Mortal Cultivation: Wolf and Master Mulan

How can I get this book on the shelves? It feels like the pearl is covered in dust.

Writing this kind of fan fiction generally involves traveling through time. No one can read it when writing about indigenous people, and there is no sense of empathy. Moreover, writing about indigenous people also requires a certain amount of writing skills, and the writing style is not strong enough. Too difficult

The writing is very good, better than most of the fans from Qidian.

The author generates electricity for love, vote.

Do you just love practicing penwriting? I've been reading too many fan fictions recently, and I found this book by the author. I'll read it when I have time. Come on.

Support the author. Come on, author, you must not be a eunuch.

Damn, it's not as good as the original work by Han Liqiang. You wrote a stupid story, and you even abused the protagonist!

Add the words "Mortal" and "Han Li" to the introduction, and then you can search for keywords.

Since the protagonist's master died, his mind went blank, his whole body was weak, he was frightened, etc., Etc., Etc., Etc. Happened too frequently, and his mood suddenly became worse.

Nice writing. Keep it up.

I even checked your protagonist's name on Baidu, otherwise I wouldn't know how to pronounce it. Fortunately, immortal cultivators don't have to go to school, otherwise I would be slower than others in writing the name every time I take the exam.

Writing a book is not easy, so stay with me!

Come on, author, there must be a perfect ending. Is the protagonist a person who cultivates both body and mind, or only the physical body?

It's pretty good, but there are a lot of details that are skimmed over. But if the details are too slow, I guess there will be a lot of people who want to quit in the first section. It may also be because the protagonist Tianlinggen Yuanying's help is so smooth that he doesn't need to think about it so much. I hope to write out the protagonist's plan for his own cultivation. So far, I haven't seen a single difficulty in the second section. The only two battle scenes that have difficulty are The plot can't reflect the battle of wits and courage, the fighting method is there, but it's not intense enough. Even if you are exhausted, you can only understand it after reading this word. It is like the description of the passionate novel. The battle in Mortal can be described in four words. It is to simplify the four words of fierceness. There is no need to pretend and it can't be too bland. Of course, it is just a personal opinion and for reference only. In short, the overall feeling given to me so far is that it is too bland and smooth, and it is difficult to catch people.

It's great, really. Please open another one.

Isn't this well written? Why does it get so much traffic?

Big cheers for the author! ! ! Really beautiful😭😭

Aboriginal people don't want to read it, but to be honest, the author's quality is still good. Let's start a book where the protagonist travels through time. Otherwise, I won't have a sense of immersion and it will be difficult to read.

I think it's much better than those mindless fan fictions.

Since you are aboriginal, why should you change the plot? What can you use to compete with model workers?

It wasn't that good before, but it got better after Yuanying returned to Mulan

In fact, it can be re-opened without getting recommendations and contracts. It feels like a good idea. This book is not promoted at all. I can't find it unless I search hard.

The anchor must update it

To change the title of the book, I searched Tiannan and scrolled very far down to find it. Other keywords were basically unsearchable. It can be seen that the traffic pool of this book has bottomed out.

I advised the host to change his name because I specifically searched for Master Mulan.

I'm here again, let's encourage each other!

Very well written👍

Does the author plan to write about the fairy world?