From a Handyman, a Taoist Boy, to a True King of All Dharma

In fact, when I saw the title and introduction of the book, I didn't want to read it at first. This type is like the white text of the studio's routines, from what to what and proficiency panel, what light body technique evolves, void moves, Babalala, the name is quite long, but it looks very tacky. Those who often read new fairy tale and fantasy books will probably have seen a lot of them. The plots are mostly the same and cliche. The main reason is that the writing is very plain and there is no sense of substitution. I read the fairy tales just for the purpose of substitution. This book feels very similar to the one I liked very much before. However, the book is getting more and more sluggish and seems like I can't continue writing it. I'll keep it for now. The Furnace and this book contain the author's own ideas and details. Unlike many routines written by Xiaobai, it is just about practicing Qi and building foundation pills. When it comes to practicing qi and looking for foundation-building pills or foundation-building spiritual objects, the rest of the plot of cultivation and growth is actually the same template. Here are some plots with the supporting characters of casual cultivators. There, as soon as they get out of the market and are robbed, the cultivators make their first pot of gold. They first learn how to make talismans and then make alchemy to make money. There are little secrets at auctions and the like. It's boring to death. There are no real training details. I really like the author's description of the nature of mana. Before mana, there is true energy, spiritual energy, inner strength, essence, etc. What are the differences in each stage, and the various ways to condense mana, etc., It is very fairy-like. Before the golden elixir, it is not simply about practicing Qi and building the foundation. There are also stages such as opening the pulse, transcending the world, purifying the body, condensing the aperture, condensing evil spirits and refining the Gang, which are great. The author can write about how to cultivate in different realms. How to open the pulse, how to practice it, what happens to the mana after opening it, etc., Whether the pulse is high or medium or low. To put it simply, each realm has its own theory and practice. It's very cool, and it's very immersive. The Xiaobai article is about finding a foundation-building pill to build a foundation at the 9th or 12th level of Qi training. There is no more detailed description. The rest is the same old-fashioned plot as in daily life. The name of the protagonist is changed and the shell is changed. I really like those theories of cultivating immortals, such as the harmony between dragon and tiger, the separation of lead and mercury, the yin and yang and the five elements, the two clear and turbid qi, the earth evil and the heavenly gang, the golden lotus planted in the fire of turtles and snakes, the yellow buds planted in the Huangting Palace, etc. These details are the flavor of the fairy tales. The books that I have been following recently are Furnace, Xianyang, Shiwu Feihua and this book. My favorite old books are like Taihao and Yusha. However, there are some minor pitfalls in the early stages of this book. I hope the author will be careful not to make the supporting characters too imbecile. It's normal to have some plots that are cliche. For example, Secret Realm is found in many works. You can't abandon it just for the sake of innovation, right? The main thing is that the writing should pay more attention to details. The supporting characters should not be too stupid. The villains will not care about anything and only focus on the protagonist. The advancement of the plot depends entirely on the conflict between the villains. It's normal for a villain to target the protagonist. Just write it in a more reasonable and normal way and not be so deliberately awkward.

It can't go far, the underworld cultivates immortality, it's just a waste of money before it's released on the shelves, and a villain and enemy villain died after a few dozen chapters 😒😒 The story unfolds, the spirit fish meeting has not been solved at present, the follow-up of the story of the original Taoist couple will definitely be a bad one, after the plot of the protagonist's brother Taoist couple and best friend Continuing, I offended a brainless, petty and jealous villain when I went on a mission down the mountain. One of the two girls was ready to make friends, and the other was rolling her eyes and couldn't hold it in. So far, apart from having an outsider status, she is still nothing. They all look down on the protagonist 😒😒

No, why do you, a Taoist boy, feel that you have more freedom than the inner disciples in other novels? You can do whatever you want, and you can do whatever you want at work. No wonder you don't teach some basic skills.

It's quite satisfactory, there are no serious bugs, but the plot basically won't surprise you. There is a fishery association for selling fish, and there is an herb association for selling medicinal herbs. If you sell more, someone will come to your door and ask you how you got so many medicinal herbs. To be honest, if fish and medicinal herbs were so profitable, ordinary people would have wiped out the medicinal herbs in this mountain long ago, and they are almost the same as the fish in the lake. And to be honest, has no one studied how to breed them? This is impossible. I just sold a little more fish. On the second day, someone came to collect the protection fee and bought some more herbs. On the third day, someone came to the door to kill me. I know, I know you are selling fish, but I don't know, I thought you were selling white noodles. In short, it is quite satisfactory. I can watch it, but I have no desire to continue reading.

