Zhe Tian: to Find Treasures, Start with the Immortal Queen!

Man, the beauty who covers the sky is much prettier than Li Xiaoman. Why do you have this idea? Li Xiaoman's first boyfriend on earth is Ye Heizi, and his second boyfriend is Sheep Devil. Even if Ye Heizi doesn't take first blood, this romantic Sheep Devil should probably be accepted. The earth is full of flowers and willows, and I can't kill the woman who has two boyfriends. I can still keep the first time 😅😅

Author, don't write too much

I completely don't understand why Li Xiaoman and Lin Jia were included. Not only did these two people not help the protagonist in any way, but they also wasted the resources in the protagonist's hands, and their appearance was just like that. Why did you collect it? If you spend the resources given to them on yourself, you will have already broken through the fourth level of perfection, and you will not just break through the fourth level and one or two heavens.

Author: The best weapon is a tower. Various weapons can be derived from the tower. There are nine weapons on the ninth floor, or it can be the ancient ax to open the sky. When separated, it can be a bell, a picture, a flag, etc., And together it is the ax to open the sky.

Of those women on earth, no matter who they are, I don't think they are suitable to be the first wife. On the one hand, their qualifications are average and they have little background, so there is little they can do to help the protagonist. On the other hand, it would be too troublesome to change their concept of monogamy. After all, I remember that each of them was more proud than the other at the beginning. Moreover, the temperament and beauty of these women are not the top ones in Beidou at all. They are probably not even top-notch.

It's so whimsical, and the protagonist is not a Holy Body Taoist, why should Yaochi accept you as the Holy Son? Why do you have such a big face?

There are so many female nuns, why Li Xiaoman?

Madonna type protagonist? Pretending to be a B stream?

Lin Jia can still accept it. Even if she is not as good as those saintly goddesses, she is still the beauty of the class. Li Xiaoman's appearance is obviously not as good as Lin Jia according to the description, and even if her second boyfriend is fake, no one will think that Ye Fan has not had a relationship with her in college, right? College student! You are at an age when you want to take advantage of your girlfriend anytime, anywhere, and Ye Fan's character is not a vegetarian in any way. If you write a beauty of Yan Ruyu's level, some people may accept it secondhand. In an environment like Zhetian where there are so many beauties and there is no shortage of brilliant writers, you chose Li Xiaoman, who is better than others in every aspect, which shows that you are not lovable.

I was speechless after reading the beginning. The original work was not sorted out clearly and I just followed the trend. The complete Dao Jing Wheel and Sea Scroll is not common in Beidou. Ye Fan first came into contact with the fragments, and later obtained the complete volume of Tomb of the Demon Emperor.

Li Xiaoman is not easy to clean up. Just like Ye Fan's golden child, she abandoned Ye Fan to study abroad. She also found a few European Japanese boyfriends. When she got to Beidou, she kicked Hua Yunfei as the main one and betrayed all her classmates. There were originally more than 10 classmates left and all were sold by her. In the end, not many survived. You can like this kind of woman. In the original book, 30 classmates finally arrived at Beidou 18 In the end, only 5 of the 9 were tricked by her. This kind of woman is very selfish. She sells her teammates and abandons you. You are a slut with a gun behind your back. She doesn't tell you anything and eats the inside and outside. In the end, she didn't kill Ye Fan in the ancient restricted area.

You dare to take the heaven-defying, mother-qi source of all things, but that was given to Ye Fan by a ruthless person, there is no doubt about it in the studio.

Overall, it's good, but some places are really weird. For example, a monk whose body has been strengthened by the essence and blood of the Quasi-Emperor can only jump a few centimeters after being sealed in the sea of ​​suffering. A few mineral water bottles and three people drinking water can drink half of a one-meter-square pool. Good guy, 500 liters of water, half a ton! The combined weight of the three of them is not half that, right?