Immortal Life Begins with the Soul Night Tour

First of all, the author's writing style is good, and Golden Finger is pretty good, but the arrangement of the opening conflict is a bit unsatisfactory. . I can't say it's poisonous, it just looks a bit awkward.

There was indeed a problem with that quota, and someone was suspected of taking money from the yard (the reason for suspicion was that otherwise the money would come from to buy paintings and give gifts). Can't the protagonist just say that the family is being used as something when rebutting? The painting was originally bought with used items, but it had to cause conflict. When I had to go get the money, I happened to be seen by a fellow student who would have a conflict later. To sum up, the plot is a bit cliche? The conflict is a bit deliberate. And a reminder for those who haven't read it yet: You can also know the author's writing tendencies (or habits) by looking at the chapter names. The author at least doesn't know how to name chapters (this is just my personal opinion)

Forcibly create loopholes to lower the protagonist's IQ and give people a clue. Then conflicts arise. How did you arrange this illogical plot? With various guesses, it can be concluded that the protagonist did it, and the protagonist just happened to have dirty hands and feet?

Why are the protagonists of many authors obviously time-travelers, but as soon as they arrive in another world, they completely forget all their learning achievements, experiences, and insights on earth? So what's the point of setting the protagonist to be a time traveler? I am not saying that you should be scientific, but the outlook on life, values, and methods of understanding and analyzing all things developed on earth are the greatest wealth of modern people, and they are very useful even in other worlds. For example, the various Buddhist, Taoist and Confucian classics that are common to modern people, such as the object of visualization in this article, must be the Great Ishvara Buddha? Isn't Sanqing okay? Can't Nuwa do it? Is it right to say that the Great Buddha is supreme?

Three cards defeated 😒

The writing and plot are okay, with some flaws, but overall I still recommend it. It's much better than most of the cookie-cutter martial arts books nowadays. It's really difficult to use the Yangshen cultivation system.

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down, work hard and encourage each other 😁

The realm is a bit confusing, so it's best to explain it separately.

When it comes to cultivating the Tao, write about it as if you were practicing Taoism. Don't write about how you turned around to become an immortal. Don't write about things like the Fireball Technique.

The previous conflict was not well prepared, otherwise there would have been better results.

Nothing is written by coincidence, so various chances and coincidences contribute to the growth of the protagonist. It is well written and can be regarded as a small piece of food. You can read it with confidence.

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