From Menial Daoist Boy to True Lord of Ten Thousand Arts

It's a gangster-themed cultivation story, already incredibly padded before even being released. After dozens of chapters, only one minor villain has died. The plot is still unresolved, the original protagonist's Daoist partner's storyline is definitely going to be incredibly drawn out. The protagonist's brothers, Daoist partner, and best friend's storylines will have more development.

No, this young disciple seems much freer than the inner disciples in other novels. He can do whatever he wants, and he can do whatever he wants with his work. No wonder he doesn't get any basic cultivation techniques.

It's alright, nothing too serious, but the plot is pretty predictable. There's a fisheries association for selling fish, and a herbal association for selling herbs. If you sell a little more, people come knocking, asking how you got so many herbs.

It's infuriating to read. No Qi cultivation techniques and no ability to make a little money? How are you going to manage to balance this early-stage writing style later? I find books like this, where all sorts of problems arise from the very beginning, so annoying. Can't you just start with a regular storyline?

He's a chatterbox, having lived two lives, and still has a knack for making mistakes, forgetting this and that. He knows dead fish have less spiritual energy and are worth half the price, yet he doesn't even bring a bucket; he'll grab water wherever he can.

Obtaining Qi cultivation techniques is too difficult. It's one thing to struggle with other resources, but if even the most basic Qi cultivation technique is this hard to acquire, what's the point? Does an entry-level exam really have to be this difficult? It's time-consuming, laborious, and even exhausting.

Bro, keep writing! I've already negotiated with a platform to acquire your audiobook rights. I'll give you a boost. After you reach chapter 100, I'll start producing the audiobook version. Keep it up, I believe in you! Don't let it end badly!

Chapter Seven: The protagonist is still just a mortal, yet he's already buying a protective cultivation technique? He hasn't even practiced Qi cultivation yet, not even drawn Qi into his body. Without Qi in his body, how can he condense water into a sword? You don't even have a Dao, so what kind of Dao are you protecting? This is putting the cart before the horse.

The cultivation novel is written like a gangster story, and it's so clichéd. Everyone wants to mess with the protagonist. Undeniably, these villains push the protagonist forward and drive the story, but it's just so predictable and tiresome. Take the Spirit Fishing Guild, for example.

Actually, I didn't even want to read it after seeing the title and synopsis. These kinds of articles are like those studio-style, low-brow novels, with descriptions of progress from one thing to another and proficiency panels, like "Lightness Technique Evolution Void Teleportation" and so on. The names are long, but they sound really corny.