Endless Star Sign

It's a very satisfying first book. The protagonist kills when he needs to. He likes to crush people with combat power and is overwhelming. The supporting characters are basically above the line in IQ. The rhythm is also good. The author should py it with other writers and recommend it through more linkages. It's a pity that it was buried. The title of the book is also a bit strange.

After the consciousness is uploaded, you can't even die. The nightmares are layer upon layer, like the eighteen levels of hell. Even your thoughts are not free and can be modified at will. Artificial intelligence is the way of heaven, and the authority dog is the saint of heaven, who can control people's identities at will. , Destiny, life and death, six reincarnations, today we are husband and wife, the day after tomorrow we will be pets and masters, tomorrow we will be big brothers. I don't even know that the brain in the vat, unless it is righteous and orderly, is the evil way in the tomb of the gods, or the world-destroying saint in the novel of the gods. When gods fight, mortals suffer. In the virtual world, all living beings are used as fuel, and the soul is the medicinal material of the soul.

There are a few points that are clearly separated from the overall style. As I said before, I am a seeker of truth, but when I saw that Catwoman, I just kept getting excited. It was outrageous. That point in particular was because your grandma was hospitalized? It's so powerful, buddy There is also a plug-in that someone else has and copied the protagonist's skills. Later he was scolded so much that he couldn't stand it, and then he hesitated and said something that was not there Then the weird copy said something that was reviewed and written down as shit.

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I suggest that the supporting character named Su die as soon as possible. In this kind of invincible novel, if a person who completes the task and can copy the protagonist's skills at no cost appears, it is discouraging readers. Not to mention the ending and the final feeling of satisfaction of the supporting character, it is very fragmented to read. The reason is that the golden finger you gave to the supporting character is too big.

The writing of the first copy is a bit disappointing. The protagonist is not only being plotted but also being plotted successfully. It seems that the protagonist is like a clown.

After writing nearly a hundred chapters of the ascetic semi-invincible writing method to screen out this kind of readers, why is there another cat girl out of nowhere, and the characters are so fragmented? Moreover, the text description also puts the protagonist in an unflattering and greasy position.

It is well written, and I have a feeling when looking at the social structure of the overworld. It is very similar to the overworld in "Starry Sky Professional" by Wenzhaogong that I was following at the same time. However, Wenzhaogong selectively gave up the expansion of the overworld in the later period, and mainly followed the cultivation-law-dao route. I praise the author for making the main world more exciting and full.

Sixty chapters of the first dungeon have been written, but the reality has not yet unfolded. Then the first dungeon is very good, and I still feel a big gap when I come back. In addition, the first dungeon was miscalculated. If I continue to write like this, the subsequent dungeons will take who knows how long, and then the reality will still advance slowly. There may be fewer people reading it.

After a casual look, I found that there are no mechas in the first seventy chapters. The main descriptions in the following chapters are martial arts, which is basically a variant of martial arts. Mechas are just equipment. The current content has nothing to do with the introduction.

I wrote a lot of chapters for the live broadcast hosted by the male protagonist, especially the chapter where Xu Zhi made all the wrong bets after it was released. Except for water, it has no effect on advancing the plot.

The writing is a bit putting the cart before the horse. The dungeon is much more interesting than the main world. Once the dungeon is finished, the book will be finished.

I've seen more than thirty chapters, where is the mecha? What about technology? It's just a bunch of reckless men boxing, and I didn't see any of the mecha technology mentioned in the introduction. It's just a very traditional high martial arts style, nothing outstanding.

When you open a new book of the same genre, remember to say "brother"

I don't know why I wrote this Catwoman to attract the old perverts? Speechless

When reading this book, you have to get used to the author's operation of jumping from decades to a hundred years. For example, you start practicing Qi, then reach the peak of Qi training ten years later, then break through, find something to do, solve the problem, continue twenty years later, break through again, find something to do, break through again fifty years later, stand on top of the world a hundred years later, and finally find a reason to exit. Okay, let's move on to the next world.

The dungeon has been around for too long, and it's too powerful. I'll still be a little Karami when I go back.

Silver-haired cub

It's beautifully written, but is your first copy too long? You can refer to the copy length of Wenzhao Gong's Lord of Shenxiu. It's already about sixty chapters since you finished writing your first copy.

Point 1: The author definitely did not perfect the main world when opening the book, and as a result, the subconscious copy was stretched. The plot of the main world after returning can also be seen. In addition to upgrading, it is still upgrading, and there are some places where readers like me know that the plot can be expanded, but I have just brushed it off. Boring training can fill several chapters. The second point is to give cheats to supporting characters and even passers-by. This is simply the way to write group portraits. Everyone knows how unpopular group portraits are. Point 3: I have read the author's last book, and I feel that the author's advantage is that he is good at writing emotional dramas, but this book is completely the opposite. There is no emotional drama at all. He has completely lost his advantage and driven away the readers accumulated in the previous book.

The so-called adjustments by the author such as Cat Girl and Black Emperor directly destroy the overall atmosphere of this book. The plot of the reporting system holder is even more speechless. When the nature is so different, they dare to provoke. I don't see any evidence for the protagonist Why no one doubts the protagonist's ability to advance by leaps and bounds, and why does Skynet not invade privacy? After reading the introduction, I thought the protagonist was neutral, but he turns out to be a human supremacist Does the main theme shown in the introduction, mecha, account for more than 10% of your book?

Let's read when the author writes about Su Hui's feeling better

When I saw the head teacher, I... The author must be a middle school student.

Good looking, love to see more

It's pretty cool, the martial arts + mecha are interesting, and the writing is also good, but it's just a little bit of a hit. It would be nice if the author could restrain the spirit of the hit a little bit.

If the author writes this kind of book, you can read "Huang Ting Taoist" and other books by the author. Although they are all unfinished, the plot is still very interesting.

There is no need to watch it after the first copy is over.

The author also said before that this dungeon was conceived for a long time, but was changed due to review reasons. I don't know if this is the reason. The latest dungeon is simply not the same as the previous rhythm. Whether it is the development route after entering the new world or the characterization of the protagonist, it made me extremely uncomfortable to read it. It is a difficult book to read.

According to reading detection, it belongs to AI text, avoid pitfalls

I can't understand why the mecha chose a death knight when the protagonist switched to a red dragon heart and practiced furnace-type martial arts at the same time. The whole ice flow was completely mismatched.