It is too difficult to obtain qigong methods. Forget about the difficulties in obtaining other resources. The most basic qigong qigong methods are so difficult, why should we take an entry examination? Should it be so difficult? It's time-consuming, labor-intensive, and life-consuming, There is also a well-known and decent person, it is so difficult to get started, why is it written like a fourth person? There is also a protagonist, he doesn't care about cultivation, let's not talk about the Spirit Fish Club. Revenge is time-consuming and labor-intensive, and there are a lot of enemies. When the cultivation level is high, you can say a word, or the person who offended the protagonist retreats. It's not like the protagonist's ex-girlfriend. She has determined the cause and effect, and the protagonist has gained benefits and avoided a lot of troubles. Isn't that good? At least I won't trouble you later Also, the writing is too boring I guess in the future, the protagonist goes down the mountain and offends a lot of people. He gives various reasons to kill but doesn't kill them. Wait until the protagonist can fight back and then kill again. Back to the sect, first the so-called ex-girlfriend's suitor comes to kill, and then the ex-girlfriend does it herself. Probably By the way, I want to complain, the writing is really boring.

There are eight verbose words in this article. As a human being, you have to slap your head everywhere, forget this and forget that. When catching fish, you know that the spiritual energy of dead fish is half the price and you don't bring a bucket. You can get water wherever you can.

It makes me angry just looking at it. If you don't practice Qi Dao, you can't make a little fortune. How can you suppress this writing method in the early stage and later on? A book like Shenfan, which begins with various encounters and problems one after another, wouldn't it be possible to carry it out in daily life?

Brother, write well. I have negotiated with a certain platform to get your audio copyright. I will help you. I will start producing audio stories after you have 100 chapters. Come on, I'm optimistic about you, you can't be unfinished.

Chapter 7: The protagonist is still a mortal, why should he buy the Dao-protecting technique first? I haven't practiced Qi yet, I haven't even introduced Qi into my body, and there is no Qi in my body. How do you condense water into a sword? You don't even have the Dao, so why are you protecting a woolly Dao? Putting the cart before the horse.

Xiu Xian is written like a mixed society, and it is very cliched. Everyone has to provoke the protagonist. It is undeniable that these villains promote the progress of the protagonist and the development of the story, but I am tired of seeing it. Let's just talk about the Spiritual Fishing Club. If I were the villain, before I could figure out whether the protagonist was a talent or a magic weapon, I would definitely let you join in in a gentle way. We would catch fish together a few times, and then we would know whether you are more powerful or your baby is more powerful, and then I could decide whether to kill people to seize the treasure or make a fortune together. The designed hammer spirit weapon is also very good. It is also mentioned specifically that it is a one-handed hammer. Brother, the one-handed hammer is not big at all. It is an armor-breaking weapon for immediate combat. When you really succeed in cultivating immortals, it is almost enough to be a hidden weapon. When you have just transformed into a mortal, you use the hammer to defend yourself? It's not long enough, and it's not thick enough. When the hammer is swinging, the middle door is wide open, and I can use my body skills and speed to fuck your armpits, chest and back. What's the point of having so much strength? The author also said that this is to maximize the protagonist's strength. I laughed. Swords, guns, sticks, axes, swords and halberds. How come you are so strong that you can't use them? That's it, farewell

Don't look at it, this guy can read a million words and be a eunuch. He is a professional eunuch.

Except for being a little wordy and the plot being a bit cliche, I like to play the trick of suppressing first and then rising, but everything else is okay.

The protagonist's handyman disciple, why don't you do your daily tasks?

Why on earth would you want to learn a technique that is so difficult? By analogy, you have to work hard until you are 50-60 before you have a chance to study, and you still learn nothing. You don't even have a few consumables. I don't believe that a society that cultivates immortality can develop.

This description of how difficult it is to obtain Qigong techniques is too difficult, right?

The plot is as bad as the people in the furnace, and the routine is as old as the fairy cage😅

This book is okay. There are some flaws, but I can read it.

What's going on? There was no update yesterday? You don't want to be a eunuch. I'm a little scared if you continue to subscribe like this.

This book will not be updated. Can everyone come and support me?

I felt like I couldn't read it until I read it. The "protagonist" has a problem with his outlook on life. The girlfriend who was supported by the protagonist's predecessor dumped him when he started. The support was just a support in life. He practiced Kung Fu by himself. His ex-girlfriend wanted to compensate the protagonist for the sake of cause and effect. The protagonist deliberately hid. Later, the protagonist became more awesome than his ex-girlfriend. Kill her directly. As for that, in real life, you will be stunned by the punching. The spirit fish will prevent the protagonist from making money, threaten the protagonist from leaving the market, and prevent the protagonist from practicing. In the end, when the protagonist is capable, he will treat it as if nothing happened. Some book friends said this and others said that the Holy Mother, I want to say that if you read too many books like this, you will lose your basic rational judgment ability.

It can be seen that the author is a novice He has made good efforts in some places, but not so much in others.

So far, it's pretty good. It's a good guide. The author will work hard to update it.