as good as those of the Five Emperors and Great Demons. You are talking about Qigong. Does it make sense? The original is a complete mess, it's really better to go to one world after another to live out the plot In the early stage, everyone has to choose one of the five emperors, what about later? What is the significance of Luo Feng and Xiao Yan's existence? They already grow in the early stages, so what's the point of not letting them grow quickly? In the early stage, Ye Fan was responsible for the main combat power and resources, and Fang Han relied on his skills Originally, these two values ​​​​were higher than the two in the early stage. Ye Fan drove the Dacheng Holy Body Mecha, and you, Xiao Yan, can't take off with fighting spirit into wings Just jump and read, just look at Ye Fan and part of Fang Sai, the rest has no meaning at all Really, this book can be read as a fan of Zhe Tian and Yongsheng, the rest is shit.

I want to apply for a refund. I think all articles on Qidian. Com should be refunded.

If you don't want to write, then don't write. If this continues, everyone will be upset if they look at it.

I think the government should intervene. We have actually paid real money to watch the authors on these online writing platforms, and they are not paying for it for free, and they are constantly delaying and discontinuing updates. Tmd I'm the one paying. If I want to watch it, it depends on his mood.

My evaluation is not as good as these two books

I have never seen anyone so speechless. It was said to be a chat group for all heavens, but basically everyone stayed in Zhetian. The main world is boring as hell. The other group members were extremely stressed. Then except for the first wave of recruitment, no new people came, and it was said to be a chat group for the heavens. Those who didn't know better thought it was a Zhetian fan who could occasionally travel through several worlds. And I don't do anything by traveling to the past. I don't even know what the use is